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Saga - OT Dark Chasm ( ESB/OT AU - Luke, Vader; drama/adventure; fancomic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Starith, Apr 5, 2022.

  1. Starith

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  3. earlybird-obi-wan

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    I hope Luke will get his arm back and stay in the light. Darth Vader in red is beautiful just as Luke is in golden yellow
     
  4. Starith

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    ^Thanks again. I did make Luke's ''spirit form'' design, but Vader's is from the comics, so I can't take much credit.

    Next page...


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  5. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Luke healed and now? A dark assistant (just like Sidious when he enters)
     
  6. Starith

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    ^It's actually this guy from Rogue One:

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    I just wanted to say thanks to those who mentioned Dark Chasm, and anything else I've made, on their favorite lists for the Favorites Festival. It wouldn't have surprised me if my stuff wasn't mentioned at all, but it was. Thanks!
     
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  9. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Luke whole and healthy and with his lightsaber back. What will he do. The attendant is nice
     
  10. UltramassiveUbersue

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    I love this story! Beautifully illustrated, too.
     
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    ^Thanks very much.

    New page. Got to do some action scenes...


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  12. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Vader giving lessons. Nice action
     
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  14. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Those faces. Luke with a red lightsaber
     
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  16. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Is Vader trying to turn Luke?
    Nice to see you continuing this graphic story
     
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    the bickering between Luke and Vader is quite entertaining. Love to see this again
     
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    Great art and a clever premises. Makes me miss the infinity comics.
    Will be keeping tabs on this.
     
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  20. Starith

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    Thanks, all.

    Got one more page for 2023... Enjoy!


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    Honestly, it's Luke's confusion that has been the primary point of entertainment so far. He has absolutely no idea what to make of everything that's happened. :p
    Of course, Vader has every advantage right now, but it's hard not to notice how he seems to have softened with Luke in his control.
    Makes one wonder if in this timeline the Dark Lord is as likely to turn to the light by the end as Luke is to the dark.
    Or maybe this is one of those stories where they find a third way.
    In any case I'm here for it.
     
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  22. earlybird-obi-wan

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    I hope they find the third way, Stay in the light and defeat the Sith. Again wonderfull graphics
     
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    Good to see this continue!
    Nice reference's to the EU, Luke is so far out of his comfort zone it never stops being hilarious, Vader remains unimaginably patient and cautious with his son.
    Threats of sedation aside.
     
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  25. earlybird-obi-wan

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    Father and son getting to know each other. You can see the character of Anakin in Luke.
    More?
     
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