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Saga When We Were Lovers - Padme Falls, AU, ROTS, Anakin/Dark Padme, Romance, Action, Angst *COMPLETED*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Anakin_Heartbreaker, Nov 19, 2005.

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  1. PadwanKayla

    PadwanKayla Jedi Master star 4

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    Didn't think I could dislike Sidious anymore than I already did with the canon version, but you've managed to make me despise him even more. Good job!

    I really liked the mirroring of ROTS with Padme in Anakin's place. I think the line I liked most was ?Where are the babies? Are they safe??

    Looking forward to the next installment!
     
  2. theman54

    theman54 Jedi Master star 2

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    Duel to the death? Padme and Anakin simply love each other too much to ever try to harm each other. The only exception would be if one of them turned to the dark side. I think that the day that I see a lightside and Anakin and lightside Padme fighting each other will be a very bad day indeed.
     
  3. ChewbacaRocks

    ChewbacaRocks Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Dang! I never thought I would read a post like that before. It was really evil!

    Thanks for the uncut version, it was terrific!

    Thanx for the pm and please post soon.
     
  4. jmsbndgrl

    jmsbndgrl Jedi Master star 4

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    I think I say this in every fic, but Palpy needs to die! :mad:

    Anyways, Padme is obviously ticked off by this turn of events and is going to blame Anakin on it, thanks to a certain Sith Lord. However, I do hope that either her or Anakin will find out about the twins and try to rescue them.

    It was dark, but very powerful. A wonderful update.

    As for the PM versions, they were equally as good. I'm sorry I did not send feedback earlier, I got preoccupied with other things.
     
  5. darksideyesplease

    darksideyesplease Jedi Master star 4

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    OHHH, Sidious is a God among men! Nice job Siddy! That's how you manipulate others to do your bidding.

    And Padme losing one of those sexy legs..... "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
     
  6. theman54

    theman54 Jedi Master star 2

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    I hope that Padme and Anakin don't blame each other and break up [face_praying]

    Is this the lightside Padme that is getting mad at Ani?
     
  7. Minela

    Minela Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Apr 28, 2005
    Don't worry...Anakin will find them. He has to, he will sense them...their bond is strong. I hope so.
     
  8. iLoveAnakin7

    iLoveAnakin7 Jedi Master star 5

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    Anakin is now the last hope for any future.:(
    Padme's leg, very good descriptions...made me cringe in fact:D

    Sidious has the babies....OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:eek: And Padme sith lightning:eek:


    thanks for the pm


    Dark Lady of the Sith hehehe[face_devil] gotta love that
     
  9. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Rise Lady Padme?Dark Lady of the Sith.?

    First: OUCH!!:oops: did Mustafar's lava fried her brain or what?? She believes a sith lord over her husband who tried to save her and loves her more than anything?:confused: she's confused..deeply!

    second: Palpy, I ought to put you across my lap and spank you (but I want to keep my food down, thank you very much [face_sick] [face_sick]) But I'll be contented if Ani strangles you!!
     
  10. Amidala66

    Amidala66 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 14, 2005
    That was simply ingenious Anakin Heartbreaker.

    What happened to maternal instinct? She has to know that the twins aren't dead in the back of her mind.

    As for Sidious, he is beyond evil. You have made him so bad here that I hope that he dies a million deaths when Anakin gets a hold of him

    Great job Heartbreaker.
     
  11. ilymeforever

    ilymeforever Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Arggggggggggg... that that that lying monster.. not that I was expecting any less from him but still.. hes pure EVIL.. and now we might have lost Padme for good.. and the babies are still in the evils hand.. ohh noo
    And wheres Ani.. where is him.. ?? Im worried, Im truly worried...

    Great new part, luv it.. cant wait for the next one..

    Mary
     
  12. full_moon

    full_moon Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oh wow, this story is great! I really hope Anakin can at least save the twins! could you PM me when you update?:)
     
  13. JediArym

    JediArym Jedi Master star 3

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    I'm speechless.

    I still can't believe Sidious would that do to poor Padme. Hate is not
    a strong enough word to describe how I feel towards that damn Sidious!!! :mad:

    Now we know that the twins are actually alive and well, I wonder what
    the Emperor plans to do with them. I'm praying Anakin will show up and
    strike Sidious down...right now!!!!

    Great update Anakin Heartbreaker! I think I need some A/P mush to calm me down...

    Please PM me when you update. :)
     
  14. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jun 28, 2004
    I need to sit down...

    Wow, I truly can not believe how low Sidious will go to gain control. Padme is so consumed by the darkside that she's not even thinking straight, and it seems that this consumption has overshadowed her force connection with her children. On the plus side (if you can count it as such), when Anakin learns of this there is definetely going to be hell to pay.
     
  15. Pokey

    Pokey Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I hate palpy...hate him...:mad:
    good chapter
     
  16. Kitten

    Kitten Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OMG!!! :eek: I can't believe this, it seems like the roles are totally reversed. What did Palptine do with the babies? I wonder. [face_thinking] I hope he didn't actually kill them. [face_worried]
     
  17. naadi

    naadi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    WHERE has palpy taken the babies.i hope anakin comes to save all of them.great post,thnx for pm!!!!!!!!!!
     
  18. lady_sapphire

    lady_sapphire Jedi Youngling star 3

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    wow. that's all i have to say. this is really going to change things now.

    can't wait for the next update!
     
  19. Jaira

    Jaira Jedi Master star 4

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    May 3, 2005
    SWEET HOLY....Well, I can't even finish...]-} [face_hypnotized]
     
  20. Anakin_Heartbreaker

    Anakin_Heartbreaker Jedi Master star 4

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    I just wanted to let you all know that the next couple of posts are going to be crazy!!!!!

    I am actually quite excited about one particular sequence.

    Will Padme find out that Luke and Leia are alive? I will try to post the chapter ASAP.

    If you think that Anakin is lethal with a lightsaber, wait until you see what he does with his bare hands!!!

     
  21. Bananakin_Fruiteater

    Bananakin_Fruiteater Jedi Master

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    Even more wild than these last ones!?!? Oh man!!! I'm looking forward to 'em!
     
  22. astarael

    astarael Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 8, 2005
    Great post!

    Damn Palpatine. Please tell me he dies a horrible, horrible death!
     
  23. darthgriz98

    darthgriz98 Jedi Youngling

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    Aug 6, 2004
    ooo angsty, I like it
     
  24. Darth_Vastor

    Darth_Vastor Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I have to agree. Someone as hot as Padme should not be maimed, even if she has been corrupted by the Dark Lord of the Sith. Speaking of which ...

    Palpatine. What an evil piece of scum! Not only has he tricked Padme into serving him, he steals her and Anakin's children too! :mad: Someone needs to teach him a slow, painful lesson.

    If you think that Anakin is lethal with a lightsaber, wait until you see what he does with his bare hands!!!

    Maybe it'll involve him going retro on the hooded maniac who has taken his wife. [face_skull]

    You are doing an awesome job in portray the conflict in both Padme and Anakin as they struggle with love and hate. It's one of the strongest points in a very strong story. Needless to say, I await your next update.

    Edited because I can't spell.
     
  25. iLoveAnakin7

    iLoveAnakin7 Jedi Master star 5

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    I just wanted to let you all know that the next couple of posts are going to be crazy!!!!!

    Bring it on:D
     
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