Beyond Wrath of the Gods, a SW/SG crossover *updated 3/1/12* (mini-update)

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  1. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    AN: Well...here is my newest story idea, and the first in Beyond. As the title said, it is a SW/Stargate crossover (and no, I couldn't think up a better title...sue me:D). That being said, I don't have much to say up here other than this..we never found out what happened to the Furlings right? Well I am going to pull a page out of other peoples books and have them be the ancient race of another galaxy. In this case it will be SW (Celestials). Not much else to say up here, but there will be another note at the bottom. So please leave a review and let you know what you think. I really don't have time to start another story if people don't let me know how good it is.
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    Unexplored Star system

    Outer Rim

    New Republic/Galactic Empire border

    5 ABY

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    ?We are coming up on the derelict Commander Skywalker,? a dark-haired man said.

    ?Thanks for letting me know Sunri, contact Leia and let her know we found it,? Luke Skywalker, the only remaining Jedi Knight answered.

    ?Of course sir,? Sunri Oceanrider answered, tapping his comm officer on the shoulder.

    After that was done, the middle-aged man continued to pilot the freighter towards the massive derelict ship currently filling its viewports. It was a good twice as long as the typical Star Destroyer, but it looked?old? like it had been sitting in deep space for centuries, if not millennia. Even with that it had a recognizable docking bay that the large freighter was heading for; ready to drop off the two-hundred-man team that was assigned to exploring the ship. Once the freighter docked with it?s small escort of four X-Wing starfighters the crew disembarked, readying weapons. Luke walked in front of the men, nodding approval, since Jedi or not he knew it was too risky to explore this large of a ship without being prepared for anything.

    ?Okay men, no one knows much about this derelict, if General Solo hadn?t had a malfunction we most likely never would have found her. We don?t have the crew to get this vessel running, so concentrate on clearing the rooms. A salvage team is on its way, but they won?t arrive for a while yet, let?s make sure it is ready for them,? Luke ordered, absently fingering his lightsaber.

    ?Yes sir!? the Republic Marines chorused before marching down the boarding ramp and spreading out, taking cover behind the wreckage in the hanger, not staying in the open for more than a few seconds. Luke followed them out, not quite as cautious, but he did have his lightsaber drawn and ignited, shining a soft green light on the darkened hanger.

    As the group swept through the hanger they didn?t find any bodies of the crew, but there was what looked like the remains of truly ancient shuttles, none of a recognizable design. Luke just continued walking past them, following a group of the Marines, who were checking every nook and cranny for Imperials or pirates. So far they hadn?t found anything, but one could never be too cautious. Once they reached the door that led to the rest of the ship, the marines took up staggered firing posts, almost one hundred blasters aimed at the door. When a couple privates pried open the door, nothing happened, so a scout was sent out. After a few minutes a voice came over the comm links, ?No sign of Imperials or pirates. It?s safe to come out here!?

    The Colonel in charge of the Marines nodded and gave a quick hand gesture, sending half his group down the hall, leaving the remaining fifty men to guard the hanger. Luke swept by these guards, his dark Jedi robe billowing behind him. The corridors of the vessel were just as dark as the hanger, if not darker since they lacked the benefit of a starfield to lighten things. Quite frankly it was a miracle that even the gravity and life-support were working after Force knew how long this ship had been abandoned.

    Luke followed behind one of the marines who seemed to be heading towards what could only be the ships bridge. Once they reached the room it was to find an area with a large viewport and chairs surrounding the walls, with a pedestal in the center. The dim
  2. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    Okay, this is just a test post since a reader has brought to my attention that it won't let her post a reply and that most options are missing. I don't know if this will help any, but if it doesn't I'll let a mod know and see if that helps.
  3. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    Well this was an unusually fast update for me. I don't normally type this fast, but I got a spurt of inspiration that let me keep this up. That being said, I make no promises at keeping up such a fast pace. Let me know what you think of the chapter and it will help a lot (since it gives me more ideas for the next one)
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    Sol System

    Milky Way Galaxy

    Planet Earth
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    While the Redemption was getting pounded in orbit, the Tel?tak with SG1 aboard had stopped over an open plateau after almost crashing into multiple mountains. Once the vessel had stopped, a beam of bright blue light stabbed into the ice sheet below them, melting a hole clean through it.

