Beyond What About Now? L/M. One-shot!

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  1. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Title: What about Now? by Jade_eyes. Borrowing, for fun.

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    "They just hang on your every word!!!" Mara huffed about the latest batch of Jedi lady trainees. "That's why I don't hang around longer than necessary."

    "They're just eager to learn." Luke objected.

    Mara scoffed. "They're enjoying the ... view." Her eyes lingered suggestively.

    Luke flushed, once he took her meaning.

    He also took in Mara's flashing emerald eyes & thought she had never looked more beautiful... She was biting her lip, which made him want to kiss her ... but that was nothing unusual. He also wanted to run his hands through that sunset cascade.

    "Okay," He said slowly, "I know we're friends, but if I didn't know better, I'd think you were jealous?"

    Mara attempted a laugh. "Who? Me? Of what?"

    Their eyes held for several suspended seconds.

    "Krell, Luke, you ... sometimes make me feel all tangled up inside."

    Luke grinned. He didn't want to leave anything to chance or regret. The only thing that was certain was today, this moment.

    So, before he could think he was making a potentially fatal blunder, he kissed her.

    She didn't slap him, or shoot him, she actually kissed back!!! [face_dancing] Very enthusiastically, too.

    After a long breathless moment, Luke realized that'd been the best move he had made in his life.

    :D

    Fin

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    Squee! [face_love]
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  2. Jedi_Lover Chosen One

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    Nov 1, 2004
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    Yeah...that was a pretty good move...WHY DID IT TAKE YOU TEN YEARS TO DO IT IN THE PROFICS!?!?!

    LOL! Very nice!
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  3. Hazel Force Ghost

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    Nov 9, 2010
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    Mara was speechless... :D [:D] Way to go Farmboy!
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  4. Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic Manager

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    Way to go farmboy :D
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  5. Demendora Force Ghost

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    Apr 9, 2010
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    Of course ladies are looking! Good job, farmboy! Now show her the true power of the Force:D:p[face_devil]
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  6. lukemaraben Jedi Master

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    Sep 2, 2012
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    Mara is a little jealous:D ... And way to go Luke!!!
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  7. mayo_durron_666 Force Ghost

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    Nov 26, 2005
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    Awwwwwwwww![face_love]:D
    Too adorable!;)
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  8. ginchy Force Ghost

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    May 25, 2005
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    I'd be one of the drooling girls. WHAT?? ;) Sweet, as always. [face_love]
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  9. Valairy Scot Chosen One

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    Sep 16, 2005
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    :)

    Guided by the Force? Who cares. It worked.
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  10. earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One

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    Aug 21, 2006
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    That worked really nice for Luke and Mara
  11. EmeraldJediFire Force Ghost

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    Feb 23, 2012
    star 4
    Thank you! See why wouldn't you have done that..ooh sooner. Instead of realizing it 5 years later! sighs

    I'm with Ginchy on this one. I have no doubt he does have female Jedi admirers..
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  12. smash128 Jedi Master

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    Feb 9, 2008
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    Now if you were writing profic, I'd bet you have Luke and Mara get together in an instant instead of taking a decade to do so huh :p? Good job :)
  13. Gemma Jedi Grand Master

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    Dec 25, 2013
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    This is really sweet and I love that you had Luke step up and take action.
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