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Before - Legends White sunshine, mush Siri-Wan for the Love Song Roulette Challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, May 7, 2010.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    White sunshine
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: JA
    Characters: Obi-Wan, Siri Tachi
    Genre: challenge
    Summary: Obi-Wan has returned from his mission to Mandalore and he remembers Satine. And singing a song he knows who his great love is. Siri and she joins him in the song.
    Disclaimer: Star Wars is owned by G.L.
    YOU ARE THE SUNSHINE OF MY LIFE is owned by Stevie Wonder
    Note: for the Love Song Roulette Challenge
    I got 8 and YOU ARE THE SUNSHINE OF MY LIFE -- Stevie Wonder

    And Satine and Siri and Obi-Wan's love inspired me. For me Siri is the great love of Obi-Wan

    White sunshine

    He wanted to be alone.
    He had returned to the Jeditemple after an extended mission to aid the Duchess of Mandalore, Satine Kryze. And he loved the lady. She had been there when they boarded their transport. He had given her stealthy looks but all she had said was ?goodbye Obi-Wan Kenobi, May the Force be with you.? And he had followed his master and the advice he gave. He wanted to become a Jedi-knight.

    He wanted to be alone.
    His master had given him a knowing look when he took his cloak and headed to the exit of the Jinn-Kenobi apartment. His master had experienced the same. Tahl had been his great love.

    - - -

    Wandering through the great halls of the Jeditemple his steps took him to the garden of a thousand fountains. And he entered the garden where a long and winding path took him to a meadow.

    The artificial sun was rising and creating diamonds in the droplets of water that were still there after the early morning rain.
    A large old tree with big roots was standing in a meadow near the large pond. A cascading waterfall created ripples in the water and the trees surrounding the pond were blooming with fragrant flowers.

    A soft smile appeared on Obi-Wan?s features when he saw a spot beneath the roots. ?That was my hiding-place when I was a little seven year old initiate. I used it when Bruck Chun or his mates taunted me or when I wished to meditate alone. When I was 10 years old I had grown too big for it and I found another place.? And he saw the Nephril bushes. ?We have one on our balcony too.? One was bearing the fragrant white flowers and he kneeled down.
    The white flowers were opening and they gave him another memory.

    ?Master Kaagi Adin taught me the meditation of the white light when I was seven.?
    And he began to murmur the words.

    White like the eternal consciousness
    White like the beings I have met
    White like the Force

    I am white
    I am luminous
    I am a white luminous being.

    White like the snow
    White like the crystal
    White like the shimmering blade
    White like the life and light
    That is the Force
    The living Force
    That guides me
    I know
    It is beautiful
    I will return
    I will when my work is done

    The artificial sun was shining on the white flowers giving them an ethereal shine.
    For a long time he sat there silently and unmoving and listening to the cascading waterfall and the birds singing in the great tree. And he remembered a song he had sung on Mandalore. ?Satine you loved these words.?
    His voice joined the songs of nature.

    You are the sunshine of my life
    That's why I'll always be around,
    You are the apple of my eye,
    Forever you'll stay in my heart

    And he heard a reply. Softly but it was coming nearer and nearer.

    I feel like this is the beginning,
    Though I've loved you for a million years,
    And if I thought our love was ending,
    I'd find myself drowning in my own tears

    That voice, he knew that voice. ?Siri! Our love was never ended. Don?t cry Siri!? And he continued.

    You are the sunshine of my life,
    That's why I'll always stay around,
    You are the apple of my eye,
    Forever you'll stay in my heart

    ?Siri is my great love.? And he wasn?t surprised at all when Siri replied;

    You must have known that I was lonely,
    Because you came to my rescue,
    And I know that this must be heaven,
    How could so much love be inside of you?

    ?She knew that I was returning. She knew where to find me.? And standing up with a big smile on his face he sang very loud;

    You are the sunshine of my life, yeah,
  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 7

    Aug 31, 2004
    Lovely song, lovely setting, and lovely tickling [face_laugh] [face_dancing] And smooching. :D


    Oh I love this challenge!

  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Jul 26, 2005
    Obi-Wan pulled her gently down, took his cloak and covered both with it.
    And under the cloak was softly heard.

    ?Let's think sweet love.?


    That was so sweet and beautiful

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    Great response to the challenge

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  4. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Force Ghost star 6

    Jun 14, 2005
    Wow, you develope a new art form here with such sweet and beautiful stories.

  5. Ceillean

    Ceillean Jedi Grand Master star 5

    Nov 13, 2001
    It was like a musical! :D

    Don't know much about Obi-Wan or Siri but they seem cute together.

    Lovely response to the challenge.

  6. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    They are fun to write and thank you

    I keep coming back to Siri and Obi thank you.

    And there is more Siri Obi art on the fanart boards

    Thank you for the kind words.

    Siri and Obi are always fun to write.
  7. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Master star 4

    Mar 27, 2004
    It is always nice to read some lovely mush involving Siri and Obi.

    Well done.
  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    [face_dancing] Thank you and for me Obi and Siri are 'meant for each other'
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