Wherever you Will Go JA/AU (Obi & Qui h/c) New Post 8-27!!

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  1. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    WHEREVER YOU WILL GO
    By Snowbee-Wan Kenobi



    Summary- After a long mission on a dangerous planet, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan return home to
    Learn that Qui-Gon is wanted for the murder of a foreign Prince. He is forced to leave
    The order, leaving Obi-Wan to start a new life with a new master.

    Rating- PG


    Archive- Yep, just ask me!

    Disclaimer- All recognizeable characters belong to George Lucas. (Yes sadly including Obi
    ::SNIFF::) I am making no money from this....(HAHA I wish!!!) The song "Where-
    Ever You Will Go." Belongs to the band the Calling. Healer Sano Brun, Rafe Orion,
    Colt Ranhort are mine........

    Timeframe- JA, Obi-Wan is 14

    Feedback- YES PLEASE!!!!!



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    So lately
    Been wondering
    Who will be there to take my place?
    When I'm gone
    You'll need love
    To light the shadows on your face.
    If a great wave shall fall
    And fall upon us all
    Then between the sand and stone
    Could you make it on your own?
    If I could then I would
    I'll go wherever you will go
    Way up high, or down low
    I'll go wherever you will go
    And maybe I'll find out
    A way to make it back someday
    To watch you
    To guide you
    Through the darkest of your days
    And if a great wave shall fall
    And fall upon us all
    Then I hope there's someone out there
    Who can bring me abck to you
    If I could
    Then I would
    I'd go wherever you will go
    Way up high
    Or down low
    I'll go wherever you will go
    Runaway with my heart
    Runaway with my love
    Runaway with my hope
    If I could
    Then I would
    I'll go wherever you will go
    Way up high
    Or down low
    I'll go wherever you will go


    Qui-Gon sat anxiously in his seat.
    He was on the Republic cruiser
    "The Firestar," finally on its
    way home from a long mission on
    the plabet Telron. There, a
    simple mission to oversee the
    inauguration of the new
    supreme governor had
    turned into a tangled web of lies
    and deciet.

    It had turned out the supreme governor's most trusted aid, and second in command,
    was in league with a barbaric crime ring that had been threatening to take over
    the planet for several years. The aid
    had been feeding them information for
    the past two months leading up to the inauguration. He had told them every-
    thing from security measures being
    taken, to access codes for important political documents, and even the
    fact that Qui-Gon and his Padawan
    learner, Obi-Wan Kenobi, were there
    to see the operation.

    The leader of the crime ring, a humanoid named Colt Runhar, had felt that defeat-
    ing the two Jedi would not be a challenge, and had decided to go ahead with the
    attack as planned. Qui-Gon thought
    back to the previous morning:

    The ceremony was going well, and the governor was just about to swear his
    oath of loyalty to Telron when Colt
    and his men attacked. Between the
    two Jedi, and the Supreme govenor's security, they had been succeeding in holding back the attackers. Suddenly
    Colt himslef leaped from a building overhead, seizing the Governor.

    Colt had pointed a blaster at the
    Governor's head, and Qui-Gon was
    sure he was prepared to fire, when
    Obi-Wan bravely rushed to the Governor's rescue. Colt immediately released
    the governor, and focused al his
    attention on the young Jedi in
    front of him.

    Qui-Gon remembered watching proudly
    as Obi-Wan deflected bolt after
    bolt of blaster fire. Then Colt
    suddenly caught him off guard, and
    a blaster bolt caught him in the
    chest. Qui-Gon heard his Padawan
    cry out in pain, and watched as
    another blaster bolt caught Obi-Wan
    in the arm as he raced to the boy's
    side. Colt immediatley fled, but Qui-Gon did not follow as he knelt over his
    injured Padawan. The podium at
    which the Governor had been speaking
    at had fallen on Obi-Wan's leg,
    crushing it. There were also small
    trickles of blood beginning to flow
    from where the blaste
  2. Athen Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Sep 17, 2000
    Yes, you must post more, and soon too.
    Great start, just don't make us wait. That's all I have to say.
    MORE!!
  3. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Jan 28, 2000
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    Thanks Athen....
    I will try to post 2morrow~
  4. shanobi Jedi Master

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    Dec 11, 2001
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    Oh yes, this does sound interesting. Obi with another master? Do continue :)


    sighs I just loved Moulin Rouge. I've lost count of how many times i've seen it.