    ?Sir, how long is this going to take?? Samantha Carter asked from the back of the scout ship.

    Jack O?Neill didn?t respond, he most likely couldn?t even understand her anymore. He just got up and ran back into the ring room. Bre?tac took his seat at the controls, while the rest of SG-1 stood behind him.

    ?Anubis can not have missed our arrival,? Teal?c said

    ?You are correct, Gliders and Al?kesh approaching,? Bre?tac, replied, ?They will be in firing range in thirty seconds.?

    Outside the scout ship dozens of Goa?uld vessels were bearing down on them, too much to handle even if they could maneuver.

    ?More vessel?s approaching?? Bre?tac said.

    ?Sir we?re about to have company!? Sam called into the back of the ship.

    ?They are not Goa?uld,? Bre?tac added.

    When she looked out the window, Carter saw a swarm of F-302 fighters firing their missiles at the Goa?uld ships, blowing several apart. And behind them came a true sight for sore eyes?the Prometheus.

    ?SG-1 this is General Hammond, good to see you in one piece,? their former commander radioed in.

    ?It?s good to see you too General. Come on guys,? Carter said, running into the ring room with Daniel and Teal?c following her.

    ?Protect that ship at all costs, don?t let anything through,? Hammond said, as the Prometheus? shields flared from an Al?kesh firing on it.

    Back in the Tel?tak SG-1 was preparing to ring down to the surface. Jack was pulling all the things he had piled on the ring transporter off, while the rest of the team was prepping their weapons.

    ?Colonel, how exactly are we going to get down there?? Carter asked.

    Teal?c looked down and realized how they were going to do it, ?The rings.?

    ?Makes sense, the Ancients built the rings so there has to be a set down there,? Daniel pointed out.

    ?The signal just couldn?t penetrate a mile of ice,? Sam realized, before grabbing her rifle, and stepping up with the rest of the team to be beamed down to the surface.
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    ?We?re taking damage to the outer hull!? a member of the Prometheus? crew called out.

    ?Shields are down to 50%!? Walter shouted.

    ?All our remaining F-302?s have expended their ammunition,? the Captain said.

    ?We can?t take them aboard, have them divert to McMurdo, and stay on station, we have to protect SG-1,? Hammond ordered.

    Right after he said that, Bre?tac pulled the Tel?tak out from under the Prometheus, clearing the way for the ship to move.

    ?Shields are failing!? the Captain called out.

    ?The scout ship has cleared the hull!?

    ?Take us into orbit, lets take the fight to Anubis,? Hammond ordered, leading to the Earth vessel launching into space despite being bombarded by Anubis? fleet.

    Back on the Redemption, the ancient Furling vessel was given some breathing room by Anubis? flagship moving to focus on the Prometheus. But it was still at the mercy of something like a dozen Ha?tak?s, and that was not good odds, even for a Furling vessel.

    ?Shields are weakening, diverting power to compensate,? Sentinel said, the AI running the ship practically on his own.

    ?These Goa?uld mean business?what did this planet do to get on their bad side?? Sunri asked, trying to help however he could?and not doing a very good job.

    ?Most likely Anubis decided to enslave them, no other planet in this Galaxy has the same population,? Sentinel answered, still able to hold a conversation, even while almost casually dismem
  4. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Hooray! I can finally post! Hey-nonny-nonny!

    [face_dancing]

    Anyway, this is an exciting fanfic crossover and I am happy that you decided to write it.

    ?NOOO!!!? the Goa?uld Lord screamed?before the object destroyed his body, along with the rest of his bridge.

