Discussion in 'Fan Films, Fan Audio & SciFi 3D' started by redlightning, Jun 5, 2016.
Eh... Not bad.
Hi. Well done on finishing your film. Thought it looked good and the sound was good too.
My only real complaints are the open crawl doesn't look great. Some of the vfx need work. When the pod is crashing and you can see out the window, its obvious its green screen outside. You need some sort of glow on the inside of the window just to take the harsh edge off and blend it better. The star destroyer in orbit isn't in orbit in that shot. It looks like its in the atmosphere. You need to knock it back loads and blend it more into the sky. Unless it is in the atmosphere, but then that just seems weird to me. Also, while the light saber fight was well done... its another light saber fight in the woods. I'm just not that interested in light sabre fights in woods anymore. I know its free production value, but hey.
The lead actor while fine seemed a little young to be a master with an apprentice.
But you finished it and its done. So good work.
Not my film.
Ah ok. Well, hopefully the'll find the thread and read what I said...
I concur the lead actor was pretty young. I just watched this the other day and I thought, "What is he, 12?" A bit unbelievable to be a Master, but otherwise not bad.
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I love the shot selection and camera moves in this film - really creative.
The acting and sound mix could use some work, and I'm not entirely sure about the two-bladed lightsaber (it's cool, but it should have been used in some way to justify its design - like trapping the opponent's saber between the two blades).