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Saga What Choice Remains (OT, V/M/P/L, Complete) by rhonderoo & Jedi Trace *Thanks to the readers!*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jedi Trace, Jul 1, 2004.

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  1. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    WOW! I finally caught the end of this one and you did a great job! BRAVO! :D

    Superb ending to a wonderful story!
     
  2. Jedi Trace

    Jedi Trace Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Darth_Suzi: Thank you! We're so glad you enjoyed the story. :) (On a personal note, I liked the motivation in the epilogue better than the "you will kill Luke Skywalker" thing, too. ;))

    Sabe126: Thanks! I know, rhonderoo did a wonderful job showing the internal progression of Vader's 'turning'. And thanks about the epilogue. That part practically wrote itself and I'm so glad to hear it 'worked'. :)

    VaderLVR: Thank you so much! :D



     
  3. kristeh

    kristeh Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Hi, Trace and rhonderoo,

    What a lovely, perfect (yet heartbreaking) ending! I had tears in my eyes reading it. Although I had kind of hoped for a happier ending for Vader/Anakin (you know I adore "Anakin survives" stories), you did a fantastic job of weaving your story into the canon version.

    I especially love the epilogue because you let us know Mara's fate and I, too, think it's a more believable reason for her to desire vengeance against Luke.

    I do hope you'll both write lots more because I've really enjoyed this one! :)

    Kristeh
     
  4. Qui-Gon Tim

    Qui-Gon Tim Memphis, TN FanForce Chapter Rep star 5

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    Kristeh: Yeah, it's a lot more believable than Zahn's "YOU MUST KILL LUKE SKYWALKER" message to Mara in HTTE. Then he wrote himself into a corner and we end up with clones. I like Zahn, don't get me wrong, but I like this a lot better. It's much more plausible.

    Any way we can make this canon? :)
     
  5. LadyZ

    LadyZ Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Fantastic story! I loved it so much! Especially liked the description of the Vader-Mara relationship, and I must tell you write the Sith very well :)

    I agree it was very believable, realistic.

    And though I also wished to see a different ending ( ;) simply don't like when Lord Vader dies), you did an awesome job tiding EU and OT together!

     
  6. rhonderoo_and_Trace

    rhonderoo_and_Trace Jedi Youngling star 1

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    kristeh: Thank you so much! One of our hopes for this story was/is that people could watch the OT and "see" WCR happening behind the scenes, and we breathe a sigh of relief everytime someone confirms that we accomplished that. :) The ending depressed us, too. (See note below.) ;)

    QGT: Any way we can make this canon?
    [face_laugh] The Thrawn Trilogy Choose Your Own Ending.

    Lady Z: Wow ? thanks! The guys in black are tough and emotionally draining to write - thank you so much for the compliment. :) And about the ending...


    A/N: We are toying with the idea of writing a short AU ?sequel? where Anakin lives post-ROTJ. Nothing angsty. Just for fun. When/if it happens, we will post it in Beyond the Saga under our new combined screen name, and we'll put a link in this thread as well.

    THANKS AGAIN EVERYONE!!
    [:D]
     
  7. Jedi_Chani

    Jedi_Chani Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Aug 30, 2004
    I just found this and loved it. I really hope there is a sequel.
     
  8. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    I'll be there. :)
     
  9. jade51999

    jade51999 Jedi Knight star 5

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    Trace, Rhonderoo Awesome job...

    I'm assuming part of the AU is the whole fact that Mara already knows that Vader was Luke's father right? So what i'm interested in seeing is how she changes her mind in 'your' world. Especially since what changes her mind in TLC about The Last Command was the revelation by the Noghori about Luke's ancestry.

    hmm...

    muses on that for a moment
    later!


     
  10. Jedi Trace

    Jedi Trace Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Jedi_Chani: Thank you! :) (Stay tuned for the "sequel.")

    RebelMom: Cool! :cool:


    P... I mean, jade51999: ;) (from Trace) Good to see you here, my friend. [:D]

    Thank you so much for reading - we're glad you liked it. :)

    So what i'm interested in seeing is how she changes her mind in 'your' world. Especially since what changes her mind in TLC about The Last Command was the revelation by the Noghori about Luke's ancestry.

    (from Trace again) I'm working on that.... [face_blush]




     
  11. jade51999

    jade51999 Jedi Knight star 5

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    LOL

    oooh well as soon as you know..please let me know *grin*

     
  12. rhonderoo

    rhonderoo Former Head Admin star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Thanks for the Summer Angst awards nominations recieved for our little fic. @};- You guys are great!!!
     
  13. rhonderoo_and_Trace

    rhonderoo_and_Trace Jedi Youngling star 1

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    A/N: The AU "Infinities"-style sequel to this story has begun: Circle of Light.

    :D :D
     
  14. Jedi_of_Imladris

    Jedi_of_Imladris Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Great story! I really like how it weaves in with everything from the movies and the Timothy Zahn book. I have enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading your companion fic.
     
