Saga "The flower that blooms in adversity is the most rare and beautiful of them all.”(minigamechallenge)

Mulan Quote Challenge (started by @devilinthedetails)
#5


The young girl huddled as far into the corner of the dark, confined, claustrophobic hole as she could; shrinking away from the unbearable darkness, from the void of nothingness that made this miniscule hiding place seem teeming with monsters and nightmares. Small sweaty hands were pressed tightly to her ringing ears, but her head still throbbed with gunshots and screams. Images of death burned the insides of her eyelids, leaving her breathless. Abruptly struck with the harsh reality of her utter and complete desolation, a cold, and unnervingly empty silence filled her soul. It kidnapped her starry eyed spirit and chained it down, leaving in its dreadful wake an unwanted orphan; broken, yet hell-bent on survival. Jyn Erso.

 

Superb and gripping use of the lovely quote, showing how a life-changing moment forged Jyn into a fierce survivor and into someone who felt shattered on the inside

 

Indeed very gripping and intriguing. And most important, it´s a Jyn Erso story! Hurrah to that!

 

Thank You all so much!!
I don't write too much so your comments mean a lot!

 

A powerful story that goes to show you don't need a ton of words to make something beautiful and impactful!

Great job!

One quick thing, when you are doing a challenge, it's usually best to put what your prompt was in the post (so in this case, your quote). If you won't want people to know before they read the story, you can put it at the bottom or under a spoiler tag.

 

AHHHH it’s so good! I really liked it!