Without you - A Tahiri poem

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This came up one night and I wrote it down:
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Without you


Without you my heart is naked
Falling into the shadows of my soul


Without you my heart is chained
With the key lost long ago


Without you my heart is stained
Shattered with pieces of my past with you


Without you my heart has borders
With no chance of fading at all


Without you I?m lost
Forever vanished in my minds memory of you


-Fin-

 

Poor Tahiri!
Good job, Elfsheen!

 

Thanks for noticing Jade_Walker!

 

Oh poor Tahiri! Beautifully done Elfsheen!

UP!

EJ

 

Also thanks for reading Eowyn_Jade! Sad it is indeed.

 

Nice

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Comic Book Guy

 

Without you my heart is naked
Falling into the shadows of my soul

...

Without you I?m lost
Forever vanished in my minds memory of you


those are my two favorite stanzas. beautiful poem.

~aeryn

 

Without you my heart is stained
Shattered with pieces of my past with you

moving.

 

That was beautiful, Elfsheen, I can't wait 'till you write a full-lenght fic!!

 

Thank you all for reading Moving and sad this peom was meant to be!

 

Great. I like seeing differant mediums used. Not just all first person stories.

 

Thanks! No, no not at all

 

To my master I must answer, to obay is my duty. Tell up this is her wish

 

A trusty sock I have

 

Oh, poor Tahiri! Your poem is beautiful, though. Great work, Elfsheen.

 

Wow Thats just beatufil!

 

Ohhh thanks Rogue_Even and SilverWanderer

 

so beautiful !

me

 

Thankies Aelie