You're the daughter of who?

I'm gonna try to write something tomorrow.

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well...i have been here since june or july so i should have more stars than i do i just am slow or something i dont know...

 

hmmmmmm.

 

Luke and Leia made their back to the natives' village. Upon their arrival, Threepio greeted them hurriedly.

"Master Luke, Princess Liea!" he said excitedly. "Chief Ekalan believes that Kiara has gone missing. No one has seen her!"

Before Liea could respond with diplomacy, Luke spoke up.

"The Emperor has her," he said, "translate that Threepio, see if he understands."

When Threepio finished speaking, Ekalan sobbed and screamed, letting himself fall to his knees. He understood.

Ekalan spoke rapidly in his native tongue. Threepio translated as quickly as he could.

"The Chief says that the golden-hair Goddess of the stars warned them of this day," he said, obviously confused. "And that they must protect Kiara with all their might."

"What Goddess?" Leia asked.

"She wasn't a real goddess, at least she said she wasn't, but she could move the wind and make fire and heal our injured." Ekalan said. "We have failed her . . ."

Luke was beginning to understand. "She carried one of these." Luke pointed to his lightsaber. It wasn't a question.

Ekalan nodded, eyes wide.

"A Jedi?" Han said, "But how?"

"She made us promise to take care of Kiara." Ekalan said. "She brought her from the stars when she was just a baby. We must find her, she is special, like her mother."

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Kiara, in her cell, never realized Palpatine had been near, but she had drifted into a lighter sleep and started to have dreams.

At first, she saw normal things that everyone dreams about, but as her dreams progressed, she saw something new . . .

*****

A woman, singing softly.

A man, sad looking, who's gaze kept returning to her.

Another child, no, two - babies, like her.

"Carmena," the man said. "I believe that the only choice you have is take Kiara some place safe and leave her."

Kiara was shocked, her mother! This was not a dream, but a flashback of sorts. She had never been able to remember this far back before.

/Carmena,/ she thought, /My mother's name was Carmena./

"Abandon my child!" Carmena cried. "I don't care who her father is, Obi-Wan, she is still mine, I can take of her . . . "

/She never wanted to leave me./ Kiara was fascinated.

"Palpatine will find her," the one called Obi-Wan interrupted, "and he'll do to her what he did to Ani."

"And what of Ani's twins?" Carmena pointed to the other two bundles. "Will you abandon THEM?"

"Leia is doing to live on Alderaan, Luke on Tatootine." Obi-Wan answered curtly.

"Separation?" Carmena was surprised, "Obi-Wan, have you no heart?"

"It is the best way to protect them." Obi-Wan answered. "The Darkside has a strong hold over both the twins and Kiara's fathers. We cannot allow it corrupt them, too."

Her father? What 'Darkside'? Kiara couldn't possibly understand.

"I'll do what I must, Obi-Wan," Carmena finally agreed, "for my daughter."

Kiara glanced over at the child next to her. He was older, but not by much, with soft blue eyes.

It was Luke.

"Hmm," Obi-Wan said, "a bond has started to form between those two. It may prove to be useful in the future."

Luke smiled at her.

*****

"Wake up, savage!" Vader's booming voice snapped Kiara out of her dream before she could understand its propose.

Kiara tried calling Luke again.

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okay, I know it sucks, but I tried. . .

 

Does no one care?

(bangs head against the wall)

 

hmm...

since it was a dream flashback thing is that how she knows what they are saying?..

i don't know...

well..i can't post for most of today but i might come on later...


nice post

 

Sorry for not posting sooner! I've been packing.

And, no it didn't suck, it was Excellent!!!!!

Anywho, I wont be near a computer with internet assess till the 3rd of Jan, so i wont be posting till then, I make it up to you some how... Any ways if you watch the 2001 Tornament of Roses Parade on Jan 1st you might see me. I going to be with lassiter High school and i'll be, unless they change my spot on the 2nd row of flutes 5th from the left.

Don't worry i'll probably persade some people to come read this.



UP!!!!!

 

Yay!

Someone replied!

I'm so happy!

Owe-me-one, yeah I was thinking about the whole language thingy too, I wrote something about it after Kiara woke up, but I didn't like the way it sounded, so I deleted it.

I guess she used the Force. . .

Or maybe its like that chic in Dances with Wolves, who still remembers English.

I suppose I should of explianed, maybe I will in my next post, or if you can think of a cool explianation . . .

 

that's okay.. you can... but wasn't she like not even 1? or something like that before she came there.... i dont know.. sure go ahead... and i was thinkin later that 3PO could teach her to speak english or just teach her the alphabet and then give her a translating thing she can read of for english or basic whatever it is called..

 

Sorry if I messed anything up.

But I think it makes sense in that weird Star Wars way, remember something like that happening to Luke in the RotJ book, he saw his mother and sister in a vision when he was talking to Ben.

I guess that's where I got the idea that Force people can see really far into the past . . .

And since I guess the Force works works though emotions and feelings, not words, the language think doesn't really matter a whole a lot.

Am I making sense?

Probably not . . .

 

yeah i quess so.. but there are probablly some words and things she doesn't know..


hey! Maybe we can write it like she was with her mom longer like till she was 3 or 4 and they had been hiding other places.. so it would be easier for her to remember how to speak english it was just take alot of thought and force junkage...

how bout that?

 

makes sense that way . . .

your story, your call, though.

 

okayeeday...

 

if you write that part you can put either your idea or mine it doesn't matter to me which ever fits better in the story as you are writing...

 

okay

 

ummmm,

up

 

errrrrrr

Just upping again.

Owe-me-one, will you be posting soon?

If not I'll probably do another tomorrow.

 

I will post when i get back up to Ohio..late tommorow.. so i will probably post wednesday

 

ah, good.

I don't think I'll be able to get anything out today, sorry.

My dumb@$$ father is over visting and he won't stop begging me.

 

errr, just uppin' again.

I'll try to do something today, but I kind of don't know where to go with it . . .

Hey, Owe-me-one: NO MORE STARS

MUWAHAHAHAHA

WE ARE EQUALS NOW!

and I don't have to make pointless posts.

"Oh, and what's this you're doing now, Athena?" some lurker shouts out.

Shut up you! If you aren't gonna post I don't want to hear about it!

Well, anyway Up!

 

Im sorry Athena.. i cant post today because i am sick and not coherant enough to produce a post besides this one to tell you im not able... maybe when i am better..

 

No problem.

 

I just discovered this story, and I am totally blown away!! This is such a great idea! I can't wait to see what happens!

Maybe no one posts here because they're jealous. ,

 

Oh, my . . . .

Somebody. . .

RESPONDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Is this real? I must be dreaming . . .

(fiants)