What if LandM went back in time to Episode 1? (Round Robin)

Upsey-daisy! I'm working on it, but some of it's just a bit confusing.....

 

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more?

 

I can't wait!

 

Up!

 

Okay, one question, do you guys actually want to keep this going? Cause J_K and I weren't sure if you all were still interested.

Oh, and if you guys want, you can just give me a brief-over of what happend last, and I can start writing, and catch up on details later.

If no, that's perfectly fine. M'Kay! Be back....

 

I want this to continue.



I think the last thing was them going to Dagobah to find Luke & Leia's mother.

 

I want it to continue too!!!

 

I want you to keep going, but I'll probably have to reread some

 

OKAY!!! I've finnaly finished reading up on this, and I think I get it for the most part. I'm going to wait on posting till I can talk to J_K about what his plans for this is.

Be back!

~Jewl

 

Dart's on holiday right now - but I can't wait to see what you come up with!


UP!

 

Okay, I'll give it a try, but if you are like totaly outraged at the bad writing skills and the poor spelling, and serious lack of creativeness, you may reserve the right to ignore everything I write.

'kay, onto the post!

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Look and Marra ran throo thee swomp on Dagoe-baw.......Okay, I'm not THAT bad!

(maybe in comparison to the above, my writing won't look so bad! )

Right, right. NOW onto the post!

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The small party trudged through the thick undergrowth of Degobah. The Jedi picked their way easily through the messy vines and branches of old trees that hung over ever other step of Degobah ground. Wedge's fleet, however, did not have as much luck. The man were mostly ground pilots or air pilots, and not the kind to go trampsing through the slimy woods, and they tripped over most everything in their way.

Luke looked around sadly, suddenly remembering the beautiful planet Naboo had once been. Granted, it looked a little nicer than it did in his time, when he'd met Yoda. But the majestic glory of the planet he'd known back when his father was a boy, had been lost forever.

Mara sensed what Luke was feeling, and moved a little closer to him, holding his hand in hers. She gave it a slight squeez, and Luke relized how much he'd missed that reasuring gesture.

The weight of what was happening suddenly felt full on his shoulders. The very idea of time travel. The fact that they had changed the future, for better or worse. The sudden reality that his father, not Darth Vader, but his real father, walked just a few feet in front of them. And now they were wading through the swamps of Degobah to...to find his mother.

It was too much. But he didn't want to stop. He didn't want to slow down, and give his mind time to catch up. He just wanted to know everything. To see the whole truth sitting in front of him, and let his mind figure it out later.

He just wanted to see him mother.

He remembered, years and years ago, before he'd gone to confront Darth Vader, he had spoken with Leia. He told her he had no memory of his mother. Well now, he was going to meet her. Maybe. Oh, if only his mind wasn't so full of such maybes! He wanted to *know*!

Luke was so lost in his mind, that he hadn't notice what everyone else in the group had.

There was a huge body of water stretching out in front of them. As they reached a slight clearing on the edge of the woods, they gazed out over dark, murky water. But it wasn't the water that had stopped the group in their tracks, and jerked Luke out of his troubled thoughts.

It was a low, rumble, almost like a groul. And it came from deep in the heart of the mirky waters.

Anakin looked at his son, and answered the question in the Jedi's eyes.

"Sando Aqua Monster." He murmered. "Don't move."

 

...............I think everyone must have run and hid. Ah, well.

 

good post........


I hope they defeat that Sando Aqua Monster..........


:::fingers crossed:::

 

I'm a little hesitant to do too much before J_K gets back, because I'm not entirly sure what he had in mind.

Sorry if this is going very slow due to that, but I'm not quite sure how to procede...

 

he's back.......I'll ask him next time I send him an Instant Message.......



You could always try making a planning thread in the writers resource and asking for writers and either continuing and finishing the story or maybe doing a rewrite.



UP!

 

A rewrite.....ya, maybe that would be a good idea.

I mean, don't get me wrong, this has been realy cool, and gone a lot better than I thought it would. But it also was supposed to run a different way to begin with, and now it's something else entirely.

I think maybe the switch between the "Episode 1 all over again, with Luke and Mara this time"

and the

"Luke and Mara changed history, and this is what happens" sounds a little strange.

I think maybe if we knew where it was going from the beginning, it would run a lot smoother.

Unless, that is, no one is interested in this anymore.

It seems that maybe no one is.

Well, think about it.

 

I'm still interested......just need to get a good catchy title to attract more readers.....

I can't think of one right now, though.

 

How about "A Twist in Time"?

 

That's a good title, Tych_sel, - what do you think, Jedi_Jewl?

 

Sound great to me! I'm not like at ALL creative, and that sounds like a smashing title!

Great job!

 

Up!

 

UP?



Maybe you should lock this, start a planning thread and re-write it with people that can help.

 

last attempt at an UP

I think someone should contact Jewl and help her start a planning thread.

 

2nd to the last attempt at an up - this story has officially been abandoned me thinks.