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Characters ♡ The OTP & Pairing Thread ♡ | Challenge #33 is up: How They Met! (1/28, p. 90, #2231)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by Captain Rakkaus, Oct 5, 2015.

  1. ViariSkywalker

    ViariSkywalker Kessel Run Hostess and Champion star 4 VIP - Game Winner VIP - Game Host

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    I'll take 5, please! :D
     
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  2. Captain Rakkaus

    Captain Rakkaus Jedi Master star 2

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    @ViariSkywalker here’s no. 5:

    Rain has drops
    Sun has shine
    Moon has beams
    That make you mine
    Rivers have banks
    Sands for shores
    Hearts have heartbeats
    That make me yours
    Needles have eyes
    Though pins may prick
    Elmer has glue
    To make things stick
    Winter has Spring
    Stockings feet
    Pepper has mint
    To make it sweet
    Teachers have lessons
    Soup du jour
    Lawyers sue bad folks
    Doctors cure
    All and all
    This much is true
    You have me
    And I have you.
     
  3. Pandora

    Pandora Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Here goes.

    I will take #6.
     
  4. Findswoman

    Findswoman Fanfic and Pancakes and Waffles Mod (in Pink) star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    @Pandora here’s no. 6, which I can see you enjoying:
    You love me—you are sure—
    I shall not fear mistake—
    I shall not cheated wake—
    Some grinning morn—
    To find the Sunrise left—
    And Orchards—unbereft—
    And Dollie—gone!

    I need not start—you're sure—
    That night will never be—
    When frightened—home to Thee I run—
    To find the windows dark—
    And no more Dollie—mark—
    Quite none?

    Be sure you're sure—you know—
    I'll bear it better now—
    If you'll just tell me so—
    Than when—a little dull Balm grown—
    Over this pain of mine—
    You sting—again!

    EDIT: Oops! I did that one as myself rather than as the sock, because I’m out and about and it was just easier—but didn’t even notice till I started seeing mod-related check boxes and such… :p
     
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  5. Gabri_Jade

    Gabri_Jade Fanfic Archive Editor Emeritus star 5 VIP

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    My immediate reaction is "no, absolutely not, I have enough to write already," but let's be honest, I've been saying that since the Kessel Run, yet I keep signing up for things and somehow managing to write more stories, so why not keep the streak going :p Could I have number 1, please?
     
  6. Captain Rakkaus

    Captain Rakkaus Jedi Master star 2

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    @Gabri_Jade certainly! Here is no. 1:

    I, having loved ever since I was a child a few things, never having wavered
    In these affections; never through shyness in the houses of the rich or in the presence of clergymen having denied these loves;
    Never when worked upon by cynics like chiropractors having grunted or clicked a vertebra to the discredit of these loves;
    Never when anxious to land a job having diminished them by a conniving smile; or when befuddled by drink
    Jeered at them through heartache or lazily fondled the fingers of their alert enemies; declare

    That I shall love you always.
    No matter what party is in power;
    No matter what temporarily expedient combination of allied interests wins the war;
    Shall love you always.

    Now we have just nos. 2, 8, 9, and 10 left. Though if there’s demand, I can gladly find some more! :D
     
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  7. Kahara

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    Oh, these look fantastic! :D I can't wait to see what gets written. Can I have #9? :)
     
  8. Captain Rakkaus

    Captain Rakkaus Jedi Master star 2

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    @Kahara of course! Here is no. 9:
    Tell me,
    Was Venus more beautiful
    Than you are,
    When she topped
    The crinkled waves,
    Drifting shoreward
    On her plaited shell?
    Was Botticelli’s vision
    Fairer than mine;
    And were the painted rosebuds
    He tossed his lady
    Of better worth
    Than the words I blow about you
    To cover your too great loveliness
    As with a gauze
    Of misted silver?

    For me,
    You stand poised
    In the blue and buoyant air,
    Cinctured by bright winds,
    Treading the sunlight.
    And the waves which precede you
    Ripple and stir
    The sands at my feet.
    And now we’re down to 2, 8, and 10!
     
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  9. Gabri_Jade

    Gabri_Jade Fanfic Archive Editor Emeritus star 5 VIP

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    Well, dang, that's a perfect Mara poem. This might work [face_thinking]

    In addition to the mod challenge. And the two long WIPs. And then Vi's going to throw another KR at us all, helllp meeeee :p
     
  10. ViariSkywalker

    ViariSkywalker Kessel Run Hostess and Champion star 4 VIP - Game Winner VIP - Game Host

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  12. amidalachick

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    Congratulations to the winners of the previous challenge and a big round of applause for all the participants!
    :)=D=

    And because the new challenge looks amazing, and my sense of self-control and good judgment is as nonexistent as my muse, could I please have #10? If you would like to keep it open to give someone else who might actually write something a chance, though, I’d totally understand!
     
