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WHY? *A Young Obi-Wan Kenobi Story*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Renton Kenobi, Jun 19, 2001.

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  1. Renton Kenobi

    Renton Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

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  2. Ewan-Kenobi

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  4. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    *looks around* Is there going to be a story?
     
  5. Renton Kenobi

    Renton Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeah! Sorry I messed up when posting it last night. :( Sorry.
     
  6. Cheryl_Kenobi

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    OK post story
     
  7. ThatJediGirl

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  8. Renton Kenobi

    Renton Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn looked at his friend Mace in dismay. "You can't be serious."

    Mace smiled. "Oh comon now it cant be that bad. It's just one day watching one kid."

    Qui-Gon sighed. "Why are they doing this to me Mace? I could be off on missions, but now I am stuck here watching Jedi iniates! There are the Creche' mothers for that!"

    "All the knights take turns in taking care of the children. And you are no exception." Mace said. "His name is Obi-Wan Kenobi. I'll bring him to your appartment in the morning."
     
  9. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    OH little OBI I LOVE those
     
  10. p_stotts

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    Good start..now, more! :D
     
  11. Sarah_K

    Sarah_K Jedi Master star 4

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    Short, but good. :)

    Sarah >^,,^<
     
  12. Obi-wan's Padawan

    Obi-wan's Padawan Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I love Little Obi stories! He is always so adorable! Looking forward to more.
     
  13. Cheryl_Kenobi

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  14. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Interesting start, :D Please post more as soon as you can, Renton.
     
  15. Renton Kenobi

    Renton Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    The following morning Qui-Gon sat in his main living area dreading the day. 'A Jedi Master playing babysitter.' He thought sadly shaking his head. He knew the council was doing this because of Xanatos's turning. But why did he have to do this?

    A knock came at the door and Qui-Gon yelled. "It's open!" As the door opend Mace Windu walked in carrying a small pack. "Where's the kid?" Qui-Gon asked seeing him motion to look behind him.

    Looking around Mace he saw a little boy hiding behind his legs. He had ginger colored hair and was diging his face into Mace Windu's dark robe. "Hello." Qui-Gon said quietly. The little boy jumped and looked up at him. Not wanting to scare the boy Qui-Gon knelt down to his level holding out his hand. "I'm Qui-Gon Jinn, what's your name?"

    The little boy looked up at Mace then to Qui-Gon shaking the large man's hand. "I'm Obi-Wan." Obi-Wan let go of his hand and stared at Qui-Gon.

    "It's very nice to meet you Obi-Wan." Qui-Gon smiled. "Would you like to spend the day with me?" Obi-Wan nodded and Mace handed Obi-Wan his little pack and went on his way and shut the door. "How old are you Obi-Wan?"

    "I'm four." Obi-Wan said as he climbed up on the couch and sat down. "How old are you Master Kai-Gon?"

    Qui-Gon smiled and sit down next to him. "Much older than you."

    "Oh." Obi-Wan played with his hands. "Would you draw with me?" Qui-Gon smiled and pulled out crayons and paper out of Obi-Wan's pack.

    "Sure." Sitting down on the ground with Obi-Wan they began to color. Well maybe it wouldn't be so bad. As his thoughts wandered he began to think about Xanatos, wondering where he could be now. The turning of his Padawan had hurt him deeply. Qui-Gon didn't know if he could trust like that again.

    Obi-Wan looked at the older man and could see something was making him sad. As Obi-Wan continued to draw he looked up at Qui-Gon. "Why you sad?"

    Qui-Gon looked to the boy in shock. "Um, I'm not sad." The little boy looked back at his drawing.

    "Oh." He took another crayon and continued to color. "People shouldn't be sad. I don't like being sad." Qui-Gon smiled at the boy.

    "But it isn't wrong to be sad Obi-Wan." Qui-Gon said grabbing for another color. "It's okay to feel any emotion." Obi-Wan put his crayon down and tried to take in what Qui-Gon had said. "Yes I am sad Obi-Wan. Someone close to me hurt me very much." Qui-Gon admitted frowning as he continued to color his picture in grays and blacks.
     
  16. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    awww obi's bring the truth out of qui
     
  17. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

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    oooo, I like!!!
     
  18. Kaylla_Norn_II

    Kaylla_Norn_II Jedi Youngling star 2

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    awwwww this is sweet please post more frequently and um....longer posts would be wonderful.... not a complaint I'm just greedy and want more....
     
  19. Ewan-Kenobi

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    Obi has bad gwammah. ;)
     
  20. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    This is very good. I like the interplay between Qui and Obi. I think this will be very theraputic for Qui.
     
  21. Cheryl_Kenobi

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  22. Renton Kenobi

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    Obi-Wan looked at Qui-Gon. "Oh." Folding up his pictures he put it in his pocket. "What should we do now Master Kai-Gon?"

    Qui-Gon shrugged and put away the crayons and paper. "It's your day Obi-Wan. What do you want to do?"

    Looking at his feet he said. "I don't know."

    "Would you like to go to the gardens?"
     
  23. Cheryl_Kenobi

    Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    gradens well post that way we know more of what is going on
     
  24. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awwww. Young Obi is so sweet! :) Up! Post more please!
     
  25. p_stotts

    p_stotts Jedi Master star 4

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    Young Obi is very smart for his age...maybe he can help Qui to heal a little. Good post! More soon?
     
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