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Saga You Gave Me Love Ami/Ani EPIII viggie/song fic (repost from classic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Princess1, Nov 29, 2003.

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  1. Princess1

    Princess1 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well lets get the boring stuff out of the way first!
    Disclaimer: I'm not earning any money by this or trying to steal star wars from george lucas,I'm just having fun.

    rateing: PG
    This story is in first person, Padmes point of view.

    The song used is You Give Me Love by Faith Hill, I'm not earning any money by useing it, just having fun.

    Ok, all thats out of the way, here you go.
    Comments please.

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    You turn around then you ask me behind tears of doubt just what I see in you.
    Please don't cry, I know sometimes it seems we barely get by. But don't you see how much you do to get me through?


    I can feel my life draining away, this sickness has saped all my strength. I don't have much longer. I only wish I could see my Ani one last time. The way he used to be.

    "Padme?"

    I hear a soft, almost frightend questioning voice by the door. I weakly turn my headd. "Ani?"

    Whats he doing here? I must be dreaming.

    "Your alive!" he rushes to me and cradels me in his arms.

    Its not a dream after all! I lean against his chest, blissfully happy I've gotten to see him one last time. At least for now, he is my Ani again, not Vader.

    "Yes, I'm alive, for now anyway." I say weakly.

    "How can you ever forgive me? What could you have possibly seen in me? If you hadn't marrried me none of this would have happend!"

    I reach up a hand and gently stroke his face, brushing away a tear that had crept out of his eye. How could I explain?

    You turn around then you ask me behind tears of doubt just what I see in you.
    Please don't cry, I know sometimes it seems we barely get by. But don't you see how much you do to get me through?


    "It was worth it Ani."

    "But why? How could you possibly believe that? After what I did to you."

    "Well....." I struggle for words for what is in my heart.

    When the world is cold, and I need a friend to hold me, you give me love.......you give me love.

    I can't quite explain it, so I say simply "You gave me love."

    He stares at me in amazement, "You gave up everything for love?"

    I smile at him softly, "Yes."

    "But was it worth it?" he ask bitterly.

    And when I feel I can't go on
    You pick me up, you give me love.....you give me love.


    "Yes, I think it was more then worth it. Don't you?"

    He stares at me, as if he's afriad to believe what I say, even if he wants to.

    "Anakin, look into my eyes."

    We lock our gaze, both of us feeling lost in the eyes of the one we love, wondering if it was the last time. So with my eyes I try and tell him what I can't say with words. And I see the same message in his eyes for me. His heart is in his eyes.

    I apologize, if I never told you what you mean in my eyes. Oh baby, let me tell you now. Everyday looks sweeter knowing you'll be there in every way.

    "Yes it was worth it." he says with sudden conviction, "It was worth anything and everything."

    My heart feels like its going to burst with love for him. He understands......

    When my hope is gone and I feel I can't go on, you give me love.....you give me love.

    "It was worth it." he says"But do you still love me?"

    "Anakin, I love you, now and forever."

    He gives me a boyish, loveing smile, and captures my lips with his.

    Everything my heart desires. Morning stars and midnight fires, someone to share my dreams, with you I have everything.

    It feels like we're trying to get a lost life times worth of love into the kiss. And now I know, no matter what happens, I had my Ani back tonight. And no matter what, he will never be compltely destroyed by Darth Vader. Because our love will always have a place in his heart. There he will always be Ani, my Ani, now and forever.

    I go limp, and I can feel my spirit floating away. I'm gone, looking down on Ani from above.

    Anakin breaks off the kiss, "Padme?" he asks. Then he realizes that I'm gone. He starts crying and rocks me in his arms and kisses my hair. But then finnaly he lays me on the bed and covers me with the blank
     
  2. Keeper_of_Swords

    Keeper_of_Swords Jedi Master star 5

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    Sep 20, 2003
    Great! I liked the fact that it was written from Padme's point of view.
     
  3. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Jul 31, 2003
    That was wonderful.
     
  4. Princess1

    Princess1 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Keeper of Swords: Thanks, glad you liked it. :) And there doesn't seem to be very many padme pov viggies does there? I wonder why?

    CrystalKenobi: Thanks! :D
     
  5. ChinchillaFairy

    ChinchillaFairy Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Aug 2, 2002
    Very emotional, I liked it!
     
  6. Princess1

    Princess1 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Chinchillafairy: Thanks, I love writing emotional stories, my specialty. ;) :D
     
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