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Beyond - Legends What I Should Have Told You (J/Z Viggie)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Ewok-From-Endor, Oct 2, 2003.

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  1. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    This is the prequel to, The Final Duel. You'll want to read it after this story if you haven't already.

    This one is not as good, I think, but if gives a background for the other. This one is romance/slight humor. The other one is angst all the way.

    THIS SANDBOX IS GL'S, NOT MINE! NO MONEY WAS MADE OFF OF THIS!




    "Zekk?" A voice came from behind him. Zekk sat atop the temple on Yavin IV meditating, and watching the sun set.

    "Jay. Whats up?" Still crosslegged he spun in place.

    "I need to talk with you."

    "Whats on your mind? Kyp?"

    "Yes, but, I need talk about somthing else." Zekk cocked one eyebrow. "I don't know how to say this, but..." Her tough tied.

    "Yes?"

    "I.. I love you." Her vocie was low, and a faint blush crossed her cheeks. Zekk sat in shock. He turned back around and faced the setting sun. "Zekk?" He said nothing. Nither said nothing un till,

    "A year ago, you said you hate me. That I run off anytime you need me." His words cut her deeper than anything she could imagine.

    "Yes, but... Never mind." She turned to leave.

    "Jaina." His voice was stern. She fought to hold back tears.

    "Yes?"

    "Come here." He stood up and faced her. She walked up to him standing only a foot away. His green eyes were like two turbolasers at high power, burning holes in her. His face relaxed. "I love you, too." She threw herself on him. The tears of hurt being washed away by those of gladness. "I always have loved you, Jay. I promise, I'll never leave again."

    "If we live through tomorrow, that is." She bit her lower lip at the thought.

    "Durron doesn't stand a chance against us." Jaina laughed and tucked her head under his chin. Zekk wraped his arms around her. The two stood there for the longest time. Zekk slowly sat down and Jaina followed. "I love you, Jaina. I wish I had told you a long time ago." Jaina burried herself in his arms, cudling herself up with him.

    "I could spend all night up here." She remarked. Zekk tighten his embrace on her.

    "Then stay we shall." Jaina laughed at his choice of words. Zekk grined. [i]She hasn't smiled since Luke's death.[/i] A bigger grin crossed his face. [i]She loves me. She loves me![/i] He pulled snugled up next to her. "Good night, Jay."

    "Good night, Zekk"

    "Good night, 'Lovebirds'." Came a chuckling voice from a bush of ivy.

    "Mara, get out of here!" Jaina tossed a stick at the bush and burried her face in Zekk's chest. Mara turned and went back down to the temple, chuckling. While Zekk and Jaina spent the night under the stars, together.

    The next morning Jaina and Zekk, arm-inarm, boarded a shuttle and flew off to face Luke murderer, Kyp Durron.

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    Now go to [color=red][b][link=http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=13380167&replies=15]The Final Duel[/link][/b][/color].


     
  2. no_krakana

    no_krakana Jedi Youngling star 1

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    oooo....good prequel
     
  3. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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  4. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    That was just lovely. Thanks for the link. ;)
     
  5. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :eek:

    Kyp!

    Killed!

    Luke!

    :eek: :( :_| [face_plain] :mad:
     
  6. Trickster_Jaina_Fel

    Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    aw...... [face_love] what a sweet prequel [face_love]


    that YJK Index thing applies to this one too, btw ;) i'm too lazy to copy/paste everything though...... :p

    ~TJF
     
  7. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    I would have liked this if you haden't turned Kyp into a murderer ;)

    Neh, I sort of, kinda, just a little bit like it. But only because I'm a sucker for romance ;)
     
  8. the-Admiral

    the-Admiral Jedi Youngling star 1

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    hhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    [face_shocked]

    ok - now i have to check the link !

    Kyp ... Luke .
    i'm interested.

    the Admiral
     
  9. The_Hooded_One

    The_Hooded_One Jedi Padawan star 4

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  10. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Sara_Kenobi: That was just lovely.

    THANKS!


    [b]JediMasterKobe:[/b] [i]
    Kyp!

    Killed!

    Luke! [/i]

    Yep. Another innocent character, killed by my evil plot bunnies
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    [b]Trickster_Jaina_Fel:[/b] [i]aw...... what a sweet prequel[/i]

    Never thought I could write mush. Guess I was wrong. ;)
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    [b]Elfsheen:[/b] [i]I would have liked this if you haden't turned Kyp into a murderer.[/i]

    The guy wiped out a system. Sorry, I didn't make him that way. :p

    [i]Neh, I sort of, kinda, just a little bit like it. But only because I'm a sucker for romance [/i]

    :p I'm that same way.
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    [b]the-Admiral:[/b] [i]hhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

    ok - now i have to check the link !

    Kyp ... Luke...
    i'm interested. [/i]

    I may do another one on Kyp turning and the battle with Luke. Tissues will be supplied! :p What do you all think?
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    [b]The_Hooded_One:[/b]
    I take it, you like it? :D



     
  11. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    *sigh*

    Much happier. [face_love]


     
  12. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Thanks, Jaid!
     
  13. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Question, would anyone like me to write the fight between Luke and Kyp?
     
  14. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great prequal. *stops* Kyp Kyp Durron killed Luke???? :_| *runs to next part of the story* fyi, I'd like to see the dual between Kyp and Luke.

    Fireyforce
     
  15. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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    Fireyforce: Okay, Luke/Kyp bttle...



    Atention all Luke fans...

    GET OUT YOUR HANKIES!

    THIS WILL BE SAD!


    (This goes for Mara lovers, too)


    :(
     
  16. Ewok-From-Endor

    Ewok-From-Endor Jedi Youngling

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  17. Jedi_Allegra

    Jedi_Allegra Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Bravo! Very good. I must admit. ;)

    *smiles as she looks back at the author than walks away*
     
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