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Before - Legends Well that's new (Siri discovers she has an annoying crush on a certain male Jedi)*CH 3!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by SiriKenobi12, Jul 19, 2005.

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  1. SiriKenobi12

    SiriKenobi12 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Wow thank you so much for all the reviews! I'm sorry it ended too, but I didn't want to drag it out...I may be able to squeeze something else out of it.
     
  2. TRADMIC

    TRADMIC Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jul 24, 2005
    Only found the story now, so got to read it all the way through...
    I loved it

    Liked the dreaming and daydreaming (waterfalls/shower - someone splash water on the girl)

    Liked the dialog of the voices in her head - oh, the battle!
    (Glad the two consented that Obi was hotter than Xan..[face_batting] )

    And doesn't it figure, just when you thought you had a grip, in walks your crush with "lack of clothing" - and a friend to point it out to you!
    Aw, Garen [face_talk_hand]

    Geez, poor Siri

    Thank you SiriKenobi12 for furthering my mission/pledge to disrobe all jedi....[face_devil]


     
  3. moonwashedrose

    moonwashedrose Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 14, 2005
    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    This was really funny! Especially the day dreaming... [face_laugh]

    Loved it! [face_dancing]
     
  4. roguegirl

    roguegirl Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 29, 2001
    Nice,keep going.I'll be waiting for the next one.1 questions:what ever happened to Siri and Bant when we last heard about them?
     
  5. SiriKenobi12

    SiriKenobi12 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    POSSIBLE SPOILERS

    I don't want to spoil anything for you but Siri died during the Clone Wars (read the book Secrets of the Jedi) and Bant died during the purge (read Last of the Jedi book #1).
     
  6. Master_Talek

    Master_Talek Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Sep 3, 2005
    They did NOT die.(I wish);)
     
  7. SiriKenobi12

    SiriKenobi12 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I know, I wish too....but he'll be with them in the Force!
     
  8. Senator_Leia73

    Senator_Leia73 Jedi Master star 4

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    Dec 30, 2003
    Sorry it took me so long to get back and review the last chapter. I loved it! Siri's day dreams are perfect and the way Obi helped her with her cut was great! Good job!
     
  9. Katieelessar

    Katieelessar Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Aug 1, 2005
    That was so bittersweet. Awww, I love Siri's little....daydreams. They made me want Obi-Wan more!:_| Great story! Why couldn't they have run off and lived happily ever after? Why????:_|
     
  10. DarthMousche

    DarthMousche Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 16, 2005
    I really thought I already left a comment on this - I must be going crazy in my old age. [face_tired]

    Poor Siri! I like the "visions" you've given her, even if they do end up being frustrating. And Garen's foreplay line is just too funny. [face_laugh]
     
  11. Bastet

    Bastet Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hee hee! I finally got around to reading this, and I loved it! :D

    I loved Siri's daydreams, so funny! [face_laugh] And I loved how Obi ended up shirtless in all of them. ;) =P~

    Thanks for the great story! :D
     
  12. SiriKenobi12

    SiriKenobi12 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Nov 6, 2004
    I haven't checked on this story in a long time, thank you for all the reviews...I'm thinking of doing a companion piece to this but with Obi-Wan's side...we'll see though.
     
  13. princess_of_naboo

    princess_of_naboo Jedi Master star 4

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    Awesome story! Loved how you teased us with the dream parts.
     
  14. Kestrel_Kenobi

    Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 26, 2005
    Just found this! Loved it, the daydreams were so funny.:D

    Great job, well done.
     
  15. Mystralgurl

    Mystralgurl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 9, 2004
    *tries to stop hysterical laughter* I think that I need to get more sleep... that was hilarious!
     
  16. PadawanKaterina

    PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight star 2

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    =P~ Please do! (And if you do would you PM me? [face_praying])
     
  17. usher-lover

    usher-lover Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jul 20, 2005
    [face_laugh] that was a great story! i wish i hadn't ended. please write a follow-up story, and if u have a PM list, please add me![face_praying]
     
  18. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 26, 2005
    This was a truly beautiful piece.Great Job!
     
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