Saga When We Were Lovers - Padme Falls, AU, ROTS, Anakin/Dark Padme, Romance, Action, Angst *COMPLETED*

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  1. Anakin_Heartbreaker Force Ghost

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    Sep 24, 2004
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    zvalarens - Thanks!!!!! Yes, she went off the cliff, let's see what happens!!!

    jmsbndgrl - You forgive me? Yes!!!! And you are right, there are just numerous possibilties.

    PadwanKayla - I am thrilled you like action, I always enjoy writing them.

    little_miss_jedi - Lets see what happens to Padme.

    JediArym - Thanks, major thanks!!!!!!! More explosions on their way!!!

    pink_saber_girl - I'm glad you like the fic, you'll know soon if she is alive!!!

    MzAmethystCrow
    - More is on its way!!!

    Amidala66 - WOW!!!! You're compliment made my day, that is just so sweet!!!

    remote_light - Great to be back, I'm glad you like it!!!

    delta-7starfighter - Thanks, and here is the update!!!

    Kitten - Let's see if the next post can answer yuor questions.

    Bananakin_Fruiteater - I am thrilled you like the fic so far, much more of the same coming up!!!

    astarael - I am happy you liked it.

    Jaira - Totally!!!!!

    MoeTharen - You're on the list!!!!!

    lady_sapphire - Thanks for the warm welcome, you're on the list!!!

    HandmaidenVeme - I am honored that you like it so much. DRL is still taking it to me I'm afraid.

    darksideyesplease - Thanks, it was a bit crazy!!!

    MasterEnder - Lets see if she is dead.

    Darth_Vastor - I am glad that you liked how I showed the duel, that means alot to me.

    michaellover - Totally understandable.

    flyingcolours - Thanks, I am thrilled you enjoyed it.

    iLoveAnakin7 - Totally again!!!!

    Mr_Dagobah - Its great to be back!!!! You're on the list!!!

    ChewbacaRocks - I am so happy that you found that post to be powerful, that was exactly what I was trying to get across.

    Mixza - Thanks for the awesome words!!!

    theman54 - Thanks!!!

    Darth-Buddy - Yes, everytime he tried to help her, she attacked him.

    Jedi_Master_Cazz - I am glad you like it. You're on the list!!!

    Minela - I am thrilled you enjoyed the last post. Lets see what happens to her.

    Pokey - Thanks for the rocking compliments.

    ANAKINSBABY - Firstly, get well soon!!!!!! Lets see if the upcoming post can answer your questions!!!

    naadi - I am thrilled you like the twist!!!! You're on the list.


    Hi everyone. Firstly sorry about not posting soon. DRL has busted me up pretty badly, I feel like Rocky Balboa going fifteen rounds with Apollo Creed. Now, the uncut of the last post will be sent out tomorrow, and that is a promise. But since I have been leaving you guys hanging longer than I should have, I have a special treat for those that may want it. This chapter also has an uncut version!!!! ;)




    When we were lovers


    Chapter Four



    The anticipation of being captivated by his scintillatingly deep cerulean eyes, and to feel his sculpted arms protect her in a loving embrace, sent pulsating waves of ecstasy through her trembling body. The vivacious beating of her heart, danced to his melodious voice, as she remembered every intimate word that he ever whispered in her ear. Her skin tingled, whilst she recalled how his warm breath would tease her into capitulation. The exhilaration, of feeling her aching heart thump faster and slower at the same time, by the mere mention of his name, was mystifying, but that was what loving him did. Padme?s soft eyes sparkled, as she admired her beauty in the mirror, of her parent?s home on Naboo. She had been married to Anakin for a full year, and it was their first anniversary?She wanted to look beautiful for him. The atrocious news of Anakin?s death, did nothing but ignite the anxiety, the trepidation, and the pain, which battled with the undying love, and the perpetual belief, that Anakin would return to her yearning arms.

    Padme smiled, as she placed the Jappor Snippet into the palm of her hand. Her index finger ran gently over each marking, whilst her eyes conscientiou
  2. ehopepower Jedi Knight

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    Jul 20, 2005
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    Nice update. I am totally hooked. Uncut version please this and last chapter since I still have not received it. "Looks to see if 1st post"
  3. zvalarens Jedi Knight

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    Aug 4, 2005
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    :eek: :eek: :eek:

    I just don't know what to say! The flashback was amazing, it made the "present" part so much more heartwrenching. And WooHoo another uncut version, you have just made my day.

    Please send me that one as well.

    Can't wait to read them.

