Beyond - Legends Who Am I ~ poem~ ~Jacen P.O.V.~

Oooookay.

This is my first poem I've ever posted here and I'm wondering if it's any good. It's most likely form Jacen's point of view since he's always wondering who he should be and all that. So here goes....

Who Am I?


A skillful pretender
A courageous defender
A confused bleeding heart
Believing a cause;playing a part

Do I cower beneath my fears?
Am I wise beyond my years?
Standing tall for what I know
Reaping what I sow
Not knowing what way to go
What way to take
Who will I forsake?

Selfish, haughty, full of deceit
deal with the darkside eagerly meet
Follow the path that's narrow and straight
Force of law always vindicate

Good? Bad? Dark? Light?

North? West? Wrong? Right?

Who Am I?




SO everyone, what did you think?

 

Wow. That was really good. You touched on all the confusion and angst that we know Jacen is going through, but what the NJO writers won't touch on. I really liked it! Keep it up!

~Jedi Master Jaina

 

Wow.
Thanks for your review, JediMasterJaina. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it.

 

it was a nice poem but i have one question. why is it listed twice in the board? i see two poems with the same exact title. hmmm, oh well, keep it up!

 

Yeah, I noticed it too. My computer messed up and didn't load right and i wasn't sure if I posted or not. whoops.

 

excellent jacen poem, destiny

~aeryn

 

In answer to the title question: He is.

Nice short poem. Wish I could write real poems (with rhyming schemes) about Jacen... oh well. I'll stick to my story about him, located in my sig....

Once again, very good. Shall we see more creative writing posted by you?

 

Thanks for taking the time to comment JMC, Aeryn_Sun and Rogue_of-Peace.


Will I write more? I hope so. I'm just starting to discover fanfiction/poetry (writing it that is) and hope I will get better the more I write.


Hey Rogue, maybe I'll take your subtle hint and take a look at your Jacen fic.

 

it's JMK, not JMC! oh, and while your at it, check out my fic too. the link is in my sig.

 

Okay, JMK! I'll check it out.

 

Hey Destiny.
First try huh?
Not bad, not bad at all.
Jacen is a rather confused lad isn't he? Or should that be was?

Who am I?
I'm Jean Valjean!

 

Hey, Moff.

Glad ya liked it.

 

Owh, that was awesome! I never make the ryming part work