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Saga A Tapestry Wide and Wonderful - A/P romance, AU - updated 9/3

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Mar 19, 2007.

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  1. Aiel

    Aiel Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I'm getting good at nabbing first replies! [face_dancing]


    The door chimed and Padmé found that she was holding her breath. When the door opened Anakin was standing there in black leather pants that hugged the muscles of his legs and a casual white shirt left open at the chest just enough to tantalize her already overactive imagination.

    Wow! ;)

    Then he looked away and stared out at the waterfalls.

    And she could breathe again.


    I loved that part, it seemed so like their unspoken attraction in AotC as well.

    Great job and thanks so much for the PM! [:D]
     
  2. VA_Parky

    VA_Parky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well, here I go again - melting into a big pile of mushy goo. I can't seem to help it! There's just something about these two that I adore - and with the way you write them, I'm utterly defenseless! [face_blush]

    What a sweet chapter. I love seeing Padme like this - all unsettled and ruffled. It's perfect and so unlike her AotC character (with the exception of a few moments). It's really given me hope that maybe she and Anakin will get their happy ending this time. Maybe. Yes, RotS made me paranoid, why do you ask? :p

    Whew! What chemistry! Is it just me or it hot in here? ;)

    Three cheers for Vadey!! The best update yet!
     
  3. dianethx

    dianethx Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Padmé could not help but follow the trail of sweet juice and wondered what he would do if she leaned over and licked it away from his chin. Her gaze flickered up to Anakin?s eyes and she saw an answering hunger in those blue depths.

    Then he looked away and stared out at the waterfalls.

    And she could breathe again.


    Me, too. This is very.... interesting. That they are both feeling the pull toward each other. For some reason, though, I thought it was sad that Padme had given up politics. It was something that seemed to be in her blood in the movies.

    Great job.
     
  4. dtdang2

    dtdang2 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OOOH I love A/P mush without too much heavy stuff weighing them down (ie the darkside looming). They can finally have their mush without having to hide!!! I hope it works out for them this time.

     
  5. BrightFeather

    BrightFeather Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I'm really enjoying this, and I hope you update again soon. Good part, Vadey!

    Bright
     
  6. randomangel22

    randomangel22 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Feb 11, 2006
    Is it just me or is it getting a little hot in here [face_mischief].

    Anakin in leather pants and open shirt =P~...too much :p!

    Great post!
     
  7. ROTSFan

    ROTSFan Jedi Master star 4

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    =P~ [face_love]

    Well done as usual Vadey...

    Padmé could not help but follow the trail of sweet juice and wondered what he would do if she leaned over and licked it away from his chin. Her gaze flickered up to Anakin?s eyes and she saw an answering hunger in those blue depths.

    Then he looked away and stared out at the waterfalls.

    And she could breathe again.


    Answer the hunger, Padme....:D I really like the way you had this mirror their picnic in AOTC. They deserve to have these "dates" in any scenario. Very sweet.
     
  8. emerald54

    emerald54 Jedi Knight star 1

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    I love the nervousness that she shows while waiting for him, it's so typically date-ish.:)

    Anyways, apart from my made up words, I loved the post, and hope you update soon.

    Emerald
     
  9. Leia_Sith_Lady

    Leia_Sith_Lady Jedi Youngling

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    Oooh!! This story is really picking up. Good job as usual.

    I love the new and improved picnic scene.

    Is is getting hot in here or is it just our fav couple? [face_thinking] :D

    =P~ I think not only Padme but all the females reading this are happy about Anakin's choice of clothing. Although most of us wouldn't be waiting like Padme is. [face_batting]
     
  10. DragonLotus

    DragonLotus Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Oohh, the yearning and hunger these two have for each other...something tells me it's gonna get hot and heavy soon! [face_mischief]

    Anakin in leather pants and open shirt...hot! =P~

    Oh, and thanks for the PM!



