Your Mother And I Have Met. (NJO Rebirth spoilers) AU

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  1. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Otay this is my first posted fanfic.It's based on what would have happend had Nom Anors deal.You probably will be a little lost if you haven't read Rebirth. Or not

    I own notta.
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    "I don't know you" Anakin said.

    "No,but your mother and I have met.I am Nom Anor and you may consider yourselves my captives".

    "We'd rather not jump to that conclusion if you don't mind" Corran said.

    "The odds are against you".

    "You must not know much about Corellians" Corran replied.

    "Don't be tiresome.You three have earned respect.If you were not infidels I might even call you warriors".

    "I can't say the same for you"Corran said."What about it Nom Anor? You and me?Man to man?"

    "Duel as you dueled Shedao Shai? And if I win the rest of you would surrender?"

    Corran turned to Anakin."It's the best we could hope for" he said.

    Anakin nodded.He glanced at Tahiri.She had a look of pure terror on her face andin her eyes.She squeezed Anakins hand and nodded also.

    "Tell my wife and children I love them if I don't make it"Corran said.

    Anakin nodded sadly.

    "Well infidel are you prepared to embrace death?" Nom Anor asked.

    "Yeah yours"Corran replied.

    With that the battle began.Nom Anor brought down his amphistaff Corran quickly blocked with his lightsaber.Parry, thrust, parry, thrust.And so the deadly dance continued.

    Meanwhile the other yuuzhan vong slowly closed in around Anakin and Tahiri.Tahiri noticed first and stepped closer to Anakin.

    Only a few feet away the battle raged on.Corran used the force to sumersault over Nom Anor.The executor turned about swiftly using his amphistaff to sweep Corrans feet out from under him. Another blow sent Corrans lightsaber flying across the room.

    Nom Anor stood over Corran."And now infidel you will die" he said and with that he brought his amphistaff down on Corrans chest.

    Anakin and Tahiri felt Corrans presense leave the force."Corran" Tahiri whispered.

    The vong warriors took hold off Anakin and Tahiris arms roughly.

    Nom Anor strode over to them.He stopped in front of Anakin."Now I have two jewels to give to the warmaster.Two valuable jewels.One who caussed so much destress at Yavin four and the other an escaped project".

    He stepped over in front of Tahiri.He smiled and said something to her in yuuzhan vong.She answered bitterely.He reached out and gently touched the scar of domain Kwaad on her forehead.

    "Yes Supreme Overlord Shimrra and Warmaster Tsavong Lah will like to meet you sweet Riina" he said.

    "My name is Tahiri" she said.

    "Take them to the shi and seperate and subdue them until we have reached our destination" he ordered.

    A warrior struck Anakin on the back of the head and another did the same to Tahiri.Suddenly darkness engulfed them both.

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    well thats all for now.did you like it?
  2. aninonymous Jedi Knight

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    Yeah I did!

    I´d really like to see what´ll happen next.


    :D :D :D :D

  3. Jedi_Jade-Skywalker Jedi Master

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    That was good, but you killed Corran.
  4. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    sorry about killing Corran.I had to make everything dramatic.and I know that a yuuzhan vong would kill their enemy.I'll be posting more today I think?
  5. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    okay.I'm not to good with sad parts so you'll have to excuse part of this post.lol.well here it is.

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    On board the Errant Venture Miraxe Horn strode down a quiet hall.She hadn't heard from Corran for some time.But this was to be expected.As she keyed in her code to go into her families quarters a wave of dizzieness hit her.She swooned and brought her hand to her forhead and quickly sank into a chair.Valin and Jysella were playing a holo game."Mom are you alright?" Valin asked getting up from where he was sitting.Then as soon as the words were out of his mouth his eyes widendand he gasped.Just a few feet away his sister did the same as she felt her fathers presense leave the force.

    "Come here honey" his mom whispered and she hugged him closely fearing that something would happen to him too.

    "This is good news " Warmaster Tsavong Lah said.The villip showed the warmasters slight grin."Have they been sedated"?

    "Yes warmaster Nom Anor replied.

    "Have the Solo delivered to me and take the female to Supreme Overlord Shimrra.He has a master shaper who will continue her work on the female.I have heard that it is former adept Nen Yim".

