Young Force: Chapter One: A Thief in the Night.

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  1. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    Ahhh, everything's all different, no more stars? (shakes uncontrolably)

    Oh, Carly Electra and Rory Electra, I think, I'm I right?
  2. Albion Jedi Youngling

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    *Rr'yssa is currently in combat with Darth Writers Block...*
  3. quigon70 Jedi Master

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  4. Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    __________
    Jae'tt led the group down the dark hall. His nose was to the ground, trying to find the scent to make sure he was heading the right way. He stopped in front of a door. It was closed. He lowered his head and growled at it.

    //Jae'tt?// Teia asked him.

    <Baddy in there! Me want to bite baddy!>

    //Wait, Jae'tt. We're all going to go in and stop the baddy. You can bite him while we're at it.//

    <OK! My sharp bites! Baddy will HURT!>
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    ~Ånika §kywalker
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  5. quigon70 Jedi Master

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    "so let's do it,." he said "is there a way he could posibly escape"?
  6. I love Sci Fi Jedi Master

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    hmm....I'll think of something to do later. For Maranda and for the others persons charecters.
  7. Jaded Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Okay I am back! Yeah!

    I owuld post though I am a little confused. Did we catch the guy yet? Have we boarded the Falcon?

    Please help me, so I can post.

    Thanx
    JS
  8. quigon70 Jedi Master

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  9. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    I should post something, huh?

    Maybe later . . .

    Yeah, later
  10. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    It's later, is it not?


    Kara tightened her grip on the lightsaber. She held back her fear.

    / There is no emotion/ she thought, remembering the Code, / there is peace./

    "That room has no other way out," she told Runal.

    Teia tried the door.

    "It's looked," she said, to no one's surprise.

    Kara and Runal gave a mutual sigh.

    "Let's do it." Kara said.

    The other two padawans nodded.

    Positioning their lightsabers to burn through the mental door, the three worked efficiently to dissolve the barrier between them and Vlance Taorn.
  11. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    Hello? Anybody here?

    Where IS everyone?
  12. Albion Jedi Youngling

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    Rr'yssa sniffed at the air.

    There was still the faint scent of the stranger, but it was fading from the ship. She stared down at Jae'tt, who was growling and whining, pacing back and forth, and generally being a distraction.

    She growled once, but was in general uncertain what to do. Others were trying to find the kidnapper, but there was another problem that had to be addressed. There was still the hull breech.

    Rr'yssa stalked down towards the lower levels of the ship, hoping to be able to find the leak before they all died from lack of atmospshere.
  13. Jaded Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Ilene looked down at the dead pilot. Tears began to swell up in her eyes but she forced them back.

    Death.

    It twisted into her heart causing a deep level of emotions.

    She had seen to much death.

    Her own parents. She was orphaned with the thought of her mother and father returing to her some day. Only later she heard the news.

    They had died.

    With the death of her parents the death of her life with a family vanished. She had no brothers or sisters. She was alone.

    So deeply alone.

    She didn't know Davern enough to really cry. But death itself made her almost fall apart.

    She turned and walked out of the room.

    Whoever had done this would pay. The man who had hurt him would pay.

    "Come on Ilene. Calm down, girl," she said softly to herself. She took control of the light side and pushed away her fear and sorrow. Those were of the dark side. She would never fall into that darkness.

    She began to run. The ship still wasn't fixed. They were dead in space, just barely missing the moon.

    She heard someone shout about the breached hull. Her breath caught in her throat as she remebered.

    She ran after Rr'yssa who was moving to the lower levels of the ship.

    ~~~~~~~

  14. I love Sci Fi Jedi Master

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    OK a questions before I post. Does anyone remember what Cory and Rory are doing?
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    Maranda watched the group left to try and find the person. She looked around.

    **Now what?** she thought. **We're dead in space with a leaking hull that's what.** She answered herself.

    She looked around the bridge. The dead pilot was still there. She hadn't know him before the mission, but it was always depressing when someone so kind died. Especially when they were inoccent.

    She watched as Ilene turned and left the room, and as she followed he out of the room she could hear Ilene's footsteps geting louder as she sped up and ran in one dirrection.

    **hmmm,** she thought **I wonder where Cory and Rory are.** Quickly she headed down the hall in the direction of their force senses.
  15. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    I think Carly and Rory are just standing around.

    Here, let me see if I can't find out where every one is, maybe it will help.

    Jae'tt, Teia, Serena (Anika Skywalker); Kara (Athena); and Runal (quigon70) : hunting Vlance Taorn.

