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Before - Legends Whisper in the dark [Mod Costume Challenge]

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hazel, Oct 27, 2011.

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  1. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    A little Sith in the making. Awesome creepy piece
     
  3. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    You strike the right creepy tone - very excellently written. You can feel the slimy, schemingness that is the very foundation of sithness :p =D=

    And also the "and they don't even know I did it" - [face_thinking] which is the hallmark of a sith being able to be undetected until it's too late... :(

     
  4. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Wow. Creepy little Sith in the making!

    Wonderful entry!
     
  5. mavjade

    mavjade Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    *shutters* Very creepy!

    Very dark but rightly so with a young Sith in the making.

    Good job! Great costume! =D=
     
  6. JediMara77

    JediMara77 Force Ghost star 4

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    This reminds me of the old play "Bad Seed" or the movie "The Good Son." Very creepy.
     
  7. Book-Geek

    Book-Geek Jedi Knight star 3

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    :eek: That was so scary, Hazel! I'm terrified of this kid![face_worried]
     
  8. Luna_Nightshade

    Luna_Nightshade Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Ooooh... creepy, selfish, evil little boy! A baby Sith, I think. Great response to the challenge--and quite disturbing too!
     
  9. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    For a brief moment, he whimpers and then he stops ? he'll never whimper again.

    I didn't even have to touch him.

    Tomorrow I'll be my parents little boy once again and he will be a whisper in the dark.


    It's a testament to how awesome the POV was that I had to actually read this a couple times to understand what he'd done to the baby. *shudder*


    Well done, Hazel. :)
     
  10. Raxacoricofallapatorius

    Raxacoricofallapatorius Jedi Knight star 1

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    Tomorrow I'll be my parents little boy once again and he will be a whisper in the dark.


    This line brought chills and goosebumps.

    Perfect for Halloween and an excellent costume. Well done!
     
  11. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    [face_devil]:D

    Creepy, scary, spooky and goosebumps were exactly what I was going for.


    Thanks earlybird, Jade, Briann, mav, JediMara, Book-Geek, Luna, Daena and Cade.

    [:D]
     
  12. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeah, I definitely felt the creepy and was scared like - yikes!
     
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