Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Anakin_Heartbreaker, Nov 19, 2005.
Oh man...I hope she's still alive!
plz PM me when you update.
wow...i don't know what to say except that this is so awesome. i'm glad to see you're writing again. keep it up because you're doing great!
can you pm me when you update next??
Wow, when you told me the next post was going to be insane you weren't lying!! The flashbacks of their intense love against her darkside fueled hate are too much for my heart, as well as my nerves to take and yet I want more!!!
I'm so glad that you were able to find the time to sneak by DRL and write again!!
wow, what an update, back and forth, very exciting
She can't die! then there would be no mush!!!!! please PM me the uncut version.
What a place to leave off! Talk about a surprising twist and suspense.
Mixing in the love scenes with the duel was very poignant. And then the end ... whoa. It's hard to believe that Anakin would do something like that to Padme. Hopefully she's still alright.
how bad would it sound if I said that she deserved it? I'm sorry for the padme we all know, but it's like she isn't the same person anymore
Whoa, that was seriously intense. Great update! And please send me the unedited version, thanks.
Whoops! Forgot to ask for the PM version! Can I get it, please?
yeah same here. There are simply no words...
Hey, you are back! I wasn't expecting this, so it is a very nice surprise. This is a great start to your story. I definitely want to be placed on the PM list.
.. ... I don't know weather to cry my eyes out or be extactic. That was amazing. There was so much power in that post.
Great post and please post soon ...
Thanx for the pm
Forgot to ask for the uncut version!! Can I please have one!
I want it to!!! can I have it?? please?? ( insert pout here)
I'm 19 by the way
That was an incredibly intense post. I'd love to read the uncut version.
that was wonderfully written
can i have the uncut?
How heartbreaking for Anakin. Strangely that is also your I.D. on this forum. Lol. Don't mind me. I'm completely mental. Great work, mate!
Great post, I think that Anakin did the right thing, she was just too dangerous to keep alive. Every time he tried to help her she would turn on him.
I am now officially reading this fic!*blink* *blink*
THIS IS LIKE...WWWWOOOOOOOWWWWWW!!
Brilliant!!! I love how you went back and forth with the scenes.
Oh man, she saw the light finally and it was too late. Just like Vader in RotJ.
But she has to survive, Luke and Leia can't die with her!!!!!!
Oh and send me the uncut version, please.
Amazing, I love how you mirrored the fighting with flashbacks of them being in love. It made it so much more intense and tragic.
What??!! Is she going to be alright?? What about the babies?? I'm dying here Heartbreaker!! Ya know I'm late in replying to this because I had an emergency appendectomy and I'm supposed to be taking it easy!!Not easy to do when you leave me hanging like this Please send me that unedited version. I know that will make me feel better
Thanks for the PM. hope you'll update again soon!
OMG,PADME CANT DIE!!!!!!!!This storys fantastic,nice twist.I cant imagine padme being like that.cant wait to see what happens!!!!!!!
Could u pls add me to ure pm list!!!