Part of being an artist is sharing with others. Oddly enough, I'm a little timid of letting my friends and family listen to my "work," so I've decided to put it on-line. I've got two songs on [link=http://www.vradio.com/cfm-enduser/artistprofile.cfm?id=695]my VRadio page[/link], and I'd really appreciate some feedback on them, ya'll. Neither "Mellow" nor "Heavy Jam" are perfect, but I'm relatively happy with them. Now that I'm working with a real bassist, I want to revisit the "Mellow" concept, with a little more depth and clarity. In regards to "Heavy Jam," the drums are computer generated. I programmed them myself with [link=http://www.deelong.com]The Dee Sampler[/link], and played both guitar parts. Each guitar is one straight take - no edits, no cut-and-paste. There was only one other take of the rhythm (right) guitar, and well, I forgot to turn the mic on. Anyway, let me know what ya'll think, please. And be brutal. I need it.