You will not go to the Dagobah System!

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  1. Liz Skywalker Ex-Mod

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    Hi. Yes, another AU. What if Luke didn't go to the Dagobah System, never found Yoda...etc. Makes you think, no?
    Here's what I've got of it so far. If you want, I'll continue it.

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    "See you at the rendezvous!" Wedge yelled.

    Luke looked up and saluted him. ?May the Force be with you, Wedge!? He climbed into his X-wing, wincing as pain shot through his shoulder. It was one of those things, you don?t notice when you get hurt, but when the pain starts...ouch.

    ?Beep Bupe?? R2 asked.

    ?It?s nothing, R2. Do you have the rendezvous coordinates??

    ?Beep.? R2 affirmed.

    ?Okay, set course and jump when ready. I?m going to get a bacta patch on this.? As Luke reached for it, he was suddenly back in the Hoth snow, seeing Ben Kenobi. The Dagobah system, he had to go there. He shook his head hard to clear it. It was an illusion, something his sick mind had dreamed up when he was delirious. When he reached the rendezvous, he?d have to get a medic to give him a forget-pill, as they were commonly called. It?s real name was way to long for Luke to even try to get his mouth around.

    He felt space change around him as he found the bacta patch. Putting it on, he sighed and fell asleep, the ravaged scenery of Hoth still engraved in his mind.

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    should I continue?
  2. Dark_Soldier Jedi Padawan

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    I think you should.
    This is a good idea!
  3. Neon Star Jedi Knight

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  4. Wedge 88 Jedi Grand Master

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    Another great AU idea! I want more!
  5. EMPRESS Jedi Master

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    Dude, definitely more
  6. Padme_Na_Sky Jedi Youngling

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    " By the force, Yes, continue." :)
  7. Darth_ChibiChibi Jedi Youngling

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    OooOOooOOoOOooo!! This is a great idea, Liz! By all means, continue!!
  8. Darth_ChibiChibi Jedi Youngling

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    Oops... double post. :::smacks forehead:::
  9. Vergere Jedi Knight

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    Li-iz, another one?! more!
  10. I love Sci Fi Jedi Master

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    Hmmm.... this could get interesting. Keep it up.
  11. I love Sci Fi Jedi Master

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    Hmmm.... this could get interesting. Keep it up.
  12. padmemicheline Jedi Youngling

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    Yeah, I agree. Continue!
  13. Jo-Jade Jedi Youngling

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    Great start...I just can't get enough of your wonderful stories. Please post more!
  14. Liz Skywalker Ex-Mod

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    I'm...I'm flattered. I never expected such a response!
    So, I'm continuing it.

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    Luke landed on the frigate Liberty in the middle of the hanger bay. He noticed that he was directed next to Wedge?s x-wing. Good, so he had made it back.

    ?Commander Skywalker?? A flight tech came over to him. ?You?re wanted for debriefing with the rest of your squadron in a half hour.?

    Luke nodded his acknowledgment and turned to get R2 down.

    ?Hey Luke! You made it!?

    ?Wedge!? Luke caught Wedge in a bear hug. ?Who else made it back??

    Wedge sobered up. ?Not many. But we?ve already got reinforcements. Guy named Tycho Celchu. Defected after Alderaan, spend his first minutes in the Rebellion ecstatic that the Princess was alive. Wes and Hobbie have taken a liking to him.?

    ?So Hobbie made it? I thought I heard him die.?

    ?Nah, he lost control and crashed, but he made it back to his x-wing alright.?

    ?Tell me about this Celchu.? Luke and Wedge started walked towards the debriefing room.

    ?He looks like an Imperial.? Catching Luke's look, he added. ?Seriously, he could?ve been poster boy for them. His father was contacting him the second Alderaan blew. He says that one second they were there and the next they were gone. He feels guilty because he thought it was just a holo-net malfunction and thought up little ways to tease his father about it next time they talked. And then he found out that Alderaan blew. So he defected.?

    ?Poor guy. Say, has the princess made it back??

    ?She hasn?t come in yet. But I hear that she got on the Falcon. And we all know how that ship likes to break down.?

    ?Yeah, I just hope it didn?t break down in the middle of the Imperials.?

    ***
    I hope I got the details on Tycho right.
  15. jedipati Jedi Master

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    pretty close, but I thought he fought at Hoth. Not that it really matters, this is an AU after all. I like this idea.
  16. Hutt-Lordess Jedi Youngling

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    how come i didn't know about this...? anyway, MORE!! (btw, liz, i posted on adp1 if you haven't already figured that out...) UP!! MORE!!
  17. Vergere Jedi Knight

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    i didn't know that about Tycho! oh well. MORE!
  18. Herman Snerd Jedi Master

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    So how's Luke going to learn to kick some Sith butt?
  19. Wedge 88 Jedi Grand Master

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    Wow, that was cool.

    Vergere, you didn't know that about Tycho? Have you read the X-wing books? Its in there.
  20. padmemicheline Jedi Youngling

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    You're doing great so far, Liz! I wonder how Luke is gonna learn the ways of the Force if he doesn't go to Dagobah and meet Yoda?
  21. Vergere Jedi Knight

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    no i haven't, i think thats my next goal...inbetween the NJO ones of course! :) more!
  22. jedipati Jedi Master

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    knowing Liz... Luke'll learn the Force from Vader. Hey, Liz, I was thinking about doing a story on this topic, but know I don't have to. Thanks.
  23. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    LS this is an excellent idea for an AU.
  24. Neon Star Jedi Knight

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    Great AU, Liz! It is a new concept and very cool!
  25. Jedi_Master_Insei Jedi Youngling

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    *starts up a chant with the rest of the Forcies here*

    MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!
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