    That scene reminded me so much of Vader in RotS.

    I wonder if anybody else will lose his or her temper when realisation hits hard that there is an entire planet having very intimate knowledge.

    All the sithly plots of Palpatine uncovered, including his clone tanks for himself to... resurrect. (Wait, that sounds like the Resurrection tanks of Battlestar Galactica, tz!)

    The history of the Skywalker family.

    Your fanfic promises to be great fun and there are days in the life of a teacher that are not fun. Please let me be on your update list!
  5. Lady_Misty Force Ghost

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    I like Stargate! I was following another crossover but tha twas awhile ago and it's unfinished.

    I'm with Azure, think of all the stuff they can learn about the past and, maybe, the future if you go by the EU.

    Please add me to the PM list.
  6. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Yeah! You here!

    That makes two keen readers, luv. I wonder who else finds out that this fic here will be excellent fun.
  7. Hazel Force Ghost

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    Yeah, this is fun. :)
  8. LVB Force Ghost

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    Ha, I can't imagine Teal'c's face when he sees Luke! I am also looking forward to reading your explanation! It's gonna be a doozy :)
  9. Tevase2 Jedi Grand Master

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    The reply button's showing up, GREAT STORY BTW :)
  10. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    Wow...that was a lot of reviews. Then again, the most I usually get is just a couple...thanks to everyone who took the time to review. I am working on Chapter 3, and hopefully I can have it up soon. As for the PM list...so far I have:

    AzureAngel2
    Lady_Misty

    If anyone else wants on it just ask and you shall receive.
  11. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    AN: Well here is the chapter. Not much to say up here, so please review and let me know what you think.

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    Sol System

    Milky Way Galaxy

    Orbit of Planet Earth


    Prometheus
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    ?Well General? Is this enough proof?? Luke asked again, wondering why the bridge had gone silent the moment he entered it.

    No one said a word, and Luke looked around the bridge to see several people with varying degrees of shock written on their faces. Most of them just had their eyes widen, but several had open mouths, and one young crewman was pointing at Luke with his mouth opening and closing like a fish out of water. Naturally enough, Hammond wasn?t showing any outward signs of shock, but mentally he was as shaken as the rest of the crew.

    ?How are you here? Luke Skywalker doesn?t exist,? Hammond said once he recovered enough.

    Luke cocked his head to the side, ?I don?t exist? I?m standing right here aren?t I? And seriously, what gives you the idea that I don?t??

    Hammond tried to say something, but it was hard to think up the right words?how exactly would he explain to this man that Star Wars was fiction and so was anyone named Skywalker. Luke just stood their studying the man in front of him both visually and through the Force. It was obvious he was a military man, by the way he carried himself, but the Force readings he was getting were odd to say the least. The General seemed to be in just as much shock as his men, and was conflicted on the inside. But Hammond finally turned fully towards Luke to start explaining.

    ?I still don?t know what to believe here, but the Luke Skywalker we know is a fictional character from a popular science fiction movie called ?Star Wars?. That?s how we knew about the X-Wing, it is what Skywalker always used?by all rights you shouldn?t be here right now,? Hammond said.

    Luke frowned at that, ?A science fiction movie? And that?s how you knew about the X-Wing? Sentinel is this thing translating correctly??

    Hammond frowned himself, wondering who Luke was talking to before the device in his hand said, ?No Master Skywalker, it is working correctly, I ran the translation myself multiple times.?

    ?Who was that??

    ?My vessels AI, Sentinel. Look, I don?t know how what you say could be true, but I need to talk to your world?s leader. On the way to this Galaxy we found 10,000 people in stasis pods on my vessel. About half of them look human, and Sentinel called them ?Alterans?. The other half though?we call them Celestial?s. But Sentinel said they were the people his masters left behind?and he called them Furlings.?

    Hammond?s eyes did widen on that?he didn?t know any race called ?Alterans? but Furlings?the last of the Four Great Races?

