Young Padme.

She burst into the thicket,she ran through Spanish moss,Kudzu,wild flowers it was a sea of green all around her,finnaly she came out of the thicket onto the greenest grass she had ever seen.She stumbled,rolled,and stopped herself just in time,below her there was a huge blue waterfall stretching for miles,she couldn't even see where it ended.Beside her there was a magnificent palis were she hoped to rule as queen someday,she could sense someone behind her,but she was to out of breath to run and save herself.

 

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intersting start. I wonder what she's running from. One thing: I don't think there's spanish moss in the GFFA.

 

"Tag!Your it!"said Sabe.Padme got up,turned around and ran after her playmate.Padme taged Sabe and they both collapsed on the ground laughing.

"What do you want to do now Padme?"

"I don't know."

"Sabe,dinner!"called the distant voice of Sabe's mother.

"Sorry Padme,I've got to go"said sabe

"See you tomorrow,Sabe"said Padme.Padme started home.

 

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"Mom!Dad!I'm home!"said Padme,just then her mother rushed up to her.

"Honey,your father isn't here right know"said Padme's mother shakily.

"Why?You said he'd be home tonight."said Padme.Her mother burst into tears.

"they only just found out,they caught sight of him at the market place,and they saw him when they were boarding thier ship to come back home ...and...and..."Padme's mother started crying again.

"Saw who?Found what out?"said Padme

"They're not sure who it was,but your dad is being...h...hunted.The pilot saw him in thier ship when they had just taken off and it scared him half to death,he either lost control of the ship or there was engine trouble,the ship crashed,and the only one who got out safely was your dad's padawan,the pilot was killed and your dad just barely made it ."

"What did Dad do to be hunted?"said Padme now also shaking.

"Nobody knows."said Padme's mother.

 

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Padme woke up,got dressed,and went outside.She walked over to Sabe's house.

"Hey Padme."said Sabe

"Let's go play."said Padme




sorry,i can't think of much to write.

 

A story about young Padmé... looks interesting!

 

"Okay." said Sabe

"What do you want to do today,Sabe?"

"Lets play...Leapfrog!"

"Okay, I'll hop over you first."said Padme.Padme was on the ground for her fifth time and suddenlly a ship landed infront of her,ships were landing all around them.They got up ,ran for the forest,and hid.

 

Padme and Sabe saw King Veruna walk out to the ships,atleast three men were getting out of each ship,they all formed a single line and turned towards the king.

"Well?"said King Veruna.

"We tried to keep them away,but there's no stopping them,your Majesty."

"Who's fault is it?"

"No one's fault,sir."

"Tell me excactly what happened."Meanwhile Sabe,and Padme were still in the forest listening.

"We better go."said Sabe

"You're right,com'on."

 

"We were doing fine,but then our deflector shields started to short out,and their weapons were alot stronger than ours,as you can see our ships are in really bad shape,we couldn't dodge them anymore,and we ran out of laser cartridges,they were being really tricky about it,but they started cornering us,pushing us back,we thought it would be best to return."

"I thought you would be smart enough to bring EXTRA laser cartridges."said the king practically pulling his hair out.

"We did,sir,we were just using them up twice as fast!"

 

"What do you think they were talking about,Sabe?"

"I don't know,but it sounded like somebody's trying to attack Naboo."




"I thought you were better than surrendering to...them."

"We didn't have much choice,sir,and it's not surrendering ,there will be other battles,besides,there are so many other obstacles,it will take them a long time to actually get here,and attack."

"yes,but they will get here,I was hoping that you would defeat them now,in the first battle."

 

TWO DAYS LATER


"Alright, men they're coming back,let's move."They got in their ships,and took off.

"I see them,they're straight ahead!"said the sergeant over his comlink.

"Fire!"he said dodging one of the enemies lasers.

"Fire!"he said again.

"Look they're retreating"said a soldier over his own comlink.

"Great,but don't let your guard down."said the sergeant.

"Hey,what's that noise?"said another soldier

"They're coming up from behind!"said the sergeant.

"Fire!"

"Fire!"they hit a ship on it;s underside and it spun out of control.

 

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"Fire!"this time one of the lasers went strait through an enemy soldiers window

"Fire!"they missed,but an enemy fired,and hit the sergeants ship.

"Fire!"they hit a ship twice,and part of it burst into flames.

"Fire!"there was only one ship left.




When Padme got home her mother was still at work.

 

Padme decided she would get lunch ready,so she put a fruit salad together,and made two sandwiches.
Her mother got home in about an hour.


"Padme,you made lunch,thankyou."she said smiling.

In the morning Padme got dressed,and had breakfast,her Tutor would be at the house shortly.

 

"Hello,You must be Miss Padme Amidala."

"Well,I hope you didn't forget everything over the summer,there will be no reviewing ,i've heard you're very,very smart."

" I havn't forgotten anything Mrs..."

"Just call me Alicia."

 

"So,Padme where would you like to have your lessons outside,in your room,in the kitchen?"

"outside."they went outside and sat under a tree.

"Okay,I'm going to quiz you on politics,to see how much you know."

"Okay."said Padme

"Who is the current king?"

"King Veruna."

"Who is basically the master of all jedis?"

"Master Yoda."

 

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Yay!Two Pages!

 

Fire!they missed.

Fire!they hit the last ship,but it was still going.

 

Your write well, but the timeframe is a little confusing. Still, your dialogue is good, and I am interested in hearing what Padme and Sabe think about what they have overheard. How old are the girls in this story? Looking forward to more. --AWK

 

I agree, this is good!