Young Force: Chapter One: A Thief in the Night.

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  1. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    "What's that?" Maranda shouted as another ship dropped out of hyperspace and into the view of the veiwport she was looking through.

    "It looks like the Falcon." Runal said a bit surprised. "Let's get to the bridge and find out what's going on and if anyone has spotted the sabatours."

    Maranda looked one last time at the ship that looked like it was headed their way and then turned to follow Runal to the bridge.
  2. Darth_Duck Force Ghost

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    The Falcon soared towards a the vessel.

    "Think we can dock?" Thome wondered.

    "Sure kid," Huff answered.

    Thome moved the Falcon into dock, when all Haz broke loose.
  3. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Teia sat in the ship quietly. Jae'tt sat on her lap, his head resting on his paws. Ocassionally he would whimper. Teia stroked his stiff, green-gray fur.

    Jae'tt lifted his head and looked at her with big, black eyes. <Baddy hurt Flyer-man. Mummy let Jae-Jae bite baddy?>

    //Yes, you can bite the baddy if you see him.//

    <I bite bad! Sharp bites!>

    //You take a great big bite out of him.//

    <Me BITE!> Jae'tt almost jumped off her lap.

    Teia grabbed him by the scruff of his neck. //You bite him when you see him. Right now we-//

    Teia could hear something outside the ship. She jumped up, dumping Jae'tt onto the floor, and ran to the bridge. "What's going on?"

    "There's a ship that's going to dock with us," Li said.

    "It's the Falcon," Maranda added.

    "Thank goodness," Teia muttered.
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  4. Albion Jedi Knight

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    Rr'yssa was cleaning herself, and her ears detected the faint clicking of an airlock attaching.

    "Someone shhould warrn themm wee have a leak in ourr envirronmment."
  5. Darth_Duck Force Ghost

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    Thome Kaine boarded the vessel.

    "Hello," he called. He heard some replies.

    Sudedenly someone came runnig up and called

    "theres a leak in th environmental systems."

    Huff and Squinty arrived moments later.

    "Huff help try to repear the leak.''

    "Yes sir Mr. Padawan Jedi sir"

    Huff and Squinty set to work.

    Just then Thome heard the sound of the Falcon undocking.

    "He rushed to the Airlock in time to see the Falcon go behind the moon.

    "That Hazen son of a Hax," Thome cried.

    "What?" Li asked
  6. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Teia folded her arms across her chest when she heard this. "Are you saying we're stuck here again?"

    Jae'tt lifted his nose into the air and howled mournfully.

    //Quiet, Jae'tt!// Teia scolded. //We'll get off this planet soon.//
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  7. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    Kara found herself floating back into consciousness with a massive headache and a wet lick.

    "Hey," she said as she realized what was going on. "Get off me, mutt." She shoved a very concerned Serena away from her face.

    She looked around; it appeared as though she was in the med.-bay and alone, well almost.

    Kara rose up from her bed to find the form of the Captain, Davern, dead.

    "I'm so sorry," she said, placing a clean, white sheet over him. She would have to remind the others to give him his ritual cremation before the left. She always felt awful when one innocent died; her master had warned her that her over sediment would become a weakness in trying situations.

    So she held back her grievances and turned to Serena, who didn't look all to pleased with her.

    "I don't think you?re a mutt." She half mumbled. "Can you please show me where the others are?"

    The wolf just stared at her.

    "Look," Kara began, "I said I was sorry. Can't you just help me out?"

    Serena just sat there.

    "Oh, you can't even understand basic, can you?" Kara was now thoroughly annoyed. "Dumb dog. I'll find them myself."

    As Kara turned to leave from the front entrance, Serena barked once and started towards the door to Kara's left.

    Kara followed. "Okay, maybe you're not a dumb dog."

