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Saga Back to the Beginning (Won Best Poem - The Saga 2004 Fanfic Awards)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by AERYN_SUN, Mar 11, 2004.

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  1. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Back to the Beginning
    by obi's girl

    Summary: Sabe prays somehow, some day, she will be reunited with Obi-Wan.

    Wherever I go,
    whatever I do,
    whatever I become..

    It all leads back to you,
    and the day you entered my life.

    A brave knight,
    and a handmaiden in disguise,
    our fates were bound together
    as I will forever be bound to you.

    We've been separated for so long,
    but it doesn't matter, does it?
    Because you'll always have a part of me,
    and I you.

    Whatever becomes of us,
    wherever you go,
    whatever you become,

    Love will lead us back to
    the beginning,
    back to into each other's arms.

    I pray the fates will allow us that.
     
  2. Hananiah

    Hananiah Jedi Master star 4

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    Very emotional poem Aeryn, full of quiet hope, I just saw Sabe in Juliet's place looking at the stars praying for her true love. I love it
     
  3. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    thanks, Hananiah. i just felt in the inspirational mood.

    ~aeryn
     
  4. Reihla

    Reihla Jedi Master star 3

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    May 17, 2002
    What a nice break from the longer stories! You can feel Sabe's loneliness too, as well as her optimistic hope for the future.
     
  5. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Love will lead us back to
    the beginning,
    back to into each other's arms

    I love those lines.

     
  6. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    SO BEAUTIFUL! WAHHH HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    thanks diamond and crystal but my personal favorite,

    Wherever I go,
    whatever I do,
    whatever I become..

    It all leads back to you...


    ~aeryn
     
  8. Fate

    Fate Jedi Master star 3

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    Apr 22, 2003
    Beautiful. [face_love] I love poetry, and you did an incredible job, AERYN_SUN. :)
     
  9. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    thanks fate :D actually, i don't write poetry too often. the only time something as good as this one comes out, is when it's inspired.

    ~aeryn
     
  10. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Up!

    ~aeryn
     
  11. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Up!

    ~aeryn
     
  12. Reihla

    Reihla Jedi Master star 3

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    Congratulations Aeryn! Well deserved. :D
     
  13. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thank you, Reihla.

    ~aeryn
     
  14. Gina

    Gina Jedi Master star 4

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    Congratulations, AERYN_SUN! :)


     
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