Young Force Order (come on in and join! Limited space!)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_KnightMariah, Dec 18, 2000.

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  1. Albion Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Sep 18, 2000
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    *why can I picture my Togorian and the Noghri playing with a ball of yarn off in one corner at one point?*
  2. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    May 15, 2000
    star 4
    Okie Dokie, here we go... just want to make sure I cover everything.
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    Rules of Engagement
    or
    Writing Guidelines for this Multi-Author Fanfic
    or
    The Fine Print
    etc.

    1. Original characters only, and they must be Padawans. Add as many as you want, but not too many (of course).

    2. Don't kill other people's character off without their permission. The also applies to romances between characters.

    3. Interact with as many of the other characters as possible. Please limit back and forth posts between only two characters (not to mention any names).

    4. Posts can be as long as you want. Plot twists are fun, but don't twist them too much. Humor is definitely accepted, but don't let it get out of control.

    [This rule applies mostly to the adults here]
    5. Most importantly, show respect for others' standards. Keep the violence mild, preferably at a PG rating. This also applies to blood and gore (excuse the pun). This is Star Wars, not Braveheart. No sex, adult themes, bad language... you know the drill. Remember, most people posting here are probably of early teen years. If you feel somebody will feel uncomfortable or be intimidated by your next post, don't post it.

    6. I will emphasize the rule of language. No cursing, swearing, profanity, or youthemisms. Some people are bothered by this, including me. There are other ways your character can get the point across besides swearing.

    7. On that note, remember - respect is the key when making friends. With privilege comes responsibility. This can be fun only if you allow it to be.

    Now, have I made myself clear? If these rules are too confusing for you, I'm going to assume you are a Democrat from Palm Beach, Florida. Sorry to bring that up.

    *If you don't think you can follow these rules without "walking the fence," don't join.
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    Use this template for your character(s)'s profile(s):

    Picture: [optional]
    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Species:
    Homeworld:
    Hair color:
    Eye color:
    Height:
    Build:
    Master:
    Weapons:
    Lightsaber color:
    Powers:
    Personality:
    Bio:

    Thank you.
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    ~Ånika §kywalker & Co.
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  3. quigon70 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Feb 11, 2000
    star 5
    if i need a sceond profile like yours
    Picture: none
    Name: Runal Sytal
    Age: 17
    Gender: male
    Species: human
    Homeworld: Corsin
    Hair color: brown
    Eye color: blue
    Height: 5'11"
    Build: skinny
    Master: Jorl Kinda
    Weapons: blaster, lightsaber
    Lightsaber color: green
    Powers: force throw, force pull, lightsaber throw, and force jump
    Personality:kind to all creatures
    ,shy,courteous
    Bio: he started jedi training when he was young about age 12 he learned his parents were captured by pirates.
  4. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    May 15, 2000
    star 4
    Here is my character and her pets. :)

    Name: Teia-LiAnn "Teia" Cracie
    Picture: N/A
    Age: 15
    Gender: Female
    Species: Human and a small amount of unknown alien blood
    Homeworld: Naboo
    Hair color: Long, thick, creamy jet black; curled at ends, has a bluish tint when in bright light, usually worn in braids decorated with purple ribbons
    Eye color: Green-brown (hazel), green or brown in extreme moods
    Height: 5'5½"
    Build: Tall, thin, athletic, delicate-looking but strong
    Master: Ja'elle Salyn
    Weapons: Lightsaber and hand-to-hand combat
    Lightsaber color: Purple
    Powers: Can communicate with animals, can sense conflict and secrets in others and usually what they are
    Personallity: A very quick learner, therefore very smart; humble, peaceful, demure, kind, gentle, shy yet sometimes outgoing
    Bio: Teia was born on Naboo. She was a Princess of Theed before sent to the Jedi Temple to be trained as a Jedi at the age two. She then lived on Malastare. She didn't have much interaction with people while she was there and therefore is not very social.
    She is not pure human, having a small amount of alien blood which gives her special and unique powers. But that lineage gave her an embarrassing condition that she doesn't like to talk about. She looks like any other normal human.
    Teia loves animals. At the moment, she is raising an animal cub which she named Jae'tt. She has a wolf named Serena that she has known since she was two years old.


