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Saga While you were out;... and Ani/Obi AU humor tale 7/29 Epilogue and Happy Endings + Authors notes

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DarthBreezy, May 21, 2003.

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  1. PaddyJuan

    PaddyJuan Jedi Master star 4

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    Nov 15, 2002
    eeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

    Now that IS Scary news. More skywalkers? Run, Opi, do not walk to the nearest exit.

    meanwhile, sequels are of the light side.
     
  2. stacysatrip

    stacysatrip Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 20, 2002
    Aawww..another baby! They just don't take a break, do they? Very sweet though. You're right; I wish this was the ending they could have had. But, there's always AU, isn't there?
     
  3. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 6, 2002
    [face_REALLY REALLY REALLY BIG LAUGH] OMG! ANOTHER! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT POST!!!!!
     
  4. Darth_Lex

    Darth_Lex Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Nov 17, 2002
    That Ameriss sure is something. [face_mischief]

    Why do I suspect that Anakin makes absolutely no effort at all to have consideration for others when he eats spicy foods? :p [face_laugh]

    If I were Obi-Wan, I'd resign my commission and head out for Tatooine right away. Four Skywalkers is too many already. Five? Fuhgeddabouddit. [face_laugh]

    This story has been so entertaining. Thanks so much for writing it! :D :D
     
  5. vampire-jing

    vampire-jing Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Oct 10, 2002
    Yeah! Another Skywalker! Master Opee-wan is in greater trouble, hehehe.

    "Padme won't be there tonight and she won't let me eat it when she's home since I stuck her head under the covers after dinner one night... I spent the rest of the night on the couch for that one..."

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Me thinks the twins treat Padme much better than Opee-wan. ^___^




     
  6. LonErian

    LonErian Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 26, 2003
    Hello. You might remember me from Chapter 10 of this story. ;)

    With the kind permission of our author, DarthBreezy, I'm stopping in to announce that for a change of pace -- but still for some humor -- you might like to check out my new vignette.

    Heresy, by LonErian

    Thanks, Breezy! You're the best. :D
     
  7. Queengodess

    Queengodess Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jul 18, 2000
    Argh, that Lon kid is everywhere!

    Great post, Breezy - though now I'm REALLY feeling sorry for Obi-Wan! Darth Vader would have been a better option... :D

    I love it though - can't have too many Skywalkers, in my not at all humble opinion!

    Now, will it be a boy or a girl, or even another couple of twins? Oh, the endless possibilities...

    And, as I'm not sure I expressed it well in my last reply, I LOVE what you did too Yoda - drench him in food! [face_devil]

    [face_love] Kee
     
  8. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Another Skycrawler. How fun. That should really test Opi-Wan's Jedi serenity. ;)

    Ooh, and an epilogue before I head out on vacation.
     
  9. Falls_the_Shadow

    Falls_the_Shadow Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 31, 2002
    I just laughed until I hurt.

    "No, Luke, I am your father." [face_laugh]

    The ending was great, "There is another Skywalker" Poor O-Pee Wan. 8-}

     
  10. PadmeLeiaJaina

    PadmeLeiaJaina Force Ghost star 6

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    May 23, 2002
    Hee hee- I think OP1 should've taken a backwards header after that little announcement [face_laugh]

    :p God help the Jedi.
     
  11. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2003
    Awwwww! That's so sweet. Another Skywalker.
    Somebody better lock down the Jedi Temple (and Yoda's hover chair)!

    Poor Obi-Wan!

    Great job once again!!!
     
  12. geo3

    geo3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 29, 2002
    You've done such a great job on this story, DB! I will miss its many pleasures - the unexpected juxtaposition of Jedi and infants - the many perfect details like Leia force-feeding her brother with her own spoon (that is exactly her personality!), the dreamy look on Anakin's face when he thinks about having another child, and Obi's comment to "make sure the keys to you speeder are secured.."

    I'm looking forward to the promised Epilogue, and of course, to your next story...
     
  13. purpleMonkeeForceUsa

    purpleMonkeeForceUsa Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Oct 12, 2002
    hey Breezy,
    I havn't read one of your stories in a while. I like this one, it's very amusing.
     
  14. ShrunkenJedi

    ShrunkenJedi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 26, 2003
    Again, this is still so funny! Indeed, perfect ending-- I couldn't think of anything else that would have given such a sense of closure to this story while obviously leaving the future wide open. And, I love what Anakin_girl called the kids... skycrawlers indeed!
     
  15. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    Jun 4, 2002
    Hey everyone, the epilouge will be up tonight... in the meantime....


    AG

    Skycrawlers LOLOLOL!

    Yes... Anakin refers to them as force farts


    PatttyB0123

    If you had been subjected to near suffocation by the afore mentioned force farts you would have put him out too!

