Saga Beautiful Light- a Jedi Purge challenge

We hear his words and we find comfort in them. The shouts of the men are drowned out by the sound of Gorn?s voice. We ignore the men and their weapons. I feel something slam into my back and I fall to my knees. I see the children falling one by one. Abruptly the song is cut short and I feel Gorn fall beside me.

I manage to open my eyes one last time and I see a slight smile on Gorn?s face. He?s gone home to the Force. I?m going there, too. What a beautiful light it is?

The ending was just amazing. Lovely viggie, very touching. Nice work.

 

DANGIT! I had hoped no one would write about the children, just because I knew I would start crying!

Beautifully, wonderfully written. I can't really express any more than that. That was just... wow... Excellent job.

 

So I will die bravely, letting my sacrifice show these Imperial troops why the Jedi were revered for so many centuries. Not because I am brave, but because I am afraid.

Loved this line, it said much about the Jedi and this particular Jedi Master. Very well written, quite sad. Palpatine has a lot to answer for, huh? Good work.

 

tries to stop the tears by taking s-l-o-w breathes and thinking about good things..

but that was so...real. and sad! makes me think that they better be careful how they handle the purges in ROTS--or they better start a deal with Kleenex!

beautifully written, VL!! just beautiful.

 

VaderLVR Congratulations on your win for this as "Best Response to a Challenge" and.....everything else! (I can't even remember all of them ).

 

Applauding here.

 

Congrats, VaderLVR64!

 

Wow! I see now why this one an award. So much power in so few words. Wonderfully done. Congrats, VL.