You're the daughter of who?

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  1. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    okay i tried to start writing this in my old thread but i decided that i might get more responses if i changed its name from "ideas for fanfiction" to "Your the Daughter of Who?"

    because more people might have some clue what it is about... well basically it is about the daughter of Palpatine, who is not evil by the way..

    so okay i will put in the beginning and as always i would appreciate if other people added to it because i am not always on and i like to have other people writing as well that is just the way i am i quess..

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    Luke sat in his room meditating. He had been relaxing and thinking to himself when he was brought out of his meditation. "Luke!" he opened his eyes and in front of him was the ghostly vision of Yoda. " Find the daughter of Palpatine you Must!". "Yoda what are you talking about?" before he got a reply yoda dissappeared. "Palpatine's daugter how could HE have a daughter?"

    Luke ran out of his small temporary room on the Millennium Falcon and looked around to Han and Chewie who were sitting down talking.

    "you all right? have a nightmare or something luke?" han said.

    Luke was breathing heavily and looked like he was going nuts. Han looked at Chewie and gave him a funny look of confusion.

    "Luke? HHEEELLLOO? Anyone home?" Han continued.

    Luke began to calm down and sat down with a plop and a sigh in an empty chair next to the chess table.

    "Palpatine has a daughter..." luke said.

    "What!! okay first i am thinking HOW? because he was like 100 years old, then why do you know?" Han said back and Chewie yelled in response.

    "im not sure" Luke said not giving them a straight answer.

    "All i know is that we have to find her and fast" luke told them.

    liea and lando walked out of the cockpit and came over to them.

    "this Hunk of Junk needs to land" Liea said.

    Lando had been looking at some worn out parts of the Falcon and Liea had been helping.

    "It is not a Hunk of junk!" Han complained.

    "That may be the case Han but i does need to land." lando told han.

    Han growned and went over to the the star maps on the computer.

    "the only planet we can land in withen 2 lightyears, with out dieing is this planet right here named Cinéa" he pointed to a tiny planet that was blue and green.

    "any intelligent life?" Luke asked.

    Liea looked at the screen. "there is intelligent life but they arent very advanced they have not even created land vehicles yet" Liea said with suprise.

    "well i quess they are going to have their first contact then, hope they dont try to kill us" Han said sarcastically as he set the coorodinates to the planet.

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    Location: Cinéa
    (Rainforest area)

    Kiara walked out of her hut and to the outer edges off her tribes land to a small waterfall on her favorite river. she sat on the edge and looked at the sky and her blonde hair flowed past her face. She sighed, she wanted to know why she was so different from her tribe. They had dark skin, she had light, they had brown hair, she had blonde. when she was little she had asked her "foster" parents why.. and they just simply answered:

    "Because you are special, and your mother looked like that, thats why"

    To her that seemed to be a good enough answer when she was 8, but at 19 she wanted to know more. She continued to look at the sky and felt that the answers were coming very soon.

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    How's that? C:)




  2. RogueJai Jedi Master

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    Very goood start, good idea, but *winces* please, please, plesse work on your grammar and spelling. :D:D:D:D More? I want more!
  3. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    i know.. i was rushing... sorry
  4. PadmeCoen1138 Jedi Knight

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    This is so good.

    Go read my sneak peak of a story!
  5. RogueJai Jedi Master

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    *clears throat* Sorry about the sneak-peak, but I tend to avoid things that blatantly state NC-17 in the title. :D
  6. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    i will write a little more...

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    The Falcon landed on the edge of a large rainforest on Cinéa. "We're Here,? Han said to no one in particular.

    Luke stood up and stretched.

    "I have one tiny little question? Since the people of this planet are so primitive HOW are we going to find parts to repair the ship?" Luke asked.

    "We will contact Mon Calamari or someone else and ask them to come and bring parts and help us fix the ship,? Liea said.

    Lando looked at Liea like a dog does when he's just peed on the carpet. "Umm... there is one thing I forgot to mention"

    Everyone looked at him and he lowered his head to the ground. "The circuits in the communications are fried too..?

    "WHAT!!" Everyone else yelled and Chewie growled.

    "So were stuck on a Planet with people who are probably savages and think we are the gods coming to visit them or something" Liea said.

    "Or were the ultimate evil and they want to kill us!" Han said cheerfully.

    "Well were about to find out cause they are coming right towards the ship!" Lando said and pointed to the view screen.

    There were a large group of male humans with dark skin and hair, wearing animal skin pants without any shirts on, looking at the ship and poking it with the ends of the spears they were holding.

