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Beyond - Legends What About Now? L/M. One-shot!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Feb 10, 2013.

  1. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost star 7

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    Aug 31, 2004
    Title: What about Now? by Jade_eyes. Borrowing, for fun.

    ~~~~~

    "They just hang on your every word!!!" Mara huffed about the latest batch of Jedi lady trainees. "That's why I don't hang around longer than necessary."

    "They're just eager to learn." Luke objected.

    Mara scoffed. "They're enjoying the ... view." Her eyes lingered suggestively.

    Luke flushed, once he took her meaning.

    He also took in Mara's flashing emerald eyes & thought she had never looked more beautiful... She was biting her lip, which made him want to kiss her ... but that was nothing unusual. He also wanted to run his hands through that sunset cascade.

    "Okay," He said slowly, "I know we're friends, but if I didn't know better, I'd think you were jealous?"

    Mara attempted a laugh. "Who? Me? Of what?"

    Their eyes held for several suspended seconds.

    "Krell, Luke, you ... sometimes make me feel all tangled up inside."

    Luke grinned. He didn't want to leave anything to chance or regret. The only thing that was certain was today, this moment.

    So, before he could think he was making a potentially fatal blunder, he kissed her.

    She didn't slap him, or shoot him, she actually kissed back!!! [face_dancing] Very enthusiastically, too.

    After a long breathless moment, Luke realized that'd been the best move he had made in his life.

    :D

    Fin

    ++++++

    Squee! [face_love]
     
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  2. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Force Ghost star 5

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    Nov 1, 2004
    Yeah...that was a pretty good move...WHY DID IT TAKE YOU TEN YEARS TO DO IT IN THE PROFICS!?!?!

    LOL! Very nice!
     
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  3. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Mara was speechless... :D [:D] Way to go Farmboy!
     
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  4. Briannakin

    Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic & Costuming/Props Manager star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    Feb 25, 2010
    Way to go farmboy :D
     
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  5. Demendora

    Demendora Jedi Knight star 2

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    Apr 9, 2010
    Of course ladies are looking! Good job, farmboy! Now show her the true power of the Force:D:p[face_devil]
     
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  6. lukemaraben

    lukemaraben Jedi Knight star 1

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    Sep 2, 2012
    Mara is a little jealous:D ... And way to go Luke!!!
     
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  7. mayo_durron_666

    mayo_durron_666 Jedi Master star 1

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    Nov 26, 2005
    Awwwwwwwww![face_love]:D
    Too adorable!;)
     
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  8. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Master star 4

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    May 25, 2005
    I'd be one of the drooling girls. WHAT?? ;) Sweet, as always. [face_love]
     
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  9. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Backpacking One Pack a Day Mod of New Films star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    Sep 16, 2005
    :)

    Guided by the Force? Who cares. It worked.
     
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  10. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Aug 21, 2006
    That worked really nice for Luke and Mara
     
  11. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 23, 2012
    Thank you! See why wouldn't you have done that..ooh sooner. Instead of realizing it 5 years later! sighs

    I'm with Ginchy on this one. I have no doubt he does have female Jedi admirers..
     
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  12. smash128

    smash128 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 9, 2008
    Now if you were writing profic, I'd bet you have Luke and Mara get together in an instant instead of taking a decade to do so huh :p? Good job :)
     
  13. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    Dec 25, 2013
    This is really sweet and I love that you had Luke step up and take action.
     
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