    ?I can arrange a meeting with our President, but you will have to go through a lot of security,? the General said.

    ?Your President? Does he speak for your whole world?? Luke asked.

    ?No, just the United States of America, who this ship belongs to. Our world is made up of many nations, but we all share a common will,? Hammond said, glossing over the difficulties of having to deal with other nations with different goals.

    Luke didn?t buy it though?the Force being more than enough to tell when someone was lying, ?Your people are still separate nations? That will be a problem; I won?t have my ship or people used to conquer the rest. And I won?t go to a secret meeting with only one nations leader.?

    ?The leaders of the other major nations will be there too, but you will need to take one of our planes there after the Prometheus lands?and you will have to stay aboard this vessel.?

    ?Let me guess General, you haven?t told your people that this vessel exists have you? Or that they aren?t alone in this galaxy? I can?t be party to a deception like that. I will meet your President, but with my own shuttle, and I will take my ship and leave if you try and stop me,? Luke said, not wanting to be part of a mass deception. The people below needed to know what had happened to their world.

    ?I?m sorry, but I can?t let you do that Commander Skywalker. We have ke
  12. Lady_Misty Force Ghost

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    Classic! Everyone's shocked to see Luke Skywalker I mean.

    Yeah, Teal'c has struck me as a reserved person. Although I might be wrong.
  13. LVB Force Ghost

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    From what little you wrote of Teal'c, I think you have him downpat. I am so curious to see how you are going to tie it all in to the movies. That will be an interesting chapter to write, I'd wager! Thanks for sharing :)
  14. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Do not worry about getting Teal´C right, because you already did.

    :D

    Celestials those who are referred to as the architects of places just like Centerpoint Station?

    [face_idea]

    This is going to be an interesting crossover indeed!
  15. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    AN: Well here is the next chapter. Not a whole lot to say about this, but I hope you all like it. Here we go with Chapter 4:


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    Sol System

    Milky Way Galaxy

    Planet Earth

    Stargate Command
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    ?So that is a Stargate? It?s so small though,? Luke said, looking at the ring in front of him.

    ?Yes it is, and that is the general reaction when people see it for the first time,? Daniel answered, playing tour-guide for Luke?which still felt extremely odd.

    ?I can see why?something that small with that much power?? Luke said, shaking his head slightly.

    ?I take it the Furlings didn?t bring any with them?? Daniel asked.

    ?No they didn?t, the only Celestial constructs that are left are stations like Centerpoint. Though that is impressive in its own right, since it can drag planets through hyperspace,? Luke answered, still un-consciously calling the Furlings by the name he was more familiar with.

    ?They didn?t feel the need to bring any Stargates. Our hyperdrives were efficient enough that we didn?t need them,? Sentinel chimed in from the wrist projector Luke had taken to wearing.

    ?I?m still not used to that AI of yours,? Daniel said, staring at the green warrior that was Sentinel.

    ?I took a while to get used to him also. By the way, any luck on meeting this ?Lucas? person?? Luke asked, thinking back to the meeting in the Oval Office.

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    Start Flashback
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    ?You know who I am too? And what I did?? Luke asked.

    ?Of course, you are famous for what you did Luke Skywalker. Though I didn?t believe you were real until now,? Teal?c said, staying remarkably calm.

    Luke shook his head, ?I?m not sure what to think anymore?a planet a galaxy away knows my life story. How is this possible anyway??

    ?Who knows, all we know is that almost thirty years ago a man named George Lucas created a movie called Star Wars. It had you star in it among other people, but like Teal?c said, we never believed it could be true,? Daniel said, obviously less well-versed than Teal?c, but still knowing enough about Star Wars to answer the question.

    ?Lucas? Never heard of anyone by that name, so he can?t have been from my Galaxy?the dates are off anyway. I only destroyed the Death Star five years ago,? Luke said.

    ?That can?t be right then...we need some solid answers here,? Daniel said, as curious as Luke now.

