What if Darth Maul had captured Queen Amidala?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Darth Pipes, Aug 12, 1999.

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  1. padawan3 Jedi Master

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  2. Darth Pipes Force Ghost

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  3. offsprey5 Jedi Knight

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    Ok folks. I motified my last post. And here's more.

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    The dytoxsis sensors detected the gas filling the cargo bay and had set off the alarms.

    Darth Maul arrived there very annoyed. He opened the sliding door after talking a deep breath. Though the bluish haze,he could see nothing had been distrubed except for a vent grille at the bottom of the main wall opposite of the ramp. He the bodies of Padme and Panaka twisted halfway inside the grille.

    He face darkened with anger.The more he looked at it,the angerier he got.



    [This message has been edited by offsprey5 (edited 04-21-2000).]
  4. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Yet again to the top.
  5. Darth Pipes Force Ghost

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  6. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    To the top once more.
  7. Jaster_Mereel Jedi Knight

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    This is a good story. I think you should continue it as an ongoing story throughout episode 2 and 3 and even the see what would have happened if Amidala were killed and the twins never born.

    -Fett
  8. Alpha_Ferdante Jedi Knight

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  9. Ibis Jedi Knight

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    This is a cool story. It shouldn't be abandoned. So up we go.
  10. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    I hate it when good stories get abandoned.
  11. Dark_Soldier Jedi Master

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    Is this going to be continued?
  12. Sara_Kenobi Force Ghost

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    I hope so. This is very interesting!!! :)
  13. Obi-Zahn Kenobi Chosen One

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  14. Yorthen Jedi Knight

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    Ah, nice story.
    When is the next post coming up??
  15. Darth Pipes Force Ghost

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    Wow! Someboy exactly found this...

    I'm sorry but this was abandoned a long time ago. offsprey5 had taken over the story but he's disappeared. I really don't have anything for it.

    Thanks for the feedback though...it is always appreciated.
  16. Yorthen Jedi Knight

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    No reason to let it drop.
    UP!
  17. Yorthen Jedi Knight

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  18. sith_lady17 Jedi Knight

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  19. Yorthen Jedi Knight

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  20. Darth_Fruitcake Jedi Master

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    Ya know, Pipes, this story is pretty good. I find it very amazing, and it would be a shame to let it go to waste. If you posted more, I'd be very happy :)
  21. Darth Pipes Force Ghost

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    Thanks, DF. :) Like I said, offsprey5 had some ideas for this thread but he disappeared. If anyone wants to pick it up, feel free to do so.
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