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    Oh and by the way the women DO have something covering their "upper regions" unlike the men so don't worry..
    :)
  7. RogueJai Jedi Master

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    Good so far, much better spelling thanx!
  8. darth_flirt Jedi Master

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  9. Padme_Na_Sky Jedi Knight

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  10. PadmeCoen1138 Jedi Knight

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    Sorry, Jai, if you wanted some good, all-out porno you're in for a disappointment. I just wrote that to try and atract readers, like scribbling "secret" and "confidential" and "don't read" over just what you want someone to. Go read it.
  11. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    thanks for the ups! hey if someone else wants to add something to this fic im am fine with it because i have school and sports and everthing so i am only on after 6:30 on weekdays and on the weekends...

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    "Do you think we should open up the door and say hi?" Lando said.

    "I don?t know.." Liea said.

    "They feel like a peaceful people.." Luke said as he reached out with the force to the group.

    "Well we just better find out right now". Han pushed the button for the exit ramp, and grabbed his blaster.

    They walked out of the ship with Luke in front, then Han, Liea and Chewie bringing up the rear.

    The natives turned from the part of the ship in front of them they were poking with their spears and saw them. They ran over and pointed their spears towards them.

    "Well so much for being peaceful,? Han said as he looked at Luke.

    "Well they were at the time" Luke whined.

    The Natives started babbling in a strange language and pointed their spears at Han and Luke. "Umm..Take..US..To..YOUR.. LEAD-ER.." Han said pushing away the spear of one of them.
    Liea sighed "They aren't going to understand you any better if you talk to them slowly Han".
    Then an Older man in the group that looked about 50 years old came up to them and motioned the others to hold back their spears and they did as they were told.

    "I am guessing he's the leader, Chewie get 3PO" Liea said. Chewie growled in response and walked in the ship.

    A moment later inside the ship was the voice of 3PO saying "Don't push I am going..". And Chewie growled something and 3PO responded "Why I never!!?

    Then 3PO walked out of the ship "Oh my.." he said as he looked at the people and he walked down to the others. The Man started to talk in the foreign language and 3PO responded.

    "He wants to know who we are and why we have come?"

    Liea said, "We are from the sky and we needed to land here because our ship was broken". 3PO translated.

    "The sky? Are you gods?"

    "I knew IT I knew they were going to think that!" Han said.

    "No we are not." Liea said.

    "Would you like to stay with us till your sky ship is fixed?"

    "That would be most helpful thank you, what is your name?"

    "Ekalan" the man said.

    "Follow us" 3PO translated as they walked out into the forest. Then R2 rolled out of the ship after them.

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    Kiara watched the strange people walked towards the village and she some how seemed connected to them.

    They looked like her too!At least more than her tribe. Maybe they came from where her Mother was from!

    The only strange one was the tall hairy thing that growled. He scared her.

    But she was most drawn to the dirty blonde one with the serious expression on his face. She didn't know why but she liked him..

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    C:)

    - Owe-me-one
  12. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    i'm Soooooo.... Bored......
  13. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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  15. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    glad to see everyone is POSTING oh well i will write to myself and then complement myself on a job well done!

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    Luke walked in front of everyone as he and the others walked into the forest. There were all sorts of noises coming from all around. There were sounds of animals and the natives screaming in their odd language.

    Luke then out of the corner of his eye saw a movement of a blonde head practically sprinting farther into the woods. He stopped and reached the force out to the figure. The figure turned around and looked at him with a gaze that seemed to look right through him. He sensed that she was strong in the force but had yet to control them completely.

    She was totally different than anyone on the planet; in fact she was the complete opposite of the natives. She seemed to be more like him and the others.

    She turned back around and ran over to a shallow river and ran across it to the other side. She looked at him and took of into the distant wood.

    Liea walked over to Luke "What's wrong?"

    Liea approaching him with out him knowing startled Luke and he said "Ohh.. No..Nothing I thought I saw something in the woods".

    "Oh...okay" Liea said obviously not believing him and decided to ask him later.

    Luke caught up to the front of the group and looked back to where the girl had been.

    He wondered

    *Was this girl the daughter of Palpatine?*



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    Good Job!

    Owe-me-one great post don't know how you did it!

    Congrats!!!

