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Saga Diary of a mentor, diary 2008 challenge completed 28-12 with a note by Leia

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2008.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    No and some wild roosters in our village act as alarmclocks. And even the wild birds nesting in my garden awake you before dawn beginning to feed their babybirds.

    MandalorianLegecy I just started reading you story today and I finished now, all have been great updates, Kepp it up, I wanna read more.

    You will see more and thanks for reading.[:D]

    Kelia
    Awwww...I'm glad to see the black fluffball found a home.

    And a most interesting job.

    Great update

    That black fluffball was inspired by a black rooster I see every morning going to work and a chick with a white eggshell as a hat.

    AzureAngel2 *sings "Early morning" from AHA and grins!*

    Superb job as usual! Very funny!

    Thanks all for reading[:D][:D]

    Entry 14
    Today I went with Alwin to the small town of Alladea to get supplies from the spaceport.

    Alladea has a spaceport and it is not as hectic as the one in the capital. The Jeditemple sends regularly transports to their agristations and most land near the agristations but the transport Cas was expecting would be landing at Alladea spaceport.

    It was a red and white Jedi transport and was carrying droids and some technical supplies. One of those supplies was at my request and it is for Alwin. And the other package is for me.

    When we returned to the agristation we unpacked the two items and the Alwins face lighted up: a training lightsaber and for me one as well.

    They are training-lightsabers; because the fully working sabers can only be constructed after mastering of making the components and travelling to Ilum for a lightsaber-crystal that the Jedi-apprentice will see in his quest.

    I am teaching him the ways of the Jedi and lightsaberpractice is part of that. As an initiate he had those in the Jeditemple but I have a feeling that it can become handy for him if he continues the practice.


     
  2. MandalorianLegecy

    MandalorianLegecy Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Cool Alwin is learning more Lightsaber tactics, Strong he will be....

    Very good Update, looking forward to the next update....


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  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm glad to see Alwin will be able to train with the lightsaber.

    I just hope he never needs the skills.

    Great update

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  4. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Another lovely update! =D=
     
  5. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    I fear Alwin will need those skills...
     
  6. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    MandalorianLegecy Cool Alwin is learning more Lightsaber tactics, Strong he will be....

    Very good Update, looking forward to the next update....




    VaderLVR64 Another lovely update!

    AzureAngel2 I fear Alwin will need those skills...

    He uses those skills but that's after he has met other Jedi. In my diary of a firefighter and diary of an exile those stories were told in 2007.

    Thanks all for reading and here is the next post.

    Entry 15

    A week ago we went to Alladea for the fair and some fun.
    The Alladea firedepartment was giving a show and Alwin saw that and became enthralled by it.

    Seeing this Firechief Mick Robi asked us to come with him to the firestation and we saw all the equipment they are using.

    Alwin was asking about everything and showed his great knowledge about many items.

    Mick Robi was impressed and asked him if he liked to stay for an entire shift in the firehouse.

    Alwin didn?t have to think twice about that and I returned to the agristation alone.

    A day later a red firetruck came to our station and the first who exited it was Alwin.
    And that got us a Caf-break with exiting stories from Alwin and the firefighters.

    After that we showed them the station and Alwin gave a demonstration on Nazir.


     
  7. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Awwww...how nice of the Fire Chief to allow Alwin to stick around.

    He probably had one of the best days of his life.

    Great update

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  8. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm glad for Alwin! :D

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  9. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Kelia Awwww...how nice of the Fire Chief to allow Alwin to stick around.

    He probably had one of the best days of his life.

    Great update

    VaderLVR64 I'm glad for Alwin!

