Part of being an artist is sharing with others. Oddly enough, I'm a little timid of letting my friends and family listen to my "work," so I've decided to put it on-line. I've got two songs on my VRadio page, and I'd really appreciate some feedback on them, ya'll. Neither "Mellow" nor "Heavy Jam" are perfect, but I'm relatively happy with them. Now that I'm working with a real bassist, I want to revisit the "Mellow" concept, with a little more depth and clarity. In regards to "Heavy Jam," the drums are computer generated. I programmed them myself with The Dee Sampler, and played both guitar parts. Each guitar is one straight take - no edits, no cut-and-paste. There was only one other take of the rhythm (right) guitar, and well, I forgot to turn the mic on. Anyway, let me know what ya'll think, please. And be brutal. I need it.