WHY? *A Young Obi-Wan Kenobi Story*

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  1. Renton Kenobi Force Ghost

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  4. imzadi Jedi Master

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    *looks around* Is there going to be a story?
  5. Renton Kenobi Force Ghost

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    Yeah! Sorry I messed up when posting it last night. :( Sorry.
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    Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn looked at his friend Mace in dismay. "You can't be serious."

    Mace smiled. "Oh comon now it cant be that bad. It's just one day watching one kid."

    Qui-Gon sighed. "Why are they doing this to me Mace? I could be off on missions, but now I am stuck here watching Jedi iniates! There are the Creche' mothers for that!"

    "All the knights take turns in taking care of the children. And you are no exception." Mace said. "His name is Obi-Wan Kenobi. I'll bring him to your appartment in the morning."
  9. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    OH little OBI I LOVE those
  10. p_stotts Force Ghost

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    Good start..now, more! :D
  11. Sarah_K Jedi Master

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    Short, but good. :)

    Sarah >^,,^<
  12. Obi-wan's Padawan Jedi Knight

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    I love Little Obi stories! He is always so adorable! Looking forward to more.
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  14. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Interesting start, :D Please post more as soon as you can, Renton.
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    The following morning Qui-Gon sat in his main living area dreading the day. 'A Jedi Master playing babysitter.' He thought sadly shaking his head. He knew the council was doing this because of Xanatos's turning. But why did he have to do this?

    A knock came at the door and Qui-Gon yelled. "It's open!" As the door opend Mace Windu walked in carrying a small pack. "Where's the kid?" Qui-Gon asked seeing him motion to look behind him.

    Looking around Mace he saw a little boy hiding behind his legs. He had ginger colored hair and was diging his face into Mace Windu's dark robe. "Hello." Qui-Gon said quietly. The little boy jumped and looked up at him. Not wanting to scare the boy Qui-Gon knelt down to his level holding out his hand. "I'm Qui-Gon Jinn, what's your name?"

    The little boy looked up at Mace then to Qui-Gon shaking the large man's hand. "I'm Obi-Wan." Obi-Wan let go of his hand and stared at Qui-Gon.

    "It's very nice to meet you Obi-Wan." Qui-Gon smiled. "Would you like to spend the day with me?" Obi-Wan nodded and Mace handed Obi-Wan his little pack and went on his way and shut the door. "How old are you Obi-Wan?"

    "I'm four." Obi-Wan said as he climbed up on the couch and sat down. "How old are you Master Kai-Gon?"

    Qui-Gon smiled and sit down next to him. "Much older than you."

    "Oh." Obi-Wan played with his hands. "Would you draw with me?" Qui-Gon smiled and pulled out crayons and paper out of Obi-Wan's pack.

    "Sure." Sitting down on the ground with Obi-Wan they began to color. Well maybe it wouldn't be so bad. As his thoughts wandered he began to think about Xanatos, wondering where he could be now. The turning of his Padawan had hurt him deeply. Qui-Gon didn't know if he could trust like that again.

    Obi-Wan looked at the older man and could see something was making him sad. As Obi-Wan continued to draw he looked up at Qui-Gon. "Why you sad?"

    Qui-Gon looked to the boy in shock. "Um, I'm not sad." The little boy looked back at his drawing.

    "Oh." He took another crayon and continued to color. "People shouldn't be sad. I don't like being sad." Qui-Gon smiled at the boy.

    "But it isn't wrong to be sad Obi-Wan." Qui-Gon said grabbing for another color. "It's okay to feel any emotion." Obi-Wan put his crayon down and tried to take in what Qui-Gon had said. "Yes I am sad Obi-Wan. Someone close to me hurt me very much." Qui-Gon admitted frowning as he continued to color his picture in grays and blacks.
  16. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    awww obi's bring the truth out of qui
  17. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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  18. Kaylla_Norn_II Jedi Knight

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    awwwww this is sweet please post more frequently and um....longer posts would be wonderful.... not a complaint I'm just greedy and want more....
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  20. p_stotts Force Ghost

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    This is very good. I like the interplay between Qui and Obi. I think this will be very theraputic for Qui.
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    Obi-Wan looked at Qui-Gon. "Oh." Folding up his pictures he put it in his pocket. "What should we do now Master Kai-Gon?"

    Qui-Gon shrugged and put away the crayons and paper. "It's your day Obi-Wan. What do you want to do?"

    Looking at his feet he said. "I don't know."

    "Would you like to go to the gardens?"
  23. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    gradens well post that way we know more of what is going on
  24. ThatJediGirl Jedi Master

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    Awwww. Young Obi is so sweet! :) Up! Post more please!
  25. p_stotts Force Ghost

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    Young Obi is very smart for his age...maybe he can help Qui to heal a little. Good post! More soon?
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