     
  11. FitJedi

    FitJedi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well then, talk about some serious chemistry going on, wow! I love how Padme is trying to talk herself down from this one before the picnic. Loving it!
     
  12. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    All I have to say is

    BLACK LEATHER PANTS!!!


    Even without the pants it would of been a great chapter!!!
    Wait...without the pant?!
    I gotta go, I feel faint...;)
     
  13. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Lovely, romantic update

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    And I see Padme is still in a bit of denial about her feelings for Anakin.

    Okay, I have to confess, I'm stuck on imagining Anakin standing there in black leather pants that hugged the muscles of his legs and a casual white shirt left open at the chest

    =P~ =P~ =P~ =P~

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=

     
  14. Darth_Marrs

    Darth_Marrs Jedi Knight star 4

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    Feb 24, 2006
    You packed more romance into that one post than George the Creator was able to get into two movies. Great job!
     
  15. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 30, 2005
    awwww, how cute [face_love]! he is so romantic!
     
  16. Myshia

    Myshia Jedi Youngling

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    Dec 26, 2006
    Wow! I'm hooked to this story! :) [face_love]

    Can I be added to your PM list?
     
  17. Blue_Milkshake

    Blue_Milkshake Jedi Youngling star 3

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    ?But I don?t want to talk about that. This is a moonlit garden, surely we can think of things to do other than talk about politics?? There was a challenge in her voice that he was more than willing to meet.
    ?Like what??
    ?Use your imagination,? she whispered and moved so close that he could feel her softness pressed against him.
    ?I?ve got a very good imagination,? he warned her as his lips moved closer.
    ?I was hoping you?d say that.?


    WOOT![face_love]

    ?Well, Mom, I?ve gotta go,? Anakin said, leaning forward to turn off the screen. ?Talk to you later.?
    ?Anakin Skywalker,? she warned. ?Don?t you dare cut me off without telling me what you?re talking about.?
    He grinned widely. ?Oh, I met Padmé again.?
    Then he turned off the screen.


    :eek: Naughty boy! You're mom may not be nearly as tall as you are Anakin, but she's certainly tall enough to box your ears real good.

    Fabulous update! I can't wait to find out what Padmé's been up to all these years.
     
  18. Blue_Milkshake

    Blue_Milkshake Jedi Youngling star 3

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    When she heard he was coming to Naboo she had told no one of her plans to try and meet him. Worried that he might have forgotten her, she had practiced what she would say over and over again.
    Then she had seen him and every coherent thought had left her head.
    Eleven years and seven months?
    He had known how long it had been since they had said farewell. The fact that he had known had made her heart beat a little faster. All right, a lot faster.


    [face_love] Yippie![face_dancing]

    And, yeah, thank you for the black leather pants.=P~

    So, Padmé's a teacher, huh? Tell me more!
     
  19. rb657062

    rb657062 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Can I be added to the PM list? After Tendrils of Time, I found this. [face_love]
     
  20. Jedi_Master_Cazz

    Jedi_Master_Cazz Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Awesome chapter! Gawd! The chemistry between them is amasing! Phew!

    More must we have!

    Cheers_Cazza@};-
     
  21. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost star 4

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    The relationship between Anakin and Padme in this is absolutely breathtaking. They have so much chemistry. It's like the jump off the page they're so real.

    Terrific writing. =D=

    I can't wait until Anakin's next conversation with his mother, though. I'm sure he's going to get an earfull. [face_laugh]

    Looking forward to more.
     
  22. Tatooine_Ghost

    Tatooine_Ghost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 24, 2006
    loved it. can not wait for the next post.
     
  23. Tatooine_Ghost

    Tatooine_Ghost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    loved it. can not wait for the next post.
     
  24. Jeditheskyisblue

    Jeditheskyisblue Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Yay Anakin and Padme together.
     
  25. Darth-Buddy

    Darth-Buddy Jedi Knight star 3

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    I love your story, please add me to your PM list. Thanks!
     
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