    JDH3

    Yes, by the time the children have grown I believe that he would have earned every one of them...

    PaddyJuan

    Yes, they are but I am a nookie writer by trade.... [face_love]

    stacysatrip

    :D

    diamond_pony2002

    I hope you like the eiplogue!

    Lex

    Aww it wasn't THAT bad for poor O-pee-Wan was it?

    vampire-jing


    I think ANYONEgets better treatment from the twins than O-pee-wan! :p


    Lon

    You're welcome... I hope you like the treatment you get in the epilogue.

    Queengodess

    To quote our dearest freind...

    I couldn't possibly say yet

    RebelMom

    Yes.. up this evening!

    Falls the Shadow

    Glad to hear it! It was a joy to write...

    PLJ

    He would probably awoke to Ameriss giving him mouth to mouth... :p

    Gina

    LOL yes!

    geo3

    Thank you.. for everything....

    purpleMonkeeForceUsa

    Glad to have you back!

    ShrunkenJedi

    Thank you! Skycrawlers indeed!




    Soon gental readers... tonight...

    Much love to everyone!



    [face_love]

     
  16. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    This epilogue is dedicated to Geo3, Anakin Girl and Lex... for showing me the joys of an AU and the fun of the lightside...


    While You Were Out


    Epilogue:


    Happy Endings




    25 years later



    Anakin and Padmé stood hand in hand, glowing with pride and happiness.

    Leia, who had left the Jedi Order at the age of 16, had proven herself a force in the Republic Senate. Utilizing her skills as a Jedi and a politician, she was already considered a strong contender for the position of Majority Leader in the next election.

    Bale Skywalker Brith stood with her husband Poulin, a Jedi who had dedicated himself to teaching, much as his mentor Anakin had done before.

    Master Obi-Wan Kenobi stood next to Lon Erian, who was cutting the braid of his newly knighted Padawan.

    Yoda, who had retired from the Jedi Council many years before had been asked to preside.

    ?Bestow upon you the rank of Jedi Knight, the council does Luke Skywalker.? said the old Master with just a hint of a smile. Luke bowed to his Masters, and then to his family, and a wide grin broke through his stoic features.

    Padmé began wiping her eyes as Anakin squeezed her hand and the rest of the assembled beings burst into a round of applause as Luke embraced his Master. Suddenly, Bale cried out and all eyes turned to see her put her free hand to her swollen belly.

    ?Are you all right?? eight voices echoed trough the chamber as Poulin pulled her close.

    Bale smiled, and her face seemed to light up the whole room. ?Yes... it?s just that... ?

    ?What?!?

    ?The baby just kicked me for the first time...?



    [face_love]
     
  17. anakin_girl

    anakin_girl Jedi Knight star 6

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    Oct 8, 2000
    AWWWWW!!!! [face_love]

    Grand-Skycrawlers! :D

    This is sweet...and Luke being Knighted nearly had me sniffling. [face_love]
     
  18. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2003
    It's over! Noooooooo!

    *sniff*

    composes self


    Perfect epilogue. Anakin and Padme' are going to be grandparents!

    I truly enjoyed every moment of this story. Thanks so much for the many, many laughs!
     
  19. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 6, 2002
    AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW SWEET!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER!!!!!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAHHHHH-HAAAAHHH-HAAAAAHH-HAAHH!!!!!!!! GREAT POST AND ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  20. PadmeLeiaJaina

    PadmeLeiaJaina Force Ghost star 6

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    May 23, 2002
    Dearie, you've got 25 years to cover here... sequel, sequel, SEQUEL!!!


    :p
     
  21. kristeh

    kristeh Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 24, 2003
    Sorry I haven't responded in a while. I've been on vacation.

    Oh, I hate to see the story end, but there's lots of room for sequels. Please? With a cherry on top?

    And, like everyone has said, perfect ending for a wonderfully funny story.

    Kristeh
     
  22. PatttyB0123

    PatttyB0123 Former RSA star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Apr 2, 2003
    Cool post. Nice I love it.
    Oh oh a new baby in the end.
    Great post. [face_love]
     
  23. vampire-jing

    vampire-jing Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Oct 10, 2002
    A happy ending! [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    this is one of the most adorable fan fictions I've ever seen!
     
  24. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Apr 20, 2000
    Grandpa Anakin.

    Cute story, with a happy ending. ( I just read your other one that had a not happy ending) I like happy endings. :)
     
  25. RebelPrincess

    RebelPrincess Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Jan 6, 2001
    What a thoroughly enjoyable tale, DarthBreezy! It was fun, cute, and hilarious (you had me laughing out loud several times) Thanks for writing it! :)
     
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