    Name: Jae'tt
    Picture: I'll have to draw one sometime :p
    Full name: "Playing with Fire"
    Age: 1½ (very young for species) still a cub
    Gender: Male
    Species: Pyros Canus ["fire dog" in Latin(?)]
    Homeworld: Malastare
    Hair color: (fur) Greenish gray, stiff yet soft
    Eye color: Very dark brown
    Height: 1'
    Weapons: Teeth, likes to bite; blows fire
    Powers: Can blow small amounts of fire
    Personallity: Playful but very mean sometimes
    Appearance: Looks like a cross between a wolf and a dragon. Wolf face with horns starting at top of head and curving around ears. Has small wings on his back and a thick, dragon-like tail
    Bio: Jae'tt's mother died when he was only a year old. For half a year he caused as much trouble as possible before being picked up by the humane Teia Cracie. She gave him the discipline he needed for his bad habits of biting and setting things on fire.


    Name: Serena (I can't believe I'm naming this character after my little sister! :p)
    Picture: http://www.geocities.com/swfetish/anikaskywalker/pix/wolf.jpg
    Full name: "Under a Tranquil Sunset"
    Age: 15 (about 30 in human years)
    Gender: Female
    Species: Wolf-dhole hybrid
    Homeworld: Naboo
    Hair color: (fur) Red, brown, and white
    Eye color: Black
    Height: 2' at shoulders
    Weapons: Teeth, agility
    Personallity: Gentle, motherly, longsuffering, yet deadly if provoked
    Bio: Serena belonged to a pack that was destroyed by hunters. She wandered around Naboo until she came to the city if Theed. She somehow got into Theed Palace and encountered a two year old girl, a "human cub." Having suffered the loss of her own pups, she became Teia's mother, since the girl could communicate telepathically with her. She is Teia's constant friend and companion.

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    ~Ånika §kywalker
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  5. Albion Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Sep 18, 2000
    star 3
    Official Profile:

    Name: Rr'yssa
    Age: 12
    Gender: Female
    Species: Togorian
    Homeworld: Togoria
    Fur color: Dark grey with faint tiger striping
    Eye color: Green with gold flecking
    Height: 5'5"
    Build: Athletically Slim
    Master: Creshpa Nos'Sji - Bothan
    Weapons: Claws, Teeth, Vibroknife, Bowcaster
    Lightsaber color: White w/ Blue Corona (Triple Gem type; extends to twice length)
    Powers: TK Abilities, Enhanceable Speed/Strength/Agility, Enhanced Senses, Healing, Mental Shielding, Mental Static, Chameleon-like ability.
    Personality: Normal very amiable yet quiet, and prone to occasional childish outbursts.


    Bio: Brought to the Temple after demonstrating her version of 'hide-and-hunt' to the Bothan Jedi Knight, she has been only there for the past year.
  6. Jaded Skywalker Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Nov 24, 1999
    star 4
    Is it too late to join? If so, that is totally okay. : )

  7. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 6, 2000
    star 4
    I already held a place for you, Anika. Good rules.
    You're number 10, Jaded! Lucky you! ;) Sure. We now have the limit.

    Picture: [optional]Not a very good pic. I'll get a better one later. http://www.starbizz.com/photos/942733500.img_17.jpg
    Name: Carly Electra
    Age: 20
    Gender: Female
    Species: Human
    Homeworld: Atantia
    Hair color: Brown
    Eye color: (I can't remember the girls' eye color!)
    Height: 5'9"
    Master: Is a Knight
    Weapons: Crossbow and Lightsaber
    Lightsaber color: Red
    Powers: Shape shifter
    Personality: Says what she thinks. Very blunt.

    Picture: [optional] http://www.alexis-bledel.com/images/alexis1.jpg
    Name: Rory Electra
    Age: 15
    Gender: Female
    Species: Human
    Homeworld: Atantia
    Hair color: Brown
    Eye color: Green
    Height: 5'5"
    Master: Carly Electra
    Weapons: Blaster, vibo-shiv, and lightsaber
    Lightsaber color: Purple
    Powers: Can control metals
    Personality: More soft spoken than her sister, Carly. Thinks out a situation before she acts. Very kind and
    loves animals.
  8. Calayka_Bele Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Nov 7, 2000
    star 3
    Shucks I'm too late. Oh well I'll read anyway. Happy posting!
  9. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 6, 2000
    star 4
    Can I have you on call incase someone has to stop posting, Calayka? If not s'okay.
  10. Jaded Skywalker Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Nov 24, 1999
    star 4
    Wow, that was close. Here is my character's bio.

    Picture:
    Name: Ilene Rigel
    Age: 15
    Gender: female
    Species: human
    Homeworld: unknown
    Hair color: black
    Eye color: violet
    Height: 5'4
    Build: sporty and slim
    Master: Ganthe Pael
    Weapons: lightsaber and blaster
    Lightsaber color: deep rich red
    Powers: lightsaber fighting and ability to tap into people's minds
    Personality: wild, bratty, but with a kind spirit which she hides and only allows the most trusted to see. She is emotional on the inside though uses her toughness to mask it.