  15. Jaina_Solo_15

    Jaina_Solo_15 Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Very cool story. You made Mara as Vader's apprentice very believable. Now I really can't wait for ya'll to update the sequel. :)
     
  16. Falcon

    Falcon Chosen One star 10

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    awesome story :D
     
  17. rhonderoo_and_Trace

    rhonderoo_and_Trace Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jedi of Imladris: Thank you so much! We appreciate that.

    Jaina Solo 15: Thanks! We hope you enjoy the ?sequel.?

    JediFalcon: Thank you!!




     
  18. VaderRox

    VaderRox Jedi Youngling

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    The authors of this story have gone off to tear this ship apart, at my bidding. I, however, was in the neighborhood and agreed to stop by and give you their sincere gratitude for the Reader's Choice Nomination for Best Collaboration nomination. You honor them with your presence.

    [image=http://www.rhonderoo.com/vader.jpg]
     
  19. rhonderoo_and_Trace

    rhonderoo_and_Trace Jedi Youngling star 1

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    We'd like to thank everyone who nommed this story for the Readers' Choice Awards. :D We are very honored. @};-


    Readers' Choice Canon
    --In the Shadow of the Chosen by Solojones
    --Spirit Warriors of Angharad by Ophelia
    --Kneel Before My Master by Gina
    --What Choice Remains by rhonderoo and Jedi Trace
    --Brother Mine, geo3
    --Just Like That by LadyPadme
    --Road to Destiny by Jaina_Solo_15
    --Balance by rhonderoo
    --Fell From the Sky by PresidentKang
    --The Circle Starts to Close by Shaindl


    Readers' Choice Collaborative (Multi-author or round-robin)
    -- Thwarted Fate - The Book of Descent - Vol. I Reihla_RS77_leia-n
    --What Choice Remains by rhonderoo and Jedi Trace
    --Ghost in the Machine by various.
    --Forget Me Not by Sache8 and Melyanna


    Readers' Choice Canon Interpretation, Male
    --Anakin, Changed Lives rhonderoo (2 votes)
    --Luke Skywalker in Turning Into Myself by Shaindl
    --Han Solo in Han Solo - Magician's Assistant by GreatOne. (2 votes)
    --Darth Vader in What Choice Remains by rhonderoo and Jedi Trace
    --Darth Vader in Vader's Quest: Epilogue, by _JM_
    --Darth Vader in A Single Thread by Angel of Darkness (2 votes)
    --Darth Vader in To Kneel Before My Master by Gina (2 votes)
    --Obi-Wan Kenobi, Forget Me Not, Sache8 and Melyanna (2 votes)
    --Anakin Skywalker in Fell From the Sky by PresidentKang (2 votes)
    --Luke in Jedi-2B's Journey of Discovery Book III: Prism
    --Carlist Rieekan in Turning Into Myself by Shaindl
    --Ben Kenobi in The Circle Starts to Close by Shaindl
    --Han Solo, Courting the Darkside, padawan feline
    --Han in Sleight of Hand by kayladie97
    --Darth Vader in Eluding What Will Come by Pallas-Athena


    Readers' Choice Canon Interpretation, Female
    --Leia Organa in Turning Into Myself by Shaindl
    --Mara Jade in What Choice Remains by rhonderoo and Jedi Trace
    -- Sola in Dinner Party by Reihla
    --Sabe, Forget Me Not, Sache8 and Melyanna (2 votes)
    --Mara in Jedi-2B's Journey of Discovery Book III: Prism
    --Siri Tachi in A Passing Affair by obaona
    --Leia Organa, Courting the Darkside, padawan feline(2 votes)
    --Padmé in Turning into Myself by Shaindl


    THANK YOU! [:D]


     
  20. Qui-Gon Tim

    Qui-Gon Tim Memphis, TN FanForce Chapter Rep star 5

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    Congratulations to TRACE and RHONDEROO for winning the WINTER 2004 READERS CHOICE AWARD for BEST COLLABORATIVE for What Choice Remains!


    [face_dancing][face_dancing][face_dancing]
     
  21. rhonderoo_and_Trace

    rhonderoo_and_Trace Jedi Youngling star 1

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    THANK YOU to the wonderful Readers who voted for this labor of love! [:D]

    We were a little nervous about combining Vader/Anakin and Mara/Luke writers/genres and we are thrilled by this award! @};- @};- @};-

    Thank you so much! :D

     
  22. rhonderoo

    rhonderoo Former Head Admin star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    [:D] Happy Lurker Week [:D]

    Welcome to all you lurkers! We'd love to here from you in any of the stories on the boards, whether it be Before the Saga, The Saga, or Beyond the Saga. So if you're out there, please come in and join us! The more the merrier!!! :D


    [image=http://www.rhonderoo.com/together.jpg]

    A big hug from Darth Vader for each of you that comes out! [:D]
     
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