Saga When the Angel Fell -- A/P Vignette

Sorry, this fic is no longer availible.

 

Sniff, what a tearjerker! I like how you had Padme write her own letter like that, how you had her tell Anakin she was dying and let him feel responsible.

 

Added "Cried" to the post.

"Loved" and an epilogue are coming soon.

 

Grrr. Sorry, slow compy. Darned double post.

 

Wow. That was awesome. And sad. Wow. Wow. D?mn, you killed my vocabulary! Wow.

I'm impressed - no beta reading, you say? Wow. I didn't see any errors.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to more of this. You say one about love is next?

Would you mind PMing me when you update?

Oh, and, you should seriously consider archiving this.

 

Thanks, bobill and moebia.

 

Good job. I don't know that I agree with Anakin striking Padme, and I don't know that she would react in the way she did rather than getting the hell away from him, but then she did seem to let his whole Tusken Raider massacre slide, didn't she. It's an intersting take on how their relationship begins to crumble, and I like that he separates himself from her so as to protect her.


Good work.

 

A notice to anyone who might read this: my friends here at home who I've had read this have told me that Part III is better when it stands alone. So, I'm going to change this back to a stand-alone vignette.

Hopefully, I will be able to get Part III archived.

bobill - Thanks for reading this a second time, and apparently liking it just as much.
moebia - Thanks for your appreciation. Sorry that Part I won't be written, but I'll probably write more A/P fics, so I can PM you when I start one.
stacysatrip - Thanks for checking this out. Yeah, I thought him hitting her was a little wierd, but to be honest, both stories typed themselves.