    Yes and this firefighting will come in handy in the future.
    Thank you for your great support[:D]

    Entry 16
    An early wake-up call from an arriving transport and by early I mean 3 in the morning and that?s before any activity like Nerf-milking is needed. Alwin was awake of course because he knew who was coming. Master Ekiway and he will take a new Nerf home for the Children?s farm. One of the old Nerfs had died and he wanted to replace her.
    And it is Alwin?s birthday and I think Master Ekiway remembers that as well.
    He did and Alwin got holovids and a beautiful multitool from him.
    Alwin is 14 and looking younger than his age suggests.
    We spent a nice time with master Ekiway telling us about the life in the Jeditemple and only the Separatist Movement is troubling me.
    And the Senate is bickering as usual and the newest item on their agenda is the Militairy Creation act.
     
  10. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Nice update! :D

    And the Senate is bickering as usual and the newest item on their agenda is the Militairy Creation act.

    This should be interesting! =D=

     
  11. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    he Separatist Movement is troubling me.

    As well it should!

    How very sweet of Master Ekiway to replace the nerf that died.

    Great update

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  12. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Phew, just 1 up-date behind!

    *caught up with you!*

     
  13. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Kelia: the Separatist Movement is troubling me.

    As well it should!

    How very sweet of Master Ekiway to replace the nerf that died.

    Great update

    AzureAngel2 Phew, just 1 up-date behind!

    *caught up with you!*

    Yes the separatist movement is troubling and this is in the next update and those who follow.
    All thanks for reading and your kind reviews

    Entry 17for the may challenge

    Something horrible happened more than a week ago. In the span of less than one hour I felt many of my friends becoming one with the Force. More members of the agristation had felt that too and Alwin was pale as snow. He said that Jedi had died.

    In the evening we knew the reason why because I contacted Jika Bale.

    On the distant planet of Geonosis war had broken loose between the CIS and the republic.
    That was after 200 Jedi had gone there to rescue Obi-Wan, Anakin and Padme Amidala.

    Obi-Wan had been on a mission to search for the assassin of Padme and had stumbled on first a Clone-factory on Kamino and after following the assassin on the Trade federation conspiring with other planetary leaders and a former Jedi Count Dooku to overthrow the republic.

    Obi-Wan and Anakin were injured and in a transport towards the Jeditemple.
    Jika Bale will keep us informed about the events happening.

    Today he contacted me and told me that Obi-Wan was in the healer?s ward because he had neglected his wounds.
     
  14. VaderLVR64

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    It's interesting seeing these events from an "outsider's" view.

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  15. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Yes, I agree, it´s very interesting.
     
  16. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Obi-Wan was in the healer?s ward because he had neglected his wounds.

    That's typical Obi-Wan for you.

    I'm sure he was so busy trying to help everyone else, he just forgot about himself.

    Great update

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  17. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    VaderLVR64 It's interesting seeing these events from an "outsider's" view.

    AzureAngel2
    Yes, I agree, it´s very interesting.


    Yes helping Anakin coming to terms with the loss of his arm and reporting to the council and helping his other friends. That's Obi-Wan, trying to avoid the healers.

    All thanks for reading and here is the next update, revealing more.

    Entry 18

    Jika has sent me a message from Aaqu and it is about Obi-Wan?s stay in the healers ward.
    He was again trying to avoid the healers and master Aaqu sensed his distress.

    Seems Dooku had injured him more badly than he first thought.

    Yeah Dooku.

    He was Jinn?s master and I have never seen a more stern master.

    Dooku. I don?t like that guy.

    He had always that aura of I am the best Jedi there is. And he took Qui-Gon shortly after his 10th birthday

    And what did he say when Jinn was ready for the trials that made him a knight?

    This: Gui-Gon repeated it word for word when he met me shortly after his knighting ceremony.
    "Your flaw is your need for connection to the living Force. Qui-Gon, the galaxy is crowded with beings. The Jedi Order is here to support you. Nevertheless you must carry the following knowledge in your heart. You are always alone, and betrayal is inevitable."

    Betrayal huh, Dooku betrayed all Jedi by joining those seperatists.