    Bio: She was abandoned at birth and was taken in by a orphange on Ithor. There she was one of the only human females and she had to develop a spiritful personality to survive. Soon she ran away from Ithor with a smuggeler, Odel Kingslan, who she deveopled a friendship with, who was traveling to Coruscant. There Ilene was once again a poor, meager street kid. To stay alive she would steal and lie, and she would sleep in the Jedi Temple basement, unknown to the residents. One night they found her, fast asleep on the floor with only rags on for clothes. They took her in and cleaned her up, discovering her strong Force abilities. She was soon paired up with Ganthe Pael, a just appointed Master.

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    There you go. Ilene is really a nice and affectionate person though she hides it because of her past.

  11. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    May 15, 2000
    star 4
    So... when we gonna start this thing? :)
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  12. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 6, 2000
    star 4
    As soon as we come up with a name for the chapter and a mission. I guess I'll post my idea for a mission.

    Kidnapping isn't unheard of to the Jedi. In fact they hear of it quite often. But when it becomes more friquent and and starts in a pattern, the Council starts to worry. But they act when the kadnapper becomes daring enough to kidnap one of their own Jedi Apprentices. They decide to send a new order of Jedi Padawans and young Knights called the Young Force. But will the Young become the next victim?

    Slam it, jam it, flame it, whatever. Any ideas of your own?
  13. quigon70 Force Ghost

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    Feb 11, 2000
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  14. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jan 21, 2000
    star 4
    cool idea I like it. I'll post my oficial bio tommorrow.
  15. KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 9, 2000
    star 4
    Here's my characters full bio:

    Name:Cowrie Pue'ka
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Species: Melody
    Homeworld: Yavin 8
    Hair color: Red
    Eye color: Blue
    Height: 5'1"
    Build: Small but strong.
    Master: Jedi Master Rrewarffar
    Weapons: Lightsaber
    Lightsaber color: Green
    Powers: Can speak to animals as easily as she can with any other alien or human
    Personality: Shy, caring, gentle, good friend, peacemaker at times, loves all animals
    Bio: Cory was taken from Yavin 8 when she was only 1. At 12, she was taken as Master Warf's padawan. Right now, she is trying to find a way to stay humanoid, seeing as she will change into adult form at age 18. Has been away from the Temple almost since she was 13.

  16. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 6, 2000
    star 4
    (listing authors for later) In name order.
    Albion
    Anika Skywalker
    Athena (I'm just gonna call you that)
    Darth McClain
    I love Sci-fi
    Jaded Skywalker
    Jedi_KnightMariah
    KADI-WAN_KENOBI
    quigon70

    Hmmm. That's only nine. Guess you can join Cal.
  17. Anika Skywalker Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    May 15, 2000
    star 4
    Cool idea, Mariah! How about we call the chapter... "A Thief in the Night"? That's the best I could come up with. Start it ASAP! I don't know if I can be on anymore tonight. See ya all!
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  18. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Aug 6, 2000
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    I like it.....*rubs chin thoughtfully*
  19. Darth_Duck Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Oct 13, 2000
    star 4
    Can i take join on the waiting list???
    Please?????
  20. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 6, 2000
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    Sure. I, or someone else, will PM you if another writer drops out. (whoa! I didn't expect a waiting list!)
  21. Calayka_Bele Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Nov 7, 2000
    star 3
    YEAH!!! Here's my bio. Thank you!

    Name: Li'yane Sri
    Age: 15
    Gender: Female
    Species: Human
    Homeworld: Dathomir
    Hair color: Brown
    Eye color: Green w/purple specks
    Height: 5' 6"
    Build: Tall, slim, and gangly
    Master: Jedi Master Sepah Wy'aal
    Weapons: Lightsaber
    Lightsaber color: Yellow
    Powers: mind manipulation, acrobatics
    Personality: out going, not very shy, good mechanic, can fix almost anything
    Bio: Li has lived at the temple her whole life and is always getting into trouble. She has just returned from a very stressful mission and is still getting over it.



  22. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Aug 6, 2000
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    So we're agreed on "Thief in the Night"? Cause I want to start it now!
  23. Calayka_Bele Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Nov 7, 2000
    star 3
    Sounds good to me. Let's get this thing going!
  24. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Aug 6, 2000
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  25. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Aug 6, 2000
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    Okay. I'm going to put that they know about the mission and my characters are waiting to meet the others at their transport where they are going to a planet (I'll think of a name later) where the Padawan disapeared.
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