Beyond Who Am I ~ poem~ ~Jacen P.O.V.~

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  1. _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    May 17, 2003
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    Oooookay.

    This is my first poem I've ever posted here and I'm wondering if it's any good. It's most likely form Jacen's point of view since he's always wondering who he should be and all that. So here goes....

    Who Am I?


    A skillful pretender
    A courageous defender
    A confused bleeding heart
    Believing a cause;playing a part

    Do I cower beneath my fears?
    Am I wise beyond my years?
    Standing tall for what I know
    Reaping what I sow
    Not knowing what way to go
    What way to take
    Who will I forsake?

    Selfish, haughty, full of deceit
    deal with the darkside eagerly meet
    Follow the path that's narrow and straight
    Force of law always vindicate

    Good? Bad? Dark? Light?

    North? West? Wrong? Right?

    Who Am I?




    SO everyone, what did you think? :)




  2. ATindex Jedi Knight

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    Apr 21, 2003
    ohhh I like! Very good!

    I'm glad I'm not the only poem writer here!! Well done!

    EDIT: ooopsss, mistakie. This is Elfsheen. But I'm searching for A/T stories when i came across this and I forgot I was logged in with ATindex. So sorry. :D
  3. Ra_Skywalker420 Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Mar 11, 2003
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    oooooooooooooooooo pretty!! i really like it! wonderfully written!
  4. _Jedi_of_Destiny_ Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    May 17, 2003
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    Thanks Elfsheen and Skywalker.
    I'm glad you liked it. :)

    Elfsheen: You were looking for A/T stories and you stumbled over this? Weird. Cool but weird. See ya at FADA.>>>>>>> :)
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