    ?When can we meet ?Lucas? about his movies?? Luke asked.

    ?It can?t be any time soon?it is going to be a nightmare trying to hold the country together after your stunt. We need to concentrate on that,? Sam said.

    Luke nodded?he didn?t want to wait but he could understand why they were making him.

    *************
    End Flashback
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    Daniel shook his head, ?No, it seems that after your stunt in DC he refused to let anyone near him. Something is off there, but we can?t force the issue.?

    Luke nodded, ?I understand. So, is there anything else you want to show me??

    ?Only the cafeteria, unless you aren?t hungry,? Daniel said.

    ?I could use some food actually,? Luke replied.

    Daniel nodded, and was about to lead Luke down to the cafeteria when Dr. Weir walked up to the two men. The woman looked harried to say the least, her dark hair askew and sticking up in random places.

    ?Dr. Weir, you look like you?ve gone through a battle?? Daniel said, still not used to being under her command.

    Weir nodded, ?Trust me, I feel like I have been. Disclosure has thrown the world into chaos, just like we feared it would. But thanks to Commander Skywalker helpfully letting us use his ships it has been relatively easy to hold down the riots.?

    Luke inclined his head slightly, ?It was the least I could do. Your people have let me and my men stay here and recover from our journey. And your techs have been a lot of help in getting the Redemption back up and running.?

    ?Your welcome. Now then, Dr. Jackson, we haven?t had any luck in getting Colonel O?Neill out of Antarctica yet. The other countries are not happy about us having control of such a powerful weapon. And rouge states like North Korea and Iran are threatening to atta
  16. Lady_Misty Force Ghost

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    Man, Luke has made quite a mess.

    AAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
  17. Onderon1 Force Ghost

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    Interesting piece here. It's nice to see someone else working on the idea. :)

    I've worked on an SW/SG (and more series :p) crossover, but it's on hold at the moment while I explore more of the SW side of things.

    I'm intrigued by your interpretation of the Furlings - the idea that they're the Celestials is innovative. =D=

    Good luck with your work, [face_peace]
    Onderon1
  18. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Love all the complications, the politics, the action, but most of all I like your humour.

    Luke shook his head, ?I?m not sure what to think anymore?a planet a galaxy away knows my life story. How is this possible anyway??

    ?Who knows, all we know is that almost thirty years ago a man named George Lucas created a movie called Star Wars. It had you star in it among other people, but like Teal?c said, we never believed it could be true,? Daniel said, obviously less well-versed than Teal?c, but still knowing enough about Star Wars to answer the question.

    ?Lucas? Never heard of anyone by that name, so he can?t have been from my Galaxy?the dates are off anyway. I only destroyed the Death Star five years ago,? Luke said.

    ?That can?t be right then...we need some solid answers here,? Daniel said, as curious as Luke now.

    ?When can we meet ?Lucas? about his movies?? Luke asked.


    You are also brilliant with witty dialogues.

    :D
  19. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    AN: Well here is the next chapter. I don't have much to say, so let me know what you think of it.

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    Sol System

    Milky Way Galaxy

    Orion Arm

    Planet Earth

    Stargate Command
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    ?We?ve received an IDC ma?am. It?s SG-4, they have met the Goa?uld,? Walter reported.

    ?Open the iris,? Weir ordered, leading Luke and Daniel down into the gateroom proper.

    As the trio watched, a group of three men and one woman stepped out of the gate.

    ?/I am Camulus of the Goa?uld. This is Amaterasu, Yu, and his First Prime Oshu,/? the lead Goa?uld said.

    ?I am Dr. Elisabeth We?? Weir started, before Amaterasu cut her off.

    ?/Yes, that is all well and good, but we have work to do, and this has been a long journey, because of your ridiculous security precautions,/? the only female Goa?uld said.

    ?All right then?right this way,? Weir said, leading them to the meeting room.