    Rr'yssa (Albion) and Ilene (Jaded Skywalker): trying to fix the hull.

    Davern - pilot : lying on the floor, dead

    Thome, Huff, Squinty (Darth Duck): worrying about getting back the Millenium Falcon.

    Li (Calayka Bele): MIA - last seen: standing by Thome, et. al.

    Maranda (I love sci fi): looking for Carly and Rory.

    Carly and Rory (formerly Jedi knightMariah): MIA - we have to figure out what to do with them.

    Cowrie (Kadi-Wan Kenobi): MIA LAST SEEN - when the power went out.

    Jeram (Darth McClain): Dropped out

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    Well, I hope that helps, it sure helps me . . .
    let me know if I've missed anyone.

    :)

  16. quigon70 Jedi Master

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    i have darth writers block too
  17. I love Sci Fi Jedi Master

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    Carly stood trying to get the omputer to give her some answer other than "Cannot access that information."

    "Can you tell me where the environmental leak is?" She ask exaspirated. Ever since she had heard about the leak she had been trying to get the computer to point her in the right dirrection.

    "Carly, Maybe we should just start looking. We should find the others anyway."

    "Rory, it'll be fine."

    "I know, but shouldn't we..."

    "Don't question me." She turned back to the computer. "How big is the environmental leak?"

    "Randy!" Rory called as Maranda rounded the corner to where they were.

    "Boy you guy's sure picked a nice place to hide. All the others are on the other side of the ship."

    "Maranda what are you doing here?"

    "Looking for you. The others are trying to find the person who sabataged the ship, trying to fix the hull, and trying to get back to the Falcon."

    "Well, lets go catch up with the ones who are trying to fix the hull and see if they've made any progress. We're not going to make any here." She said hitting the computer.

    "Environmental leak estimated at an aproximatly 23 in lone crack in the hull."

    "Sure now it answers. Let's go find the others."

    "Rr'yssa and Ilene." Maranda put in.
  18. Jaded Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Ilene was running down the hall. She clambered down the stairs into the shadowy room with hissing machinary and blinking lights.

    Rr'yssa was already was looking at some.

    She could feel others coming down to help.

    "This cannot be good," Ilene muttered.

    "It isn't," Rr'yssa said.
  19. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    Looks like this could use an UP!

    Hopefully I can post later today.
  20. Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling

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    All right I know I haven't posted in a *long time* and I'm really sorry about that. Here' something short. I hope it doesn't mess anyone up.
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    Li stood next to Thome conversing with him when suddenly the ship started shaking violently.

    She was thrown against a wall with Thome and the others barely missing her.

    After a few seconds the shaking stopped.

    "What was that?" Li asked.

    The others shrugged.

    The ship shook again and then stopped.

    Without saying anything she ran towards the hull. This ship was not going to last for long.
  21. Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    errrr, up, I'm thinking . . . .
  22. Albion Jedi Youngling

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    Rr'yssa walked along the hull itself, using her fur as detection for the micro-fracture in the hull.

    She found it quickly enough, but saw that the crack was spreading and widening. Looking around, she finally noticed she was honestly alone.

    The felinoid's tail went into the corner of her mouth, and she looked about worriedly. Working a computer was one thing, but she didn't know the first thing about starship repair.

    Sitting down in a corner to watch the crack, she plaintively called out, "Help?"
  23. Darth_Duck Jedi Grand Master

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    "Ow," Huff moaned.

    "Li, you 'k?" Thome asked.

    "Fine," Li replied.

    Beep-boob-peep, Squinty beeped.

    "Help me up you young idiots!" Huff yelled.

    Thome helped Huff get up.

    "Back to the problem at hand-" Thome stated."-Someone stole my Frinxing ship!"

    Huff and Squinty walked over to a panel down the hall.

    "Li-" Thome bagain, as the ship rocked again.

    Thome fell on top of Li, Huff fell andc hit his head on Squinty, you frolled on top of Thome.

    "Get off me," Li said as the rocking stopped.

    Thome lifted Squinty off himself and helped Li to her feet.

    Huff lay unconsious in the hall.
  24. Jaded Skywalker Jedi Padawan

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    Ilene finally caught up with Rya'saa. She was curled up looking at the hole.

    Hole! This wasn't good. The crack was spreading wider and wider. Ilene helfd her breath and used some Jedi techniques to keep calm.

    "We can do this," Ilene said comforting her.

    "We need to patch this up."
  25. quigon70 Jedi Master

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    Runal and the others went through the door with their sences on alert, well all that could, Runal was behind one of them as they continued through the hallway.
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