Zekk/Jaina Vignette Please Read!!! Sequel Posted, Co-written by Rogue11JS

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  1. CptnSolo2 Jedi Knight

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    Oct 20, 2002
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    Title: Will You
    Author:CptnSolo2
    Disclaimer: I own no characters. I am just a teen, I have no money, so please
    don?t sue.

    This is a vignette/poem from Zekk to Jaina.

    Okay heres the deal. I wrote this because i was really bored in class, but I originally wrote it for..other reasron, but I reead it and rewrote it and thought hey why not try something new. So tell me what you think.

    Please R & R.
    Do not be kind in the review. Just say what you feel about it. If you hate it, just
    say so. If you liked it, just say so. This is my first attempt at anything like this and I love constructive criticism. So, Express It!!!


    Will You

    Will you have me back?
    Even though I left you.
    Will you have me back?
    I did you many wrongs.
    Conversations turned
    to arguments.
    Why did I leave,
    you ask.
    The answer is now
    a blur.
    Leaving you was
    the hardest thing
    I?ve done.
    I love you.

    Will you take me
    back into your arms?
    Or are they oped
    to someone else?
    Will you laugh at
    my stupid jokes?
    Or have they been
    told by someone else?
    Will you love me as
    much as you
    used to?
    Or has your heart
    found another?

    If you?ve met
    someone else,
    I hope you live
    a happy life.
    But I will never
    be complete without
    you.
    You are the
    sun
    of my day.
    And the
    moon
    of my night.
    Can I be the same for you?

    Will you have me back?
    I love you, Jaina.
    Will you?


    Well, thats it. Remember to review.
    Thanx!!!
  2. CptnSolo2 Jedi Knight

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    By the way, I dedicate this to my friend Chanelle.
  3. CptnSolo2 Jedi Knight

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    Also if you wanna send hate or like mail: Yankee2s girl@aol.com
  4. Runaway_Shadow Jedi Master

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    Jun 25, 2002
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    Awww! That was nice! Very good. Too bad it was soo short!
  5. CptnSolo2 Jedi Knight

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    Thank you for your kind words. May be I'll add more. I have the same boring classes today.
  6. CptnSolo2 Jedi Knight

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    Up next: I Have (Changed to LIGHT)
    Jaina to Zekk poem/Vignette.
  7. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    Oct 3, 2002
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    very good...so sweet...looking forward to the jaina to zekk poem/viggie...
    up!
  8. Rogue11JS Jedi Master

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    Jun 27, 2002
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    HY YA CAPN>
    POST MORE!

    by the way am i still your co writer or did you decide to write this on your own
  9. jedi_bounty Jedi Master

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    Jul 26, 2002
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    That was awesome Cptn.

    Please write some more!
  10. CptnSolo2 Jedi Knight

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    Here's the sequel. But with a different name.

    Light

    Co-Written by Rogue11JS

    Why did you leave,
    Zekk?
    I was once willing to
    give everything
    for our friendship.
    Why couldn't you do the same?
    Or wouldn't you?

    You let me fall
    to the darkness
    And wouldn't light my
    way.
    Others at least tried,
    Zekk.
    And even though they failed
    At least two succeded
    And one of them
    I fell in love with
    He lights my way now,
    Zekk.
    And I'm glad.
  11. Rogue11JS Jedi Master

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    Jun 27, 2002
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    YEAHHH!!!
    Like it...

    Well so what if i helped write it

    Like it...
  12. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    Oct 3, 2002
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    great job Cptn (and Rogue? i'm taking it she co-wrote it...) i always did kind of wonder why zekk didn't even try to turn jaina back...i mean, i know he said that he was going to leave because if she ever went sith and started hurting people he wouldn't kill her...but it still doesn't make sense. i mean, he was downright cold to her and...mean, even. what's up with that? they were friends, he claimed he loved her and she turned him back... <sigh> well, njo did mess up a few tiny bits of YJK...<rolls eyes> such as their choice for destiny way's author (5 words: he only saw the movies! :eek: :eek: )

    jeesh, i practically wrote a fic. anyways...oh rogue, i posted my story...the one with jaina and zekk? sorry she's not drunk ;) [face_mischief] ...
    ~TJF
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