    Soon enough, the group was sitting at the large meeting table, with the Goa?uld still acting like their typical haughty selves. Camalus was sitting next to Yu, while Amaterasu was next to Daniel. Weir and Luke sat at opposite ends of the table, with the later trying to get a read on the Goa?uld through the Force. Of course, all he got was a deep feeling of darkness?not too dissimilar to Palpatine and his father.

    ?/Your?unexpected?defeat of Anubis has created an unstable situation among the System Lords. So it was decided that we would divide his territories and armies evenly amongst ourselves,/? Amaterasu started.

    ?How civilized of you,? Daniel joked.

    ?/Yes, but unfortunately one among as has broken the deal,/? Amaterasu added, Daniel?s sarcasm going completely over her head.

    ?Oh let me guess?it was Ba?al wasn?t it? He always was the most opportunistic one of you,? Daniel guessed.

    ?/He was able to locate the planet where Anubis produced his Kull warriors,/? Camalus said.

    ?He was able to locate Tartarus?? Daniel asked, surprised by that revelation.

    Camalus nodded, ?/Yes, and in battle the Kull are far superior to the Jaffa. It is only a matter of time until Ba?al overwhelms our forces/.?

    ?This is all very interesting, but how does it involve us? Ba?al is no threat to Earth,? Weir pointed out, ?Anubis couldn?t defeat us with over thirty Ha?tak, I fail to see how Ba?al could do any better.?

    Yu whispered into Oshu?s ear, and the young Jaffa spoke up, ?My master wishes to say that it is well known the Tau?ri posses a powerful new weapon, and that you used it to defeat Anubis? fleet. And that it is far beyond your current level of technology.?

    Luke chose that moment to speak up, ?It won?t be for long. I am providing them with more technology then they could ever need.?

    ?/And who are you to say that? No humans have technology more advanced than the Tau?ri aside from the Tollan?who have been destroyed,/? Amaterasu said.

    Luke smiled slightly, ?I wouldn?t bank on that idea.?

    The Goa?uld still looked skeptical, but Camalus spoke up, ?/Even if what you say is true, there are still dozens of planets that don?t have your advantages. If Ba?al defeats us, he will come for them./?

    ?I still fail to see how that will effect us, the Asgard can handle protecting those planets,? Weir said.

    ?/We haven?t heard from the Asgard in years. Some doubt they have the power to enforce the treaty any longer, not to mention they didn?t come to your aid when Anubis attacked,/? Amaterasu replied.

    ?That?s funny, we talk to them all the time. They didn?t come to our aid because they knew they didn?t need to,? Daniel bluffed.

    ?/Perhaps, but Ba?al feels they can?t enforce the treaty, and he will move on those planets,/? Camulus said.

    Weir frowned, ?Perhaps a short recess is needed. Is that okay with you??

    Camulus nodded, ?/Of course, we are your guests after all./?

    Weir nodded, and motioned Daniel and Luke over to another room.

    ?How many planets are protected under that treaty?? the Doctor asked.

    ?Twenty-seven if you count Earth. A lot of them have major populations too,? Daniel answered.

    ?The Asgard haven?t recovered enough to enforce the treaty have they?? Weir asked.

    Daniel
  20. Lady_Misty Force Ghost

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    Ooh!

    Things are getting even more interesting!
  21. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Soon enough, the group was sitting at the large meeting table, with the Goa?uld still acting like their typical haughty selves. Camalus was sitting next to Yu, while Amaterasu was next to Daniel. Weir and Luke sat at opposite ends of the table, with the later trying to get a read on the Goa?uld through the Force. Of course, all he got was a deep feeling of darkness?not too dissimilar to Palpatine and his father.

    Power hungry folk gathered here, no surprise Luke gets such readings. Thanks for all the background data & explanations.

    Great update!

