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Saga Without Understanding (Re: Challenge From the Octopus' Garden; poem)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Alexis_Wingstar, Jul 11, 2008.

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  1. Alexis_Wingstar

    Alexis_Wingstar Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 16, 2006
    Title: Without Understanding
    Author: Alexis_Wingstar
    Character: From my OC, Koria Rimstar's POV
    Note: This is in response to Challenge from the Octopus' Garden.



    [b]Without Understanding[/b]

    You know it don?t come easy.
    I?m not smart.
    I?m not a deep thinker.
    I don?t understand the mysteries of the Force.
    I suspect,
    However,
    The Force has it in for me.

    I am drawn to you.
    Like a moth to the flame,
    My soul flutters
    With excitement when you are here.
    I can?t have you,
    However.
    The Force has another plan.

    You stand there,
    So dignified,
    So sure,
    A beacon of light and peace in the universe.
    Untouchable,
    You stand apart.
    Unchained, no ties.

    No love.

    Yet here I am,
    Drawn to you.
    It was you who said,
    It was the Force who guided me to you.
    Why?

    Why would it
    Have me love you
    When you refuse my love?
    I serve the Force,
    Going to where it leads,
    And it?s always by your side.

    I follow,
    Without understanding
    Why the Force wants to break my heart.
     
  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Aug 21, 2006
    Loved it Alexis

    Great poem
     
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