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Beyond - Legends Who Am I ~ poem~ ~Jacen P.O.V.~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by _Jedi_of_Destiny_, Jun 4, 2003.

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  1. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oooookay.

    This is my first poem I've ever posted here and I'm wondering if it's any good. It's most likely form Jacen's point of view since he's always wondering who he should be and all that. So here goes....

    Who Am I?


    A skillful pretender
    A courageous defender
    A confused bleeding heart
    Believing a cause;playing a part

    Do I cower beneath my fears?
    Am I wise beyond my years?
    Standing tall for what I know
    Reaping what I sow
    Not knowing what way to go
    What way to take
    Who will I forsake?

    Selfish, haughty, full of deceit
    deal with the darkside eagerly meet
    Follow the path that's narrow and straight
    Force of law always vindicate

    Good? Bad? Dark? Light?

    North? West? Wrong? Right?

    Who Am I?




    SO everyone, what did you think? :)




     
  2. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 19, 2003
    Wow. That was really good. You touched on all the confusion and angst that we know Jacen is going through, but what the NJO writers won't touch on. I really liked it! Keep it up!

    ~Jedi Master Jaina
     
  3. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow.
    Thanks for your review, JediMasterJaina. I really appreciate it. :) I'm glad you liked it. [face_blush]
     
  4. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Apr 10, 2003
    it was a nice poem but i have one question. why is it listed twice in the board? i see two poems with the same exact title. hmmm, oh well, keep it up! :)
     
  5. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah, I noticed it too. My computer messed up and didn't load right and i wasn't sure if I posted or not. [face_blush] whoops. :)
     
  6. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 1, 2001
    excellent jacen poem, destiny :D

    ~aeryn
     
  7. Rogue_of-Peace

    Rogue_of-Peace Jedi Padawan star 4

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    In answer to the title question: He is.

    Nice short poem. Wish I could write real poems (with rhyming schemes) about Jacen... oh well. I'll stick to my story about him, located in my sig.... :D

    Once again, very good. Shall we see more creative writing posted by you?
     
  8. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks for taking the time to comment JMC, Aeryn_Sun and Rogue_of-Peace. :)


    Will I write more? I hope so. I'm just starting to discover fanfiction/poetry (writing it that is) and hope I will get better the more I write.


    [face_laugh] Hey Rogue, maybe I'll take your subtle hint and take a look at your Jacen fic. :)






     
  9. JediMasterKobe

    JediMasterKobe Jedi Padawan star 4

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    it's JMK, not JMC! :D oh, and while your at it, check out my fic too. the link is in my sig. :p
     
  10. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Okay, JMK! :D I'll check it out.
     
  11. Moff_D

    Moff_D Jedi Master star 5

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    Aug 3, 2002
    Hey Destiny. :)
    First try huh?
    Not bad, not bad at all.
    Jacen is a rather confused lad isn't he? Or should that be was? ;)

    Who am I?
    I'm Jean Valjean! :p
     
  12. _Jedi_of_Destiny_

    _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey, Moff. ;)

    Glad ya liked it. :)
     
  13. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Feb 9, 2003
    Owh, that was awesome! I never make the ryming part work ;)
     
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