Someone didn’t want me to be found; though I couldn’t have said why, I had a feeling it was me. Interesting. I like the way you worded the sentence as well as it's implications. My pack was drenched. My clothes were soaked. Not an auspicious way to start a new life No, I suppose he's not the coolest cucumber in the salad. “What happened?” “I fell in the pond!” Genius alert. “My name is Lando Calrissian; I’m a smuggler.” LOL! Oh, and I'm sure he looks just like Jabba the Hutt. Next, he'll be Vader and His Dancing Bunnies! Chapter 2 a flash of recognition fluttered through my mind and then was gone. Must be very frustrating to keep getting glimpses and then having them vanish. I’m counting on you came a whisper across the Galaxy Intriguing. So long as the next words weren't... to deliver my package on time. Finally, the droid attached several dozen small sensors to my head with a goopy paste, And now it's... electro-shock time, unknown Human male! Lol! even if someone was looking for me, they’d never find me That, in and of itself, might not be a bad thing. You never know who's looking for you. Chapter 3 above the image of a buxom, scantily-clad green-skinned Twi’lek Huh... Methinks I've been there before. It butted its head against my shoulder and rubbed against me affectionately. It doesn't know if it wants to fight him, or... do something a lot more interesting. a bowl of some odd gray paste, which was presumably also food but looked as if it could be used to patch starship hulls. It's nutritious AND helps bond metal at the molecular level. Mmm-mmm, good. but then again, the tooka was talking to me, so maybe I had. Good point. Whereupon Pouncer decided that my pillow also looked nice and curled up behind my head to “share” it. Ah, such a cute kitty. Ok, read through the first 3 chapters. Getting late. So far, I'm enjoying this a lot. Looking forward to the last 2 chapters (I'm assuming this is a completed story, or is there more to come?) and finding out who this fellow is and what he needs to do. Really good thus far; very descriptive.