    "I serve you with my life and death" Nom Anor said.He crossed his arms in salute and the warmaster nodded.The villip folded into itself leaving Nom Anor to carry out his orders.He turned to an aid."Prepare to have the male moved to the warmasters ship.I will be delivering the female to the Dread Lord.Set course immediatly". With that he strode out of the chamber.

    Slowly Tahiri fought her way back into consiousness.She slowly opend her eyes.Her ached.She slowly took in her surroundings.She was in a small room.She was lying on a living bed The wall across from her was actually living bars.And standing behind those bars was Nom Anor.His steady gaze did not leave her for sometime.Finally he spoke."Soon Riina you will be home".

    "My name is Tahiri" she snarled."And my home is with the jedi not with the yuuzhan vong".

    "I think all that will change when you remember your real life.Your life as a yuuzhan vong and when you devoted yourself to our glorious cause".His real eye blazed."And when you once again meet master Nen Yim."

    Tahiris eyes widend at the mention of the shaper who had tormented her.

    "Yes she has been looking forwars to getting reaquainted with you.I see you remember her.Well before we present you to the Dread Lord we better get you some decent clothing" he said looking her over with disgust.THen he turned and strode away leaving her to her worries.

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    well thats all for now .I'll probably be posting a lot for a day or two seeing as I have the flu.well how was it?
  6. Jedi_Borme Jedi Master

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    I like this. Can't wait to read more.
  7. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    sorry guys I'll try to have more posted later tonight.I'm trying to get out of a rut that I'm stuck in.It's all Anakins fault because I have to let yall know whats happening with him.lol.
  8. aninonymous Jedi Knight

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    I hope you get Anakin to cooperate, so that we can have a new post.
    :p :p
  9. womp_rat208 Jedi Master

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    Hey, this is good. Interesting twist of fate. Hope you feel better. :)
  10. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    well I'm feeling better now(thank heavens) because school started monday.but thats kinda good because I finally just last night kinda got out of the rut.So expect more soon.
  11. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Sorry this post took so long. Here it is.

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    Ouch! Was Anakins first thought as he woke up. The back of his head ached with a dull pain. This is not good he thought as he looked around him. He was in a fairly large chamber that looked to made of raw meat.He knew better. He was on board a yuuzhan vong warship.

    "Great" he muttered. He glanced down at his hands to find binding jelly. Sitting up he tried to get it off. It was no use.
    Suddenly a door across the room opend. A yuuzhan vong walked in. It was the biggest one Anakin had ever seen. A deep groove ran across its foreheadand its lips were slit many times.

    Instantly Anakin knew who it was.

    Warmaster Tsavong Lah.

    "We have much to discuss Solo" Tsavong Lah rumbled.


    "Walk" the female yuuzhan vong attendent said giving Tahiri a gentle but meaningful shove.

    Tahiri stepped into a room. Of you could call it that. It was in fact a larger version of the vivarium membrane that she was held in at Yavin four.

    She turned to face the yuuzhan vong

    "You will be fetched later this cycle" the female said. She then turned and lrft.

    Finding nothing else to do Tahiri sat down. She noticed for the first time Nom Anor watching her from another part of the room. She made a face at him then decided to try to sleep. Eventually she fell asleep.

    A kick to her ribs brought her fully to consiousness.

    Nom Anor stood over her. "Lord Shimrra will see you now" he said.

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    I know its kinda short but I can't stare at the screen to long. I will try to post more soon. I'v got it written.
  12. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    I'll be posting more tommorow. Meanwhile please check out my other fanfics.

    Please Don't Let Them Find Me

    A Torn Family

    later.
  13. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Hey everyone who's reading this. I was wondering that if you are reading and not posting please just say hey so I know how many readers I have. Could someone give me some hints on how to make my writing better? Thanx bundles.

    Oh by the way I would also like to send my conolence to any of you are family of victims of Tuesdays tragedy. I myself have lost friends.
  14. mara_skywalker Jedi Knight

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    I've been reading, but dont think I have posted to this story yet. Good job so far, please post more.
  15. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Yes! Iam gonna post. Can't promise a long one though. But I don't know how short it will be either.
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    Rolling oveer and looking up Tahiri could see the guards further away. They had their weeapons at the ready. She decided not to struggle. Something in the back of her mind told her there wouldbe another time. Slowly she stood.

