I said this in the "best and worst awards" and this seemed to be well taken. I'll put what I said here: A lot of people hate the fireplace scene, but you have to understand that he's a 19 year old boy whose never bared his soul to a girl before. It's supposed to sound like cheesy gothic coffee house poetry. Truly, it sounded just like the angst ridden poetry of teens at cafe roma in vegas. Lucas captured the persona of the in love teenager well. It may be because I'm also 19, the same age as Anakin. THe stuff I've written my boyfriend in letters and said to him is about as bad . I'm sure many can't deny they've said dorky things too.