  4. Bananakin_Fruiteater Jedi Padawan

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    Nov 5, 2005
    No need to apologize! We all get kicked around by DRL...

    But that was well worth the wait!

    This chapter makes you feel sorry for Anakin... he is trying to cling onto the last threads of their love, but the dark side keeps pulling Padme away.

    Great post, and I'm looking forward to the uncut version! :)

    Bananakin
  5. MoeTharen Jedi Master

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    Sep 10, 2005
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    That was good but I don't get it. Is she dead?
  6. ChewbacaRocks Jedi Knight

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    Aug 28, 2005
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    Oh ,my gosh. That was really hard to read because it was so sad!:_| But I also am wondering if Padme is dead!!

    Please post soon, and thanx for the pm![face_peace]

    I would also like the uncut version. Thanx:)
  7. Anakin_Heartbreaker Force Ghost

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    Sep 24, 2004
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    I know some of you will be wondering what EXACTLY is going on, is Padme dead, or alive. If she is dead, then what did Anakin see?

    Don't worry about it, all your questions will be answered, I just have a habit of doing this in my fics.
  8. astarael Jedi Knight

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    Jan 8, 2005
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    I love those flashbacks!

    Great post! Isn't there any way to bring Padme back from the Darkside? I can't wait for more.
  9. iLoveAnakin7 Force Ghost

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    Apr 17, 2005
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    By all means keep the flashbacks coming at full force, if anything they make the present all the more tragic to read. =D= I just feel the love[face_love]

    Why Padme? why?:(

    thanks for the pm
  10. Pokey Jedi Knight

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  11. ColdWarrior Jedi Knight

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    Oct 19, 2004
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    Wow, I just found this great story! What a twist! I would appreciate it if you could send me the uncut chapters. Can't wait for the rest...
  12. Amidala66 Jedi Master

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    Jul 14, 2005
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    :_| :_| :_|

    That was absolutely beautiful.
    How you can come up with such an amazing story while DRL is keeping you down, I don't know. It just demonstrates how talented you really are as a writer.

    Please send the uncut versions my way when you get the chance.
    Thanks.=D=
  13. jmsbndgrl Force Ghost

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    Dec 31, 2004
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    Another beautifully written chapter. :D

    Send the PM versions my way. ;)
  14. flyingcolours Jedi Knight

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    Jul 25, 2005
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    Wonderful update! Thanks for the PM.

    I'd like the unedited chapters as well, thanks.
  15. Kitten Jedi Knight

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    Jun 14, 2005
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    Aww... how sad. I can't stop crying. :_| :_| :_|
  16. Jeanne_Skywalker Jedi Knight

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    Nov 15, 2001
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    I just read this story and love it!!!=D=

    Please send me the pm's too! :)

  17. HandmaidenVeme Jedi Master

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    Jun 28, 2004
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    Who will have to pay the ultimate price in the end...When you're dealing with the darkside nothing comes for free.

    Fantastic as always!!

    Yes send me all the uncut versions!!!!!
  18. Jedi_Master_Cazz Jedi Master

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    Sep 13, 2005
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    OH WOW!

    *nothing else said*

    Cheers_Cazza@};-
  19. Darth_Vastor Jedi Master

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    Jun 24, 2005
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    =D= How do you do it, Heartbreaker? That flashback was just incredible!

    I know that eventually you're going to tell us what's going on with Padme, but until then, the possibilites are endless.

    Update as soon as you can!
  20. JediArym Force Ghost

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    Jun 24, 2005
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    Did Padme survive? Is she OK? Is that a vision Anakin have
    or it is real? I hope you post soon because I can't wait
    to find out what happened to Padme. [face_worried]

    Please PM me the uncut version. Thanks! :)
  21. Minela Jedi Knight

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    Apr 28, 2005
    star 3
    Oh man!!! Bring her back, bring her back!!!
  22. naadi Jedi Knight

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    Mar 20, 2005
    star 3
    That was beautiful,bring padme back plsssssss:(
    great update,cant wait for more!!!!thanx for adding me to ure pm list:)
    could u send me the uncut version pls.thanx!!!!!
  23. Mr_Dagobah Jedi Knight

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    Aug 30, 2005
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    Ah, jeez. That's horribly sad. :(
  24. Jaira Jedi Master

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    May 3, 2005
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    [face_hypnotized] What the...? Was she a spirit? [face_thinking] Oh, uncut version, please?[face_batting]
  25. michaellover Jedi Knight

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    May 30, 2005
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    :D great chapter!! does that means that all hopre is lost about padme??:(

    Can I have the uncut version of chapter four??? pretty please??[face_praying]
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