What if Qui-Gon didn't die in TPM? Anyone can post!

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  1. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    Shmi was sitting in the back of the transport with Padme as the distress call came in.

    "Miss, have you heard anything from Ani? How is he?"

    Padme smiled. "He is fine, he has been apprentaced to Qui-Gon Jinn. Obi-Wan has become a knight, although my instincts tell me that he will have a part to play in Ani's training."

    Shmi smiled. "Perhaps now he will be able to fulfill his dreams." She said quietly as Panaka ran in.

    "Your Majesty come quick, we have recieved a message from Knight Kenobi, the Trade Federation is attacking Alderaan."
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  3. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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  4. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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    hmmm....
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    Obi-wan shut off the link to Naboo, and tried to contact the temple.

    Mace Windu answered. "Master Windu."

    Obi-wan quickly bowed his head. "Master Windu, the trade federation is attacking Alderaan." He blurted out.

    "What?"

    "The trade federation is attacking Alderaan. I've contacted the nearest Nubian ship, they're on their way. But I hesitate to ask them to much, the ship contains Queen Amidala."

    "You are right, it is not safe for her to risk herself in this. I will talk to the council and contact you again. In the meantime contact your former master. He should be able to get there before any of our ships. If indeed the council decides to send them. If he can converge with you contact me. 3 Jedi should be enough."

    "Yes master."

    "I will contact you again soon. May the force be with you Knight Kenobi." Mace said and signed off.

    Obi-wan nodded and attempted to contact Qui-gon.

    "Padawan Skywalker." Anakin answered. "Hi Anakin, can I talk to Qui-gon?" Obi asked.

    "Sure. Master?" He screamed.

    "I could have done that." Obi-wan joked and Anakin giggled.

    "Master Jinn here." Qui answered and Anakin disappeared. "Obi-Wan? What is it?"

    "Alderaan is under attack by the trade federation. I have contacted the Nubian ship containing Padme, she is on her way, and I talked to Master Windu, he said to contact you and see if you could get here."

    Qui got a disturbed look on his face. "We're on our way, we can be there in a little over a day and a half."

    Obi-wan nodded. "I'll tell Master Windu."

    "May the force be with you Obi-wan." Qui said.

    "And you." He replied getting off the link and getting back on with the temple in hopes of reaching Mace Windu.
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  7. Aralna Force Ghost

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    Yes, Great post! :D I can't believe I almost missed it! :eek:
  8. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    OK, hmmm.....this you guess can still post, you know that right? anyhow, here's a short one.
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    Anakin looked up as his master walked into the cabin. "Master what's wrong?" He asked at the look on Qui-gon's face.

    "The Trade Federation has attacked Alderaan." He had said it calmly, but Anakin knew better.

    "What else did Obi-Wan say?" Anakin asked.

    "Master Windu has requested that we go to Alderaan as back up for Obi-Wan. Queen Amidala is also on the way. And hopefully she is bringing forces." He sighed. "You'd better get on with your studies, we will not be there for over a day."

    "Yes Master." Anakin replied. **I'm gonna get to see Padme again!** He thought excitedly to himself.
  9. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    UP^^^ Please tell me I didn't kill it/
  10. greencat336 Jedi Grand Master

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    I think this story is getting better as it goes along!
  11. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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  12. Rogue...Jedi Administrator Emeritus

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    UP! Someone think of more story!
  13. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    WEll, I'll try and think of something, but I posted last, and it'd be nice if someone else posted. (hint hint)
  14. Rogue...Jedi Administrator Emeritus

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    Doesn't matter who posted last. I no good writer. Therefore, you post! Now!
  15. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    *sigh* number 4 comming up. Where did Aralna go?
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    Shmi smiled when Padme told her the good news. Anakin and Qui-gon were being assigned to the mission. She would get to see him again.
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    Padme took a seat across from Shmi she was trying to figure out what she would say when she saw Anakin again. Reaching into her pocket she felt the wooden necklace Anakin had given her not that long ago.

    She could see that Shmi was happy. She could only hope that Ani would be happy to see her again, and his mother.
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    Obi-wan floated at the edge of the Alderaan system waiting for Qui-gon and Padme's ships to show up.

    **3 Jedi, a queen, and a captain. Let's hope things don't get too sticky.** He thought.
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    Qui-gon watched as Anakin tried to follow his instructions. He was supposed to be lifting the data pad with the force. He wasn't doing so great.

    "Anakin, feel the force." Qui-gon repremanded quietly.

    "I'm trying."

    Qui-gon smiled and put on a fake accent. "Do or do not, there is no try."

    Anakin laughed. "Master, you don't sound anything like Master Yoda."

    "Ah, well, thank the force for that." He chuckled. "Now, try again."
  16. Aralna Force Ghost

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    I'm here, but I can't think of anything... I'll try. (yes, try)
    Good posts, Sci-Fi! :D
  17. Aralna Force Ghost

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    After a short time of waiting, Obi-Wan decided to moniter the communication channels in case anything happened.
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    That's all i can think of... That's why I wasn't posting anything...
  18. Rogue...Jedi Administrator Emeritus

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    Good post, ILSF.

    You can do better, Aralna.
  19. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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    A loud beeping noise startled Obi Wan from his waiting. A fleet of enemy ships was heading in his direction. He needed to hide and quick. But this is outter space- where can you hide?

    Obi Wan looked at the controls. One solution stood out. Go in to hyperspace. He would have to leave Qui Gon and the rest here.

    He pushed a button and put in a few coordinates and soon was flying through space.

    Was this the best choice? He thought to himself.


  20. Aralna Force Ghost

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    Nice post! :D

    I know I can do better, but not when I can't think of anything...

    Well, maybe this idea will add up to something...
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    "Anakin, you're trying too hard." Qui-Gon told Anakin.

    "Too hard? What do you mean?" Anakin asked, wondering if that was possibly.

    "Don't concentrate quite so much. Imagine it moving as you tell it too."

    Anakin looked confused. "Oookay..."

    "Just think of a string attached to it, and pull it toward you."

    "Toward me?" I thought I was supposed to be lifting it...

    "Change of plans." Qui-Gon smiled.

    Anakin reached his hand out toward the datapad, and closed his eyes. He called out to it, and imagined it coming to his hand. He opened his eyes. It was nowhere near his hand.

    "It did move a little bit, Padawan. You're improving. Keep practicing that, I'll pull us out of hyperspace." Anakin nodded and Qui-Gon walked to the cockpit. He waited for the reversion clock to reach zero before bringing them out of hyperspace. Where was Obi-Wan? He's supposed to meeting us! Could something have happened? but his bond with Obi-Wan proved the new knight to be fine, and uncaptured.

    Qui-Gon looked at Alderaan. He could see the Trade Federation ships surrounding the planet. Except, some of the ships were moving toward him.

    "Hey, Anakin?" Qui-Gon called.

    "Yeah?" Anakin appeared in the cockpit.

    "Can you fly this ship through them?" The other side would give them a clear jump to a nearby system, where hopefully Obi-Wan was.

    "Of course!" Anakin hurried to the pilots seat, and waited for Qui-Gon to get up.
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    Hmm... I guess that idea worked... :) Much better than the last one. What could be worse? ;)
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  23. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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    Up! I see we got this thread Up and going again! :D
  24. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    good posts!!!!! Hmmm....**sits to think of something**
  25. Rogue...Jedi Administrator Emeritus

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    I'm still waiting for you to think of something...
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