Saga We are back in control (A songfic)

Sent to the islands to secure what is ours! Marching
ashore in the cover of night! Hide until dawn and attack in the twilight!
Shake them awake with the thunder of Guns!!!

Selintly sneaking up on a small republic outpost a group of 500 battle droids prepare to attack they wait for their orders.
They can be heard loading their weapons as the dawn nears but they wait till twilight to launch their ambush. Then as one they fire and the small clearing as it was during the first few seconds of the attack would put hell to shame. blasters fire and gernades are thrown. A commander tries to rally his unit to battle only to meet his end by a Super battle droid blaster...

Orders form the iron maiden, get the islands back, failure will not be accepted
, call for artilly strike, launch attack.

As the flames roar about the base the battle wages on it seemed as though the republic would win...then the artilly opened u 100 HAG tanks opened fire and then all hell broke loose...400 battle droids that were held in reserve charged form the forset blasters firing as the republic flag caught fire and the base commander went down with his tower....

We are back in control, force them to surrender, take what is ours, restore law and order,
back in control, push them further out to sea, Falklands in our hands, back under british reign!!!!

The battle goes one the remaining clone troopers were fighting for their life hiding in the rubble...blaster shots were everywere HAGs still pounded the base the clones prepare for their final charge as the flag is lowered and CIS flag is raised by a squad of B2 battle droids that had fought their way to to the middle of the base.....

Push them back further and out of the islands. into our fleet that will stop there retreat..
mark their poistens and call in the airforce harrier and vulcan strike at our command!!!

as the remaining clone pull back 300 droid starfighters close in....and fire their missles....at 5:45 AM outpost 4 on the planet dantooine fell...

what do you think good,bad or okay?