  13. Captain Rakkaus

    Captain Rakkaus Jedi Master star 2

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    @amidalachick certainly! I don’t mind handing poems out to any all takers, because I have a few in reserve in case I run out. Here’s no. 10:

    I loved you first: but afterwards your love
    Outsoaring mine, sang such a loftier song
    As drowned the friendly cooings of my dove.
    Which owes the other most? my love was long,
    And yours one moment seemed to wax more strong;
    I loved and guessed at you, you construed me
    And loved me for what might or might not be—
    Nay, weights and measures do us both a wrong.
    For verily love knows not ‘mine’ or ‘thine;’
    With separate ‘I’ and ‘thou’ free love has done,
    For one is both and both are one in love:
    Rich love knows nought of ‘thine that is not mine;’
    Both have the strength and both the length thereof,
    Both of us, of the love which makes us one.

    Just nos. 2 and 8 are left now! And I can add more if people would like. :)
     
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  14. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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  15. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Congratulations on your shared victory, @devilinthedetails and @Mira Grau! Those were most excellent stories, both! [face_love] =D=

    This new challenge looks awesome, too, and of course I am not even going to try to resist. :p May I have poem #8, please? [face_batting]
     
  16. Captain Rakkaus

    Captain Rakkaus Jedi Master star 2

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    You got it! Here is no. 8:
    If thou must love me, let it be for nought
    Except for love’s sake only. Do not say
    ‘I love her for her smile... her look... her way
    Of speaking gently, ... for a trick of thought
    That falls in well with mine, and certes brought
    A sense of pleasant ease on such a day’—
    For these things in themselves, Belovèd, may
    Be changed, or change for thee,—and love, so wrought,
    May be unwrought so. Neither love me for
    Thine own dear pity’s wiping my cheeks dry,—
    A creature might forget to weep, who bore
    Thy comfort long, and lose thy love thereby!
    But love me for love's sake, that evermore
    Thou may’st love on, through love's eternity.

    Ah, sorry, @earlybird-obi-wan just requested that one above! #2 is left, though if you'd like that one, however.

    And! It looks like we could use some more, so I have just added five more poems to the list, numbered 11 through 15. So let me know if you'd like #2 or one of those. :)
     
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  17. Mira_Jade

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    Oops! I missed that. :oops: I'll happily take #2, though! Thank you. :D
     
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  18. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    First, congratulations to the winners! And wow, those WENT FAST! Can I hvae #2 in the Love Poems roulette? [face_batting]

    earlybird-obi-wan got one of my most favorite love poems. :cool:
     
  19. Captain Rakkaus

    Captain Rakkaus Jedi Master star 2

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    Excellent! Here you go:
    To be in love
    Is to touch with a lighter hand.

    In yourself you stretch, you are well.

    You look at things
    Through his eyes.
    A cardinal is red.
    A sky is blue.
    Suddenly you know he knows too.
    He is not there but
    You know you are tasting together
    The winter, or a light spring weather.

    His hand to take your hand is overmuch.
    Too much to bear.

    You cannot look in his eyes
    Because your pulse must not say
    What must not be said.

    When he
    Shuts a door—
    Is not there—
    Your arms are water.

    And you are free
    With a ghastly freedom.

    You are the beautiful half
    Of a golden hurt.

    You remember and covet his mouth
    To touch, to whisper on.

    Oh when to declare
    Is certain Death!

    Oh when to apprize
    Is to mesmerize,

    To see fall down, the Column of Gold,
    Into the commonest ash.
    Oh, d'oh, sorry! Mira juuuust claimed #2, above—but I just added five more, numbered 11–15, so you are welcome to any one of those. :)
     
  20. ViariSkywalker

    ViariSkywalker Kessel Run Hostess and Champion star 4 VIP - Game Winner VIP - Game Host

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    @Findswoman, would you like one of us to pick a number for you, so that you can join in the fun, too? [face_batting]
     
  21. Findswoman

    Findswoman Fanfic and Pancakes and Waffles Mod (in Pink) star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Oh sure, why the heck not. :D You can do the honors if you like, Vi! :)
     
  22. ViariSkywalker

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  23. Findswoman

    Findswoman Fanfic and Pancakes and Waffles Mod (in Pink) star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    All righty, thanks so much! :D Looks like I got:
    Far, we are near, meet in the rain
    which falls here; gathered by light, air;
    falls there where you are, I am; lips
    to those drops now on yours, nearer…

    absence the space we yearn in, clouds
    drift, cluster, east to west, north, south;
    your breath in them; they pour, baptise;
    same sun burning through to harvest
    rainfall on skin, there, far; my mouth
    opening to spell your near name.
    I like it, I like it! :) All those cloud and breath images, plus the importance of the name at the end, has me thinking Gand thoughts... [face_thinking]
     
  24. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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  25. Captain Rakkaus

    Captain Rakkaus Jedi Master star 2

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    Of course, Nyota! I won't lie—as soon as you mentioned that you were a Barrett Browning fan, this is the one I was secretly hoping you'd end up with, because it is the one and only, the absolute classic...
    How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
    I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
    My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
    For the ends of being and ideal grace.
    I love thee to the level of every day’s
    Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light.
    I love thee freely, as men strive for right;
    I love thee purely, as they turn from praise.
    I love thee with the passion put to use
    In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith.
    I love thee with a love I seemed to lose
    With my lost saints. I love thee with the breath,
    Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,
    I shall but love thee better after death.

    OK, we've got nos. 11, 12, and 13 left now—anyone? :D