    *has 2 jobs now so might react slow in future*
  22. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

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    AN: Well here is another chapter. Not much more to say, so here we go:
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    Asgard Mothership Daniel Jackson

    En-route to Orilla, capital of the Asgard Empire

    May 15th 2004
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    ?How are we going to get the knowledge out of Jack anyway Thor?? Daniel asked as the dark blue of hyperspace lit the bridge.

    ?I am going to interface Colonel O?Neill?s mind with the Daniel Jackson?s computer,? Thor answered, manipulating the control crystals.

    ?Why does this man?s knowledge matter so much?? Naverra asked.

    ?Jack has the knowledge of the Ancients downloaded into his mind. Actually this is the second time this has happened to him,? Daniel explained, still not making the link between Alteran and Ancient.

    Naverra?s red eyebrows shot into her hairline, ?This man has the knowledge of my people? The only one of our races to set up repository?s was mine, so I assume that you meant us.?

    It was Daniel?s turn to stand in shock, ?You?re an Ancient? Thor why didn?t you tell us that??

    The Asgard turned to Daniel, ?I assumed you knew. Alteran is what the Ancients called themselves.?

    ?I can?t believe I am standing next to an actual Ancient that isn?t Ascended?? Daniel said, before the group was distracted by a familiar voice coming out of the comm system.

    ?Hello? Testing?one?two?three?? Jack?s voice said.

    ?Jack, is that you?? Daniel asked, momentarily distracted from Naverra.

    ?Daniel? Where am I?? Jack asked.

    ?You?re mind is interfaced with the Daniel Jackson, Colonel O?Neill,? Teal?c answered.

    ?WHAT?!!? Jack yelled.

    ?Thor?s ship is named Daniel Jackson,? Teal?c explained.

    ?Oh, okay then,? Jack, replied, playing around with the lights, before showing himself as a hologram.

    ?Nice to actually see you Jack,? Daniel joked.

    ?Nice to see you too Daniel, who?s the lady?? Jack asked, noticing Naverra.

    ?I am Naverra, head of the Alteran portion of the Redemption Expedition,? Naverra answered.

    ?Oh?now I remember you. Sorting through all this stuff in my head isn?t easy. So, how are the rest of your people?? Jack asked, the Alteran knowledge in his head slowly being filtered out.

    ?They are in Furling stasis right now, we are helping Commander Thor with the Replicators,? Naverra answered, before Jack was distracted again?his jaw dropping on seeing Luke walk onto the bridge.

    ?Is that who I think it is?? Jack asked.

    ?Yes, I am Luke Skywalker, and yes, you aren?t going crazy,? Luke said with a sigh?he was getting annoyed with all the attention.

    ?Well?that is interesting?so what did you need me for Thor?? Jack asked, asking yet another question.

    ?We need you to use your knowledge to develop a counter to the Replicators,? Thor answered.

    Jack nodded, and set to work, sifting through the large amount of information in his head while working on the panel in front of him. The group watched this, until Jack vanished again, concentrating on his work. The ship continued onto Orilla, while Luke talked with Naverra.

    ?So, what exactly are these Replicators?? the Jedi asked.

    ?From what Dr. Jackson told me, they are self-replicating machines. They are attracted to any technology more advanced than their own, which is why they are attacking the Asgard. Honestly they sound like the machines my people were experimenting on in the Pegasus Galaxy,? Naverra answered.

    ?Self-replicating machines?I can only imagine how much of a threat they must be,? Luke said, remembering stories about the massive Droid armies of the Confederacy in the Clone Wars?and imagining what could have happened if they could self-replicate.

    ?Oh it gets worse?they can modify any technology they find beyond its normal limits,? Daniel added from his place by Jack?s stasis pod.

    ?If that is the case it makes me wonder what my people were thinking building machines like them?the Alteran?s on Atlantis should have known better,? Naverra said, shaking her head.

    ?Did you say Atlantis? You know where the Lost City of the Ancients is?? Daniel asked, once again focusing on the surprised Alteran woman.

