Beyond - Legends Who Am I ~ poem~ ~Jacen P.O.V.~

Oooookay.

This is my first poem I've ever posted here and I'm wondering if it's any good. It's most likely form Jacen's point of view since he's always wondering who he should be and all that. So here goes....

Who Am I?


A skillful pretender
A courageous defender
A confused bleeding heart
Believing a cause;playing a part

Do I cower beneath my fears?
Am I wise beyond my years?
Standing tall for what I know
Reaping what I sow
Not knowing what way to go
What way to take
Who will I forsake?

Selfish, haughty, full of deceit
deal with the darkside eagerly meet
Follow the path that's narrow and straight
Force of law always vindicate

Good? Bad? Dark? Light?

North? West? Wrong? Right?

Who Am I?




SO everyone, what did you think?

 

ohhh I like! Very good!

I'm glad I'm not the only poem writer here!! Well done!

EDIT: ooopsss, mistakie. This is Elfsheen. But I'm searching for A/T stories when i came across this and I forgot I was logged in with ATindex. So sorry.

 

oooooooooooooooooo pretty!! i really like it! wonderfully written!

 

Thanks Elfsheen and Skywalker.
I'm glad you liked it.

Elfsheen: You were looking for A/T stories and you stumbled over this? Weird. Cool but weird. See ya at FADA.>>>>>>>