     
  18. KELIA

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    Dooku betrayed all Jedi by joining those seperatists.

    And unfortunately never saw the error of that choice.

    My heart broke for poor Qui. The last thing he needed at his knighting ceremony was a lecture on his supposed flaws.

    Great update

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  19. VaderLVR64

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    Dooku betrayed all Jedi by joining those seperatists.

    How true. :(

    Great update. =D=
     
  20. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    I sense dark times ahead!

    The Jedi Order is here to support you. Nevertheless you must carry the following knowledge in your heart. You are always alone, and betrayal is inevitable.
     
  21. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    VaderLVR64 Dooku betrayed all Jedi by joining those seperatists.

    How true.
    :(

    Great update. =D=

    AzureAngel2 I sense dark times ahead!

    The Jedi Order is here to support you. Nevertheless you must carry the following knowledge in your heart. You are always alone, and betrayal is inevitable.

    Thank you all for reading. Magin has been a friend of Qui-Gon since his initiate days and that was why he was writing like this in his diary.
    The next post is more about the Clone-wars and there are a lot more to come about that.

    Entry 19

    They have a name for this war that is splitting the galaxy apart.
    Clone wars!
    And why?

    Most of the beings fighting in this war are clones. Living beings bred for one purpose; to fight and die. And who is gaining from producing those clones.

    Yep, the Kaminoans.

    Jika has sent me a holo of that planet and the clone factory.

    Cold sterile environments and all stages could be seen from lump of cells to the training of the adult and only 10 year old clone.

    No happy childhood for those humans.
    Yeah humans, I see them as living humans.

    And the clones opponents?
    They are produced on Geonosis and other separatist worlds.
    I have seen a holo taken by one of the clone-commando?s of Geonosis.

    Hot steaming environments.
    Also mass produced.

    My thoughts about the clones were interrupted when Alwin came in and told me about an invitation to go to the Firedepartment on Alladea.

    Yeah he has waited a long time for that but chief Mick Robi has agreed to teach him the first basic classes to become a firefighter. He will be gone for two days each week and that will last almost 6 months.

     
  22. KELIA

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    No happy childhood for those humans.

    I don't think very many beings even considered life from the clone's point of view

    :_| :_|

    Great update

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  23. VaderLVR64

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    No happy childhood for those humans.
    Yeah humans, I see them as living humans.


    How sad, and true. Which makes it even more tragic. :_|

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  24. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Yes the Clone soldiers are humans and that's what made it so tragic.

    Thanks all for your kind review and here is the next update

    Entry 20

    Life on Alderaan is just going as it was before the war. Only our ruler ? the kind Bail Organa ? is more away to Coruscant to discuss the events in the Senate. He is very nice and I know he dislikes that war as much as the Jedi.

    Ordered by the supreme chancellor they are now becoming generals.

    Generals, have you ever seen a Jedi as a general?

    For thousands of years we served the galaxy to make it a nice place to live in.
    We negotiated between warring factions and almost every time peace was the outcome.
    Now with those clone wars there are two parties: the Confederacy of independent systems or CIS and the Republic.

    Even Obi-Wan has become a general and he has been to Kamino and to Ohma-D?un a moon of Naboo where the Gungans had established a succesful colony and were living in peace with a group of miners.

    I have seen the holo?s Jika Bale sent me of those Gungans.

    Swampgas is the weapon of the CIS, a deadly and a biological treat.

    Master Glaive, Zule Xiss, Obi-Wan and Anakin had been able to stop Durge and Asajj Ventress.

    Naboo and countless other worlds were saved.
    Zule Xiss and Obi-Wan ended up in the healer?s ward.

    Master Glaive was killed.

    War is dirty.
     
  25. VaderLVR64

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    Naboo and countless other worlds were saved.
    Zule Xiss and Obi-Wan ended up in the healer?s ward.

    Master Glaive was killed.

    War is dirty.


    How sadly true. :_|

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