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Beyond - Legends Balance Point (post-DJ, TK, Teneniel Djo, J/TK, one-poster - '04 Choice Short Story )

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Amidala_Skywalker, Oct 26, 2004.

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  1. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Jedi Grand Master star 9

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    ::betaish does happy dance.::

    Is anyone surprised?
     
  2. Anastasia_Fel

    Anastasia_Fel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That was beautiful, I feel privaliged to have read this amazing piece of work
     
  3. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Thank you very much, Anastasia_Fel!

    Just another UP!

    Ams [face_love]
     
  4. Smuggler_Shidakis

    Smuggler_Shidakis Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh, wow.

    This is beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I'm blown away.
     
  5. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Smuggler: Thank you very much :). I?m flattered.



    [link=http://fanfic.theforce.net/fanfic.asp?action=view&ID=1472]Balance Point[/link] has been archived! Thanks!

    Thank you also to those who nominated BP for Readers? Choice Short Story, Readers? Choice Canon Interpretation, Female ? Tenel Ka, Readers? Choice Non-Jedi, Female ? Teneniel Djo and Readers? Choice Best Author. I am extremely grateful.

    Ams [face_love]
     
  6. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    My little BP needs another up ;).

    Please follow the link to the Archive if you?re interested.

    Ams [face_love]
     
  7. DathomiranAuthor

    DathomiranAuthor Jedi Knight star 3

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    I already read this in the archives--it's so awesome!

    I love the description and imagery. Your language flows beautifully.

    May the Force be with you!

    -Dathomiran (a.k.a. Tasia Solo of Dathomir)
     
  8. RK_Striker_JK_5

    RK_Striker_JK_5 Jedi Grand Master star 7

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    Not bad, Amidala. Not bad at all.

    Tenel Ka's my favorite character, and I think you did her justice here.

    That tentative sequel sounds intriguing. And congrats on getting this archived. More TK fics need to be archived.
     
  9. C3P0_R2D2

    C3P0_R2D2 Jedi Master star 2

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    Purdyful!
    Me likey!

    ((I'm on a sugar high, so kinda crazy and sometimes bad grammar.))
     
  10. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    DathomiranAuthor: Hi again! Great to see you on JC. Thank you! :) I?m flattered.

    RK_Striker_JK_5: Thank you :). I couldn?t agree more. The Archive doesn?t even have Tenel Ka as a character choice on their submission application ? yet they have Tahiri and other more obscure characters. Go figure. I?d definitely encourage TK writers to submit! I?d jump at reviewing them.

    C3PO_R2D2: Nice username ;). Thanks!

    Ams [face_love]
     
  11. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    A boost for my award winner here!

    Thanks! :) BP won Readers? Choice Short Story and Readers? Choice Non-Jedi, Female ? Teneniel Djo. Great recognition for a character often overlooked.

    I?m very appreciative! :)

    Ams [face_love]
     
  12. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    We at the YJK index, have noticed that your story fits our criteria for admission. If you would like your story to be part of the index please PM the YJK_Index or Trickster_Jaina_Fel with the following information:

    Title: (with separate URL)
    Your screen name, and the sn's of any co-writers, with separate URLs for each profile:
    Summary:
    Keywords (ie: main characters, pairings, genres)
    Author's Notes (if you have any)


    Thank you
    ~Rose~
     
  13. Jade_Max

    Jade_Max Jedi Master star 5

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    *claps* Wow, Amsie, you really nailed Tenel Ka's character. And yes, this style is defiinately not your normal style, but it's perfect for her character.

    Very, very well written and beautifully done. Wonderful to hear it got accepted into the archives! Congrads!

    I've been postponing responding to this until I had time to sit through it and read... and it was well worth the wait.

    I have to admit, I had trouble picturing Tenel Ka and her mother, but the Jacen scene was exactly in character for him beind stuck between what he was and what he was becoming.

    All in all, I was very impressed to see you step out of your comfort zone. Well done!
     
  14. Happy_Hobbit_Padawan

    Happy_Hobbit_Padawan Jedi Master star 4

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    *delurks*

    I read this a while ago, Ams, and I really liked it. I don't read BytS much at all, so I can't say that I understand the characters here as well as other readers. :p But I really liked the .... *thinks of word* ... tone or feel of the story. People above have described it as surrealistic, weightless - and I agree. I loved how you managed to write that feel to it. :D

    And congrats on winning awards with this one. It was well-deserved. =D=
     
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