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Young Force: Chapter One: A Thief in the Night.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_KnightMariah, Dec 18, 2000.

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  1. quigon70

    quigon70 Jedi Master star 5

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  2. I love Sci Fi

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    Randy and the others raced toward the room where the leak was supposed to be and skidded to a stop as they ran into the room.

    "By the force, what do we do now?" Randy asked looking at the quickly widdening crack.

    "Maybe we can use the force." Rory said.

    "Maybe? Maybe? Maybe is not what I want to here right now. A this is how would be nice."

    "Randy calm down." Ilene said calmly. "We can fix this. We just have to stay calm and think about it."
     
  3. Pallas-Athena

    Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 4 VIP

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    The Hallway was completely dark as Kara, Teia, and Runal made their way through, with Jea'tt and Serena following close behind.

    Jea'tt growled and Teia heard he say /He's here, I bite him!/

    /No, Jea'tt/ Teia said, /you might get hurt again, stay behind me./

    Unaware of the dragon-dog's findings, Kara spoke.

    "He's near, she said. "Can you feel him?"

    "Yep," Runal simply said as all three readied their lightsabers.

    "Welcome, padawans," a strange voice greeted them.

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    It seems almost everybody, including me, has been nelecting this story, hohum, I'll try to post more . . . .
     
  4. quigon70

    quigon70 Jedi Master star 5

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    "who's there" he said looking in different directions.
    "you may not see me but i can see you," said the voice.
    "i can not sence people through the force, so could someone tell me where he is" runal asked?
     
  5. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sorry. I've been really busy. Here's my contribution...
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    Not being able to sense where the man was made Teia uneasy. She looked down at Jae'tt. He was still growling. Serena was still.

    //Serena, can you smell him?// Teia asked.

    <Like he were a fresh stake,> the wolf hybrid answered telephathically, licking her chops.

    //Where is he?//

    The wolf looked around for a while. She pointed her nose to a dark room.

    Jae'tt whimpered. <Me want Big Sister! Me bite later!> Jae'tt darted away. Teia watched him go and shook her head. Serena walked cautiously to the darkness of the room.

    Suddenly, something rang in alarm in Teia's head. <Mummy help! Baddy! Baddy!>

    "Jae'tt's in trouble!" Teia shouted. She ran after him, the others following. They found Jae'tt, head lowered and teeth bared. His stiff fur was standing on end, making him look bigger than he really was. There were small flames on the metal floor. They were dying because of the lack of something to burn.

    About ten feet in front of Jae'tt was the dark silhouette of a figure, cornered by Jae'tt's flames.

    The Jedi Padawans got their lightsabers ready.
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  6. Darth_Duck

    Darth_Duck Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thome rushed to Huff.

    "Li, watch him," Thome called, taking off down the hallway.

    Ten meters down the hallway, Darkness enveloped Thome.

    "Hello young padawan" a voice boomed.

    "That voice sounds familliar," Thome muttered.

    "It should," the voice said.

    Sudenly, Thome felt something hard land on his head, and then the air around him went even blacker.
     
  7. Darth_Duck

    Darth_Duck Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I'm curently writing a series, After Effects, and i would really, like to have Young Force order in story 4, would you be interested?

    Preview After Effects #1: X-Wings Over Endor Here:
    http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=1756203&start=1756203
     
  8. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

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    Sounds cool. Sorry I haven't posted I'll try to tommorrow.
     
  9. Pallas-Athena

    Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 4 VIP

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    Just upping, I have writer's block
     
  10. quigon70

    quigon70 Jedi Master star 5

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    up i'll post something soon
     
  11. I love Sci Fi

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    WALKS by and innocently kicks thread up
     
  12. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'll UP it, too. I'm still thinking of what to post...

    Hey, nice sig, Sci-Fi. ;)
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  13. Jaded Skywalker

    Jaded Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I thought this died... But I am glad it didn't!

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    Ilene shifted uneasily.

    Think... Think... Think...

    She glanced around the dark room. They had to meld metal over the hole.

    Finally she spotted it. A small but heavy piece of metal.

    She walked over to it and picked it up. It was farely heavy and she had to use two hands.

    She brought it back over the the group and laid it at tehre feet. It clanged against the stell floor and the sound echoed in the chamber.

    "Now what," she asked plainly.
     
  14. quigon70

    quigon70 Jedi Master star 5

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    i won't let it die

    Error: Only 1 message post per minute is allowed.
     
  15. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

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    lol Thanks, I just saw yours I like it too.
     
  16. Darth_Duck

    Darth_Duck Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thome Kaine came too, his head felt as if it had been hit on the head with a metal pipe, which, unserpprisingly enough, it had.

    He reached for has lightsaber but it wasn't there.

    "Grozit," he moaned, as the metal pipe came down again.

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    Sorry, so short, mind no work now.
     
  17. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

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    OK who all is in the room where the leak is?
     
  18. Pallas-Athena

    Pallas-Athena TFN Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 4 VIP

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    Ack! This is madness!


    Ilene, Rr'yssa, Randy, Rory and Carly are in the hole room mesa thinks. . .

    I will try to post some time, I just don't know where to go - we're at the point now where we have to decide who/what the mystery man is and I don't want to decide by myself.

    If you guys want me to I'll post another character location so everyone can get ordered.
     
  19. Pallas-Athena

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    just upping
     
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