Before Where Death Has Lingered (Padawan Xanatos angst, char death, Author's note 1/01/04)

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  1. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    So I'm back. Yes the others will be updated soon. Please r/r. :) Hope you like it.

    Where Death Has Lingered

  2. Padawan_Jess_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    [face_shocked] Master! You... you... killed Qui! [face_shocked] That... you... you killed him! :_| With that aside, great job. Really nice, yet sad, fic. Qui really loves Xanatos, doesn't he. The end just killed me though! And this part here: ?I wish I could remain, my beloved son, but it seems that to protect you, I must give up that chance. I wish you could understand, my Xanatos, but perhaps you will someday,? Qui-gon whispered.

    Bright blue eyes blinked open and sleepily looked at him, ?Master??

    ?Shh, Padawan, just go back to sleep. I am here,? Qui-gon said, chocking back his tears.

    ?All right, Master. Love you,? Xanatos whispered, and once more closed his tired eyes.

    Qui-gon smiled softly, ?I love you too, my dear son.?


    :_| :( :_| That really was great though. :) *goes off to sob hysterically*
  3. female_obi_wan Jedi Knight

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    *jaw hits floor* You KILLED HIM! :_|

    Hang on...that means Xanatos won't turn evil now, right? Because if Qui's dead he can't kill Xani's father, and so Xani might be able to avoid the Dark Side...and so on. Interesting :D

    I adore this fic. I might ask you if I can archive it, someday. :)
  4. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    WHAT ON EARTH!


    Why..I..who..Qui-Gon...ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!


    WHY DID YOU KILL QUIGON???

    AND WHO DO THEY THEY THINK THEY ARE. THAT THEY CAN KILL ANYONE THEY CHOOSE?

  5. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Padawan: *Hands over a tissue.* Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it, even if it was sad.

    female_obi_wan: Well, we shall just have to see where Xanatos goes from this. Though I will say life will not be good for now. And thanks. Just ask anytime and I'll let you have it. :)

    GenOochy: Well, Thanatos and Hypnos are both spirits of the Force. They kind of have the right to do those things, when the Force bids. Its a strange idea I'm messing with. Plus, I have this nasty addiction to killing Qui to produce angst. Its weird. ;)

    Thanks for the comments! :D



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  6. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  7. Jedi_Cyana Jedi Master

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    Qui-gon.....dead? really? really truly?? Xani needs a new master?? *gape*



    ...



    *continues gaping*

    ...

    *closes mouth*

    Great fanfic btw, though...
  8. Nikita Jedi Knight

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    Poor Xani! This is very different Neon! I'm lovin it!!! Can't wait for more!
  9. GenOochy Force Ghost

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    POOR XANATOS!

    POOR QUI GON!

    :_|
  10. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Who does that little piece of un-recongizeable dung think he is? Better yet, what how far has Yoda's mind deterated? Good story.
  11. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Sigh, finally able to update. So sorry for the extreemly long delay. Hopefully from now on the posts won't be any more then a week apart at the most.

    jacen200015: Yeah, Xan is getting the rough edge of this.

    Jedi_Cyana: Yes, poor Qui is truely dead, but not forgotten, though yes, Xan is going to need a new Master, and he isn't getting a good choice at it. Thank you.

    Nikita: Thanks. I strive to have as orginal ideas as I can. Glad you love it!

    GenOochy: Yes, and its only going to get worse for Xan. But you'll see, the Force hasn't left poor Xani completly without comfort, and Qui will be remembered.

    padawan3: Hey, its been a while since I've seen you. :) Atreas can be stubborn, and rather cold hearted fiend. As to Yoda, you'll see what he's thinking in a few posts more. Thanks.

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  12. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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  13. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    Will there ever be a sequel to: When everything is a lie?....
  14. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Hey Neon. You're right it has been a long time. Homework and AP tests unfortunately ruled my life for a time, but those tests are done and hopefully I will regain free will. Hopefully, I will be able to catch up on some stories and find new one. Only its been so long most have them have nearly tripled in size. At least I don't have to wait that for updates.

    Anyway, this is the first new story I've read since my rise from the dead. Work your magic girl.
  15. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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  16. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl: Thanks, and answered in PM.

    padawan3: True, and I'm honored this is the first you've read since your return. :) Can understand the homework and AP woes, both are evil, both steal time out lives. I shall do my best, and glad you're back! :D

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  17. PaddyJuan Force Ghost

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  18. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Only too sweet and upsetting at the same time. Drooling for more.
  19. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Ai, I can't believe I nearly forgot this one. So sorry for the unforgiveable delay on this post. I promise the next won't take as long, and should be much better, once my writer block subsides. This post is short half because the next is much longer and my WB.

    PaddyJuan: Thanks! Glad you like Veron. :)

    padawan3: Thanks. :) Sorry for the wait.


  20. PaddyJuan Force Ghost

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    Awww, Veron's so good with the kid.
  21. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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    Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!

    That's sweet :)
  22. WedgeDarklighter Jedi Knight

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  23. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    Any thing you write neon i read so of course i love this....
  24. Xanatos_son_of_Crion Jedi Knight

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  25. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Sorry for the delay, I promise a new post shall be coming swiftly either Monday or Tuesday of next week.

    PaddyJuan: Glad you think so. Veron strives to be as good as he can. :)

    Xanatos: Thanks. :) And thanks for the up.

    WedgeDarklighter: Thanks you. :)

    Jenny: And I'm glad you do. :)

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