    Hurry with more.
  5. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Jul 10, 2001
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    Moulin Rouge? What a well-spent hour and a half or so! One of my favorite movies... BUT EWAN DIDN'T GET ANY CREDIT!!! :mad:

    Great beginning, and I can't wait for more! :D
  6. ewen Jedi Master

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    Jun 11, 2001
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    yes,keep going and soon.PLEASE, WE LOVE OBI HURT,followed by lots of mush.Just a thought here.PEACE Ewen
  7. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Jan 28, 2000
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    Hey thanks 4 the replies u guys!!!!

    I will try to post when I gte back from my swim meet....

    Yes Kenobisgirl....Ewan shoulda gotten best actor at the globes :-(
  8. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    Dec 31, 2001
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    Keep posting SWK. Good luck at the meet.
  9. KSkywalker Jedi Knight

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    Great Story snowbee-wan kenobi!
    Could you please edit your post so it's easier to read? It's a wee bit too wide. Thanks!
  10. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Jan 28, 2000
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    Hey everyone.....
    Welcoem Padawan Kitara!!!

    Here is the next post I promised....(I decided to add it cause I am in a good mood since the meet went well!)
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    WHEREVER YOU WILL GO
    Chapter 2


    As if on command, Sano suddenly emerged from the med ward, followed by Rey. They both looked exhausted and Qui-Gon was disturbed to see the blood stains on their tunics.

    "Force! What have they been doing in there?!?!" Qui-Gon thought to himself.

    Sano sighed before taking a seat in the chair next to Qui-Gon.

    "Well, I'm afraid it's not all good news," he began.

    Qui-Gon felt the temporary relief he had gained when seeing Sano finally emerge from the med ward disappear, it was replaced once more by unbearable panic.

    "Well....." Sano began again.

    He seemed to have trouble getting out the words.

    "I have to say, I ownder what those Telron healers were thinking." he continued, chuckling slightly at his own wit.

    Qui-Gon was not amused. He wished Sano would just get to the point and tell him how Obi-Wan was.

    "I'm afraid Obi-Wan's leg will require surgery to say the least. From the scans I was able to take, it appears the leg is completely shattered, although I couldn't tell the full extent of the damage. I would like to perform the surgery as soon as posssible when we return to the Temple."

    Sano then stopped for a moment to let all this information to sink in, and then continued.

    "i am confident I will be abel to mend the damage, although the process will be a long one. It could be quite a while before Obi-Wan is able to walk again...if he is able to at all."

    Qui-Gon shuddered at the thought of this.

    "I have alk=ready notified the healers at the Temple. They are awaiting our arrival." Sano Concluded.

    Qui-Gon nodded his understanding, although he was unable to speak. He was overcome by a rush of sympathy for all the pain his Padawan was having to go through, as well as a pang of quilt for not being at Obi-Wan's side to protect him.

    Qui-Gon's thougts were interrupted as Sano continued.

    "As for his blaster wounds, I'm afraid they were not properly treated on Telron, and are beginning to become infected. I don't have the proper antidotes here, but I will be able to get them as soon as we reach Coruscant."


    Qui-Gon nodded once more, still absorbing all the information he had just been given.

    Suddenly the captain's voice came over the intercom.

    "We are now approaching Coruscant, we should be arriving at the Jedi Temple in 30 minutes."
  11. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    btw u guys...ignore how weird the first post looks....i tried to edit it and that's how it turned out....
    whoops
    -S-WK
  12. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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  13. TheSwedishJedi Jedi Master

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    Sep 15, 2001
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    Ohh, poor Obi. Never walk again? Maybe he can get a fake leg.

