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TFA Your Ideal Opening Crawl (First lines or entire thing)

Discussion in 'Star Wars: Sequel Trilogy (Released Films)' started by Darth_Articulate, Feb 1, 2013.

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  1. Darth_Articulate

    Darth_Articulate Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 1, 2012
    ...besides EPISODE VII and title.

    The first few lines of the opening crawl usually set the tone of the film and current state of the galaxy.

    Who can forget seeing "it is a period of Civil War. Rebel spaceships, striking from a hidden base, have won their first victory against the evil GALACTIC EMPIRE" and feeling ready to plunged into a great adventure? Who can forget seeing "turmoil has engulfed the Galactic Republic. The taxation of trade routes to outlying star systems is in dispute" and feeling ready to leave the theatre and sneak into a showing of Notting Hill?

    What is your ideal intro to Episode 7? I'd like to see something like this:

    It is a time of chaos. In the decades since the fallen Empire, divided loyalties have plunged the galaxy into constant warfare.

    Mav Edit: Editing the title to encompass any part of the opening crawl, not just the first lines.
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  2. Poor Greedo

    Poor Greedo Jedi Knight star 2

    Nov 6, 2012
  3. ezekiel22x

    ezekiel22x Force Ghost star 5

    Aug 9, 2002
    It is a time of galactic peace. The clone Emperor, Trioculus, Grand Admiral Thrawn, the Yevetha, Warlord Zsinj, Pete Fett, Waru, Kueller, the Yuuzhan Vong, Darth Caedus, and Abeloth have been thwarted by the forces of good. But a new dark darkness lurks in the dark side of the galaxy...
  4. fishtailsam

    fishtailsam Jedi Grand Master star 4

    Jul 30, 2003
    First Line?

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  5. Darth Chiznuk

    Darth Chiznuk Superninja of New Films star 6 Staff Member Manager

    Oct 31, 2012
    "It is a perilous time for the New Republic. Once united in democracy, the galaxy has been split in two by war."
  6. Revenge of the Dak

    Revenge of the Dak Jedi Knight star 1

    Nov 27, 2012
    Luke Skywalker
  7. Graphic

    Graphic Jedi Knight star 2

    Nov 18, 2012
    Dovahkiin, Dovahkiin,
    Naal ok zin, los vahriin,
    Wah dien vokul mahfaeraak ahst vaal!
    Ahrk fin norok paal graan,
    Fod nust hon zindro zaan,
    Dovahkiin, fah hin kogaan mu draal!
  8. I Are The Internets

    I Are The Internets Force Ghost star 8

    Nov 20, 2012
    Space, the final frontier.
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  9. mattman8907

    mattman8907 Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 17, 2012
    It has been thirty years since the fall of the galactic empire.
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  10. A Chorus of Disapproval

    A Chorus of Disapproval New Films Vampire Killer star 8 Staff Member Manager

    Aug 19, 2003
    You all have too much time on your hands...

    That can also be the first line of the opening crawl...
  11. Master Aizakku Rorensu

    Master Aizakku Rorensu Jedi Padawan star 1

    Feb 1, 2013
    I'd like to see a nice "It's been a time of peace in the galaxy... " type thing in the opening lines.

    And then go to a "But something is amiss... " and so on.

    And now we're up to speed and haven't missed a thing in 30 years. Pan down, follow a ship landing on Yavin 4, a new Jedi Academy. Luke Skywalker steps off the ship... and we're off.
  12. I Are The Internets

    I Are The Internets Force Ghost star 8

    Nov 20, 2012
    "It was a dark and stormy space."
  13. Darth_Articulate

    Darth_Articulate Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 1, 2012
    "Sssshhh. The movie started."
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  14. stellarmagic01

    stellarmagic01 Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 1, 2012
    It is a time of rebirth, renewal, and reconstruction.
  15. Darth Claire

    Darth Claire Force Ghost star 5

    Dec 21, 2012
    "And there came a day. A day unlike any other. Where the galaxy's mightiest heroes were united against a common threat. On that day.....the Jedi were born"
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  16. TiniTinyTony

    TiniTinyTony Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Mar 9, 2003
    It is a time of civil war,
    and renegade paragraphs
    floating through space.

    There's cool space battles,
    and the bad guy is the
    good guy's dad, but you
    don't find that out 'til the
    next episode.

    And the hot chick is really
    the sister of the good
    guy, but they don't know it,
    and they kiss. Which is
    kind of messed up. I mean,
    what if they had done it
    instead of just kissed?

    Angelina Jolie kissed her
    brother. Yeah, she did. You
    know it, I know it, and
    her dad knows it. That's
    why they hardly ever talk
    anymore. You can run away
    to Africa, but you can't run
    away from the truth.

    Oh, by the way, here's
    a tip for you: when this
    is over, go out and rent
    the movie "Gia." She's way
    naked in it, and makes out
    with another chick and
    everything. It's awesome.
    I stumbled across it late at
    night on HBO after I
    had just got back from
    hockey and I almost
    fainted. But I digest...

    Princess Leia was coming
    back from buying space
    groceries when this
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  17. Obi-Wan21

    Obi-Wan21 Jedi Master star 4

    Aug 27, 2002
    It is a time of repose.
  18. Ridley Solo

    Ridley Solo Jedi Master star 4

    Aug 27, 2010

    Beats me. Whatever they come up with I'm sure I'll like it.
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  19. Episode Swag

    Episode Swag Jedi Knight star 1

    Jan 9, 2013
    "If you can't read this then why are you here and not at the eye doctor?"

    But in all honesty, it should be something like this:

    "30 years of peace have followed since the fall of Palpatine's Empire. A new order of Jedi Knights led by Luke Skywalker ensure that this peace is kept."

    Something like that.
  20. Motterman

    Motterman Jedi Master star 2

    Dec 22, 2000

    Episode VII


    But seriously, I like how A New Hope just drops you in the middle of it all. I mean Episode III left off with the Empire building the Death Star, but you didn't now what that was in 1977...
  21. The Hellhammer

    The Hellhammer Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Nov 4, 2012
    "Here we go again."
  22. I Are The Internets

    I Are The Internets Force Ghost star 8

    Nov 20, 2012
    "The EU is DEAD. Long LIVE the EU."
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  23. Pearlsaber

    Pearlsaber Jedi Master star 4

    Jan 29, 2013
    Skywalker is Dead....



    Wouldn't put it past them though. :p
  24. Palpatine2016

    Palpatine2016 Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 12, 2012
    War! What is it good for? Absolutely nothin'!
  25. Spork111

    Spork111 Jedi Master star 2

    Jun 19, 2002
    Hey, I like it - reminds me of the opening of ROTS.

    "Victory! The Jedi have returned and peace reigns once more throughout the galaxy."

    I realize galactic peace isn't terribly dramatic, but if you're watching this right after ROTJ you need to at least acknowledge how awesome everything is at the end of that movie. However, you can tell a "but" is coming in the next sentence of the crawl. You know, something about how the dark side never really goes away. Or something.
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