    Wow! thanks!
  16. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    This a really good story and I can't wait for more!
  17. darth_flirt Jedi Master

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    Great story, keep posting!
  18. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    Hey.. okay i have nto been on all week and that is probally what is going to happen agian next week so someone want to help me a little?
  19. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    Thanks for the help knew you could do it!! (j/k)

    Well... Up... I quess...
  20. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    (Cinéa Late Night)

    Liea sat around a fire with the natives of the planet and took in her surroundings.
    *How are we going to get out of here?*

    Liea stared into the fire watching the flames as they burned away the wood. A little girl that looked as if she was 7 years old snuck up behind Liea and started to pull at her hair. "Ow!" Liea screamed and turned toward the girl. The girl shrieked and ran. "Hey wait I did not mean to scare you.." Liea said to her. The girl kept running and ran right into the legs of an older girl and hid her tear-filled eyes from Liea. Liea stood up and started to walk over to the two.
    Then Liea focused more on the older girl. Liea's eyes widened. The girl was the basically the exact opposite of all the other people on the planet. Her blonde hair being the biggest.
    She looked as if she was about 18 years old. She was staring right at Liea with no expression of anger or anything in fact. She let go of the littler girl and she ran off into a hut. The older girl began to look at Liea up and down. "Umm.. Hi?" Liea waved her hand slightly. The girl looked at her "Omm.. He..Hi" The girl copied what she had said struggling to get the word right. Liea laughed. "Liea.." Liea put her hand to herself implying her name and then she pointed to the girl. The girl concentrated on what Liea was trying to say and she opened her mouth.

    "Kiara."

    Liea smiled at her. and the girl smiled back.

    Then suddenly the sound of trees cracking a falling far away caught their attention. It sounded like a ship was landing!


  21. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    Okay the way i am writing this is that Palpy and Vader aren't dead so maybe you can say it's like in the middle of Return of the Jedi but not the same stuff is happening so i quess you can say its after RTJ but Palpy and Vader are alive... I dont know.. But Yoda's dead...

    Am i making any sense?

    Or am i like that all the time?
  22. empress of justice Jedi Master

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    Yeah...i think your makng sense....unfortunately I was already confused when I logged on...so...I can't say...

    -Empress
  23. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    well so far i am the only person writing this so much for it being a round robin.... anyone want to add? PLEASE!!
  24. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    Liea stood up quickly and ran toward the center of the camp to find everyone. She tripped on a root of a tree that had been right in front of her and land face first in the dirt. She pushed herself on to her knees and wiped the dirt off her face. She turned toward where the ship was landing and heard voices.

    *Are they part of the Rebellion or are they the Empire? What are we going to do...if it's the Empire what are they going to do to these people?*

    Fear flowed through Liea and she severely hoped that it was the Rebellion.

    Liea turned her head back to the camp. She stared right into the face of the girl who had said her name was Kiara. Kiara reached her hand toward Liea and she accepted it. Kiara pulled on Liea's arm to help her get back on her feet.

    "Come on!" Liea screamed at her waving Kiara to follow her.

    Kiara seemed to understand and ran with Liea to the others. Liea ran up to Luke as he was talking to Ekalan through 3PO. Kiara stopped dead in her tracks behind Liea. Luke looked over to Liea.

    "What's wrong?" Luke looked worried.

    "A ship's landing!"

    "Who's?" Luke asked.

    "I'm not sure and I am afraid to find out." Liea said with a fear in her eyes because she had a feeling it was not the Rebellion.

    Ekalan said something. 3PO translated.

    "What's is going on?"

    Luke looked to him "A ship is landing and we are going to find out if it is our friends or our foes."

    Kiara listened as 3PO translated for Ekalan. And she walked up to Luke and 3PO translated what she said

    "I'm coming."

    Luke looked at her and already knew who she was. His mind flashed back to what Yoda had said..

    *"Find the Daughter of Palpatine you MUST!"*

    He looked at her and said "No." Before 3PO translated she understood and gave him an anger filled look and started walking toward where the ship was.

    "STOP!" Luke ordered.

    Kiara spun around and punched Luke in the face.

    Ekalan started to scream at Kiara. He said in their language "What is wrong with you Kiara you never control your temper!"

    Kiara started towards the woods again, but this time in a sprint.

    Luke held the left side of his face where Kiara had punched him and said "Oh s**t."

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    ¡¿How you like them apples?!

    okay that was stupid i jsut like that saying
    how was it?

  25. Owe-me-one Perogi Jedi Master

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    I am beginning to think some damn Sith went and killed all the people that read this....

    "I'll get you, you Sith!!! HAHAHA!! No one does that to Owe-me-one Perogi's fans!! i'll find you!!"

    *Owe-me-one runs out of the room flailing her lightsaber over head wildly.*
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