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What if Darth Maul had captured Queen Amidala?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Darth Pipes, Aug 12, 1999.

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  1. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    To the top.
     
  2. Darth Pipes

    Darth Pipes Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Back to the top!
     
  3. offsprey5

    offsprey5 Jedi Youngling

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    Ok folks. I motified my last post. And here's more.

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    The dytoxsis sensors detected the gas filling the cargo bay and had set off the alarms.

    Darth Maul arrived there very annoyed. He opened the sliding door after talking a deep breath. Though the bluish haze,he could see nothing had been distrubed except for a vent grille at the bottom of the main wall opposite of the ramp. He the bodies of Padme and Panaka twisted halfway inside the grille.

    He face darkened with anger.The more he looked at it,the angerier he got.



    [This message has been edited by offsprey5 (edited 04-21-2000).]
     
  4. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Yet again to the top.
     
  5. Darth Pipes

    Darth Pipes Jedi Grand Master star 5

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  6. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    To the top once more.
     
  7. Jaster_Mereel

    Jaster_Mereel Jedi Youngling star 1

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    This is a good story. I think you should continue it as an ongoing story throughout episode 2 and 3 and even the see what would have happened if Amidala were killed and the twins never born.

    -Fett
     
  8. Alpha_Ferdante

    Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Youngling star 2

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    May 28, 1999
    Be up with you.
     
  9. Ibis

    Ibis Jedi Youngling star 1

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    This is a cool story. It shouldn't be abandoned. So up we go.
     
  10. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    I hate it when good stories get abandoned.
     
  11. Dark_Soldier

    Dark_Soldier Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Is this going to be continued?
     
  12. Sara_Kenobi

    Sara_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    Sep 21, 2000
    I hope so. This is very interesting!!! :)
     
  13. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    Aug 23, 1999
    MORE PLEASE!
     
  14. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Ah, nice story.
    When is the next post coming up??
     
  15. Darth Pipes

    Darth Pipes Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Wow! Someboy exactly found this...

    I'm sorry but this was abandoned a long time ago. offsprey5 had taken over the story but he's disappeared. I really don't have anything for it.

    Thanks for the feedback though...it is always appreciated.
     
  16. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    No reason to let it drop.
    UP!
     
  17. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    UP again
     
  18. sith_lady17

    sith_lady17 Jedi Master star 3

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  19. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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  20. Darth_Fruitcake

    Darth_Fruitcake Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ya know, Pipes, this story is pretty good. I find it very amazing, and it would be a shame to let it go to waste. If you posted more, I'd be very happy :)
     
  21. Darth Pipes

    Darth Pipes Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Thanks, DF. :) Like I said, offsprey5 had some ideas for this thread but he disappeared. If anyone wants to pick it up, feel free to do so.
     
  22. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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  23. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Again!
     
  24. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    And again!
     
  25. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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