    ~Swede :p
  14. ewen Jedi Master

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    Jun 11, 2001
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    I think I will enjoy this story,but I have to say something about Moulin Rouge.Ewan is a great actor.Nora which his company Blue Nylon did and he acted in was great.Trainspotting and Black Down shows Ewans acting abilities,but there was no acting in Moulin Rouge,just a jumbled mess,which I, along with others walked out of the theatre on.I mean Phantom Menace is did not show his acting ability either.No movie could hold a candle to "A Beautiful Mind" this year.Moulin Rouge was what? comedy?musical" or Baz insanity . I felt ashamed for him and Kidman for being in it.PEACE Ewen
  15. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Jul 10, 2001
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    Ewen: I know that the first part of Moulin Rouge was very weird, but I don't understand how you could have walked out like that! Ewan is soo great in it and he has so much emotion!!!!!!! MOULIN ROUGE IS THE GREATEST! Sorry... I just get upset when people judge a wonderful movie by the first 15 minutes or so...

    Anyway, great post, and I hope Obi's leg heals fine!!!! :D
  16. ewen Jedi Master

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    Jun 11, 2001
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    I stayed almost an hour.When I got out in the air and got over the dizziness from the camera action{Like taking an acid trip.only not feeling good about it}.I will say nothing more,just Ewan had shown his acting abilities so much better in alot better films. I guess al all have our opinions,none being better than the other.PEACE Ewen
  17. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Jan 28, 2000
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    Uppers!

    I loved Moulin Rouge.....not as much as TPM...but I thought it was very good!
    As for the comments about A Beautifil Mind...it was a great film too....but as for the golden globes....it and Moulin Rouge weren't even in the same major categories soooo.....

    well....anyway...thats simply my opinion!
    thanks for reading u guys...they loaded on the homework tonight and I just got back from swim practice and horsebackriding so i will see if I can post or not.....

    -S-WK
  18. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Jan 28, 2000
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    Well, I'm sorry it doesn't look like I am going to be able to get it up tonight :-(

    I will get it up tomorrow ASAP....

    In the meantime will you
    guys help me keep this up? pretty please?
    thanks!

    -sw-k
  19. ewen Jedi Master

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    Jun 11, 2001
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    No sweat,easy to keep a story up when it seems to have such an interesting beginning.PEACE Ewen
  20. PadawanKitara Force Ghost

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    Dec 31, 2001
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    I have to agree with Ewen on Moulin Rouge. I have seen almost all of Ewan M's movies (including the truly bizarre Japanese one) but I only got halfway thru Moulin Rouge DvD before I turned it off.

    I felt like I was Alice and had just fallen thru the looking glass. Eiter that or I was on drugs! I am so glad to hear I am not the only person who feels like he wasted his talents in that one. ( I have similair feelings about EpI)

    Sorry for the rant... now back to your regularly scheduled program....
  21. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Jul 10, 2001
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    Yes, we all have different opinions! I didn't mean to offend anyone!

    Christian's sobbing at the end was so real! It made me so sad! :(

    Anyway... UP! :D
  22. greencat336 Jedi Grand Master

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    Poor Obi! (how I love stories that I get to make that comment! [face_devil] )

    Although the strange format that the story has come up on the board makes reading a bit of a challenge, it is worth the effort. Looking forward to the next part.
  23. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Jan 28, 2000
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    Hey, Thanks for keeping this up!!!

    Sorry about that Greencat.....I will try to mess around with it a little more and see if that helps.....post coming tonight....hopefully
  24. Ani_rhymeswith_pansy Jedi Knight

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    *Stares defiantly*

    Well, I though Moulin Rouge was GREAT!

    *Long period of silence*

    Right then. Guess I'll be leaving.

    *Slowly backs out door*

    Anyway, this story is great, but......
    It needs to be UPDATED!

    :D
  25. greencat336 Jedi Grand Master

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    Jan 27, 2001
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    Finally got around to renting Moulin Rogue (yes I'm the only person in America that hasn't seen it yet. Still haven't. Went out instead of watching it. Going out to watch the Steeler game today, so won't watch it this evening either. Thank goodness for five day rentals. Got to make sure I watch it before returning it)

    Want more of this story!
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