    Nom Anor locked hi gaze with hers. "If you wish to go through this with little pain I suggest you cooperate."

    Tahiri only glared at him.

    He motioned to one of the guards who moved forward and took hold of her arms."Heed my warning" Nom Anor said.

    With that she was led to Supreme Overlord Shimrras chambers.

    After much twisting and turning they arrived at their destination. Her escort opned the living door and forced her inside. She only got a quick glance of the figure seated on a large coral throne before her escort shoved her to the floor. She kept her eyes on the coral deck.

    "So young Riina Kwaad you have returned to us" Shimrra said."I believe there is someone who has missed you."

    As he said this a female yuuzhan vong stepped into the light. "Wlcome home Riina" Nen Yim said. She walked over to Tahiri and stopped whenshe was about a foot away.

    "This is not my home" Tahiri spat.

    In one lunge Nen Yim covered the distance between them and struck Tahiri across the face sending the young jedi reeling backwards.

    Tahiri brought her hand up to her face to find blood.

    "You have much to atone for Shimrra rumbled. "You slew many warriors at Yavin four, you killed your master, and brought humiliation to the yuuzhan vong".

    "Mezhan Kwaad was never was my master and the yuuzhan vong deserve to be humiliated after all the pain they've caused" Tahiri snapped.

    In the blink of an eye Nen Yim attacked Tahiri. She struck her across the face and then kicked her.Tahiri could only lay on the floor and tke the assault. Tears were now streaming down her face. When the attack stopped she tried to draw on the force to lessen the pain. But for some reason she could not.

    Noting the frustration on the girls face Nen Yim spoke."You will not be able to use the force. We have ways of stopping you."

    Tahiri could only glance up at the master shaper. She then let herself slip into unconciousness.

    "Take her to the masters quarters" Shimrra said.

    "When she is older Dread Lord we could use her for breeding. Then we will have all the jedi we need" Nen Yim said.

    Shimrra nodded.

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    "Where is Jacen Solo?" Tsavong Lah boomed.

    "I don't know" Anakin managed to say through the pain.

    "I will get this information from you" Tsavong Lah roared.

    "I am telling the trueth Anakin said. "He left a standard week ao. I haven't seen or talked to him since" Anakin said almost pleading.

    "He will come eventually when he senses the pain you and your female friend are feeling".

    "Tahiri" Anakin said. Man I had something going and then I messed it up and look where she is, Anakin thought.

    "Yes soon she will be one of us and she will fight for our Gods and for the glorious yuuzhan vong for whom she will always serve." Tsavong Lah said.

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    well thats all for now my sister wants the computer. did you like it?
  16. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Expect a nw post soon!

    R.J. I would like to meet a civil sock named Impatient.
  17. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Any one out there? {voice echoes.} Okay guess not. Shrugs . lol.

    Expect a new post soon.
  18. aninonymous Jedi Knight

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    Yes there is someone here .
    I guess I kind of lost track of this story. [face_blush]

    (So many good stories out there, so little time to read!!)

    :D :D :D

    Looking forward to the new post
  19. Qwi_Xux Force Ghost

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    Okay, I'm reading, too. Please, please let everything turn out all right...it's really going good, but if I were Tahiri, I'd be soooo depressed. She got away from the Yuuzhan Vong, now she's back! Gotta be the pits. :(
  20. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    Sorry I haven't posted lately on this. I'll try to have more up soon.
  21. Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master

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    Come on, we're waiting!!!



  22. Qwi_Xux Force Ghost

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    YAY!!!! Mayo, I thought you had ABANDONED this! I want more!!!! Pleaaaaaase?!?!?!
  23. Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master

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    More. I just found this. If you're still with us, post more!!


  24. Mayo_Solo Jedi Master

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    I'm still with you. I just thought everyone forgot this thread. There won't be a post this week. But I'll work on one.
  25. Lonewolf89 Jedi Grand Master

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