    Kara used the Force to be rid of her headache as she followed Serena through the ship.
  8. Calayka_Bele Jedi Knight

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    "He just left with my ship!!" Thome cried. He started ranting and raving. "That little sith! What's he thinking?! When I get my h-"

    Li looked confused. "Wait, WAIT! Who's he and what are you talking about!?"
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    Have Li and Thome ever met each other Darth Duck?
  9. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Teia looked up when she saw Serena enter the room with Kara following. Serena sat down and panted. Kara patted the wolf hybrid on the head. "Thanks, dog," she said. Serena kindly licked her hand then looked over at Teia.

    Teia smiled knowingly to Kara. "Serena can understand some Basic, but it takes her a while to comprehend it."

    "That explains alot," Kara said. "What's happening?"

    "It seems that somebody made off with the rescue ship and we're stuck here again."

    "That's great."

    Suddenly Jae'tt ran into the room, whining in a high-pitched voice. He charged at Teia and jumped onto her shoulders, burying his face in her black hair. <Baddy!> he said.

    //Jae'tt? Where's the baddy?//

    <In there! Baddy scare Jae-Jae!>

    //Why didn't you bite him?//

    <Me teeth hurted.>

    //Yeah, right.//

    <Me show Mummy and Screamer-girlie the baddy? Big Sister! Me get Big Sister!> Jae'tt jumped off her shoulders and charged out the door. <Jae-Jae show friends the baddy!>

    Teia turned to Kara. "We best follow him." She turned to Carly and Rory who weren't busy and took out her lightsaber. "Come on. Let's see if we can get this guy this time."
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  10. quigon70 Force Ghost

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    runal saw them "hey wait i'll join you," he said as he went toward them.
  11. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    *sigh* Go ahead and give JediRogue9 my space here. I can't keep up and I don't have alot of time on the boards. Sorry, guys. Please don't kill my characters, just send them off, or something. Again, I'm very sorry. :(
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  13. Calayka_Bele Jedi Knight

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    Are you sure you have to? We'll miss you. :(

    May the Force Be With You
  14. quigon70 Force Ghost

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  15. Darth_Duck Force Ghost

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    Thome looked out the airlock at his prize vessel, the Millenium Falcon.

    "My ship," he moaned.

    "My life savings," Huff cried.

    Beep-boob-bee, Squinty shreeked

    "My journal," Thome cried, searching his poaches.

    "Journal?' Huff asked.

    "Yeah, my "YOF" journal."

    Huff and Squinty returnedto work at a nearby control panel.

    "Hazzin' Hax lovin'" Thome begain cursing up a storm.

    "Kid, Jedi don't curse." Huff called.

    "Grozit," Thome replied, heading towards the cockpit.

  16. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    *sniffle* Oh, man.....Bye guys. Be good for Anika, your new leader here. :) Think you can take it, Anika?
  17. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Sure. ;)
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  18. Calayka_Bele Jedi Knight

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  19. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    And remember...*looks left and right and backs out of room* I am watching you......MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!


    J_KM, CJC#1! Woohoo!
  20. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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  21. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    goodbye. We'll miss you.

    Sorry i haven't posted, I'm haveing major writers block, and I've been gone.
  22. quigon70 Force Ghost

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    runal asked, "can someone who can sence him, could they teel me if he is force sensitive"?
  23. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    "I think so." Maranda wispered from behind Runal.

    He spun around. "Don't do that."

    "Sorry, but I think he is. Do you think it's a sith?"
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    Kara pulled out her lightsaber.

    "Even if he's not a Sith, if he is Force-sensitive we have a huge problem on our hands," she said, "we must be careful."

    The others nodded.

    "Who's all coming?" Kara asked, "we'll finish this once and for all."

    "I'm in," Teia said

    "Me, too" Runal added.

    "Let's go, then" Kara said.

    //Show us the baddie, Jae'tt.// Teia told the dragon-dog. //Serena, come with us.//

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    Anybody have an idea of what to do with KnightMariah's characters? She doesn't want us to kill them. Maybe we could leave them on the moon, but that would be kind of mean . . . anybody want to take them over?


  25. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    Which one's are hers. I'll write them for a while until we can get somewhere to leave them off.
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