    ?Lost City? Atlantis never returned to the Old Galaxy?? Naverra as
  23. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jun 14, 2005
    star 6
    Do not worry. I am not going to murder you for matching Luke to somebody else. In the EU he had many love affairs that all went tragic until he married Mara.

    :D

    Anyway, I start to like Thor. Can´t wait for the next update.
  24. Lady_Misty Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Mar 21, 2007
    star 4
    If I killed you this fic wouldn't be finished. :p

    Nice!
  25. Skywalker_T-65 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Nov 19, 2009
    star 6
    AN: Well here is another chapter. I'm impressed with how quickly I worked this up honestly. That being said, please let me know how I did.


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    Epsilon Indi System

    Milky Way Galaxy

    Orion Arm

    Horizon

    May 20th 2004

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    "Man this thing is a wreck?wonder what happened here?" a Republic Marine asked, as he recovered from being beamed onto the wrecked Furling destroyer.

    Luke didn't answer; he just looked at the wrecked bulkheads and carbon scoring. Whatever had attacked the vessel had done a number on it. Luke stepped around some debris on the way to the bridge, hoping to find something worth salvaging. It was rough going, since the vessel was barely intact in some places, and Luke wasn't used to the somewhat clumsy space suit he had to use.

    "And there aren't any bodies either?I wonder where the crew is?" another Marine said, moving a piece of wreckage aside, the large chunk of metal floating in the zero-gravity.

    "Who knows?I just hope we don't run into a lot of them," a scientist said, one of their experts on Furling technology.

    Finally, the group reached the bridge, and Luke gave a slight wave of his hand using the Force to open the door. As the group walked in, emergency lights activated?pitifully shining down on the shattered bridge. Again, there was the strange lack of bodies?but this time it was easily explainable. The bridge viewscreen?so similar to the Redemption's?was shattered into a million pieces. That left the bridge exposed to space, allowing any bodies that had been aboard to float out.

    Luke walked up to a console and set his hand on it, Sentinel taking control of the barely functional Furling vessel. The console lit up with the deep green color that was the signature of Furling tech, humming slightly as long dormant, and damaged, systems activated.

    "This vessel is barely intact Master Skywalker. I believe I can activate secondary power, but the main reactor is too damaged to risk activating," Sentinel said, as the bridge started to light up.

    Blast doors came down over the shattered viewport, and a sound like wind announced the return of an atmosphere to the vessel. Sentinel announced when it was safe to take their helmets off, and the group did just that. Luke looked around again, and noticed that only a handful of consoles had lit up. One of which proudly displayed the name of the wrecked vessel: Corusca. It was obviously named after the galaxy that the Celestial branch of the Furling Empire called home.

    Another one showed status reports coming in as Sentinel looked over the vessel's systems. Almost everything was in the red?very little of the vessel was still intact.

    "I've finished my scan Master Skywalker?the vessel is badly damaged. The main reactor took a direct hit during the battle?it is beyond repair. Several of the Corusca's weapons are also damaged. The only things really intact are the secondary reactor and the shield generator," Sentinel reported.

    Luke sighed heavily, "Is the Corusca intact enough to warrant salvaging her?"

    "Just barely. If we strip down the other hulks out here we can make her combat ready again?but we most likely will have to fit her with Terran weapons, there aren't enough intact weapons out here," the AI answered.

    Luke nodded and gave orders to his men to piece what they could of the bridge back together before beaming back over to the Redemption. Once the green light faded Luke walked over to Naverra who was still shaking slightly from seeing all of the dead Alteran ships. Luke put a calming hand on her shoulder, and turned to the remaining Marines on his ship.

    "Okay men, we are going to head down to the planet now and see if there is anyone alive down there. Naverra?I need you to come with me this time, if there is anyone down there we need an Alteran with us," Luke said.

    Naverra nodded and followed Luke to the freighter?since they felt it would work better than the transporter at transferring anything they found. Naturally they made a stop at the Liberty first to pick up